ChaVi FF: Tere Sang Yaara- Epilogue on Page 18

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Plot- This is a FS(Four or Five Shots). This short story is about the alternative wedding track from what it was shown in the show. The story starts from SD telling CK in the mandap that he finally got her(as said in the show). He gets a big shock in the next moment. V arrives at the wedding with RG and witnesses everything. The duo are unnoticed by others. RG insisted V to come with her and nothing will happen with him. What had happened at the wedding that shocked SD?
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Epilogue
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Prologue

The wedding of CK and SD started.

"Rajkumari, I told you that I will get you, whispered SD to CK who was still quiet.

"You don't know what will happen to you now, thinks CK.

After some time:

"Chandrakanta, ye sab kyun kar rahi ho tum? asked Kamini angrily.

"You don't talk between my family matters, replied CK angrily shocking Kamini.

"Main meri beti ko saari zindagi kunwari rakhunga par tujh jaise neech insaan se shaadi nahi hone doonga, said Jai Singh angrily shocking everyone with his statement even CK.

After some more time, CK wearing her dark pink jacket dress(which she wore when V as masked man threatened her with knife) is holding SD at sword-point. SD's soldiers move forward but her aiyyar Devgiri stops them with the threat that rajkumari will kill SD if they move. V who was watching all this from far with RG. No one has noticed them till now.

"Tell your uncle to hand over his kingdom to me or see his son dead, said CK to Jai Aditya.

"Rajkumari Chandrakanta, chachaji is innocent, said JA.

"Do what I said or you too join your brother in jail. Then I myself will tell him, threatened CK.

After some time, RG arrives with V when SD and gang, Kamini and Mayuk are not there.

"Maa, said CK shockingly.

"What are you doing here? asked Jai Singh angrily on seeing V.

"Maharaj, he has saved me. Please, let him stay here for some days, said RG.

JS and CK looked at each other.

"Okay, he can stay here, said JS.

"We will talk later. Champa, Chapla, take Maa inside, said CK.

JS, Champa and Chapla took RG inside.

"Chandrakanta, I am sorry, said V.

"No, you don't need to say sorry. It was not your fault. You only came for tilism key so you did what you could to get it. It was my fault. I am sorry for getting attracted to a man for the 1st time in my life. You are here as maa's guest so remain that only. I can forgive you for coming here to get tilism key but I can't forgive you for being the reason of Shiv Dutt entering my life. Pitaji suggested my alliance to Shiv Dutt to protect me from you after what you did at Jwaar Ghaati. Because of you purposely losing the sword fight Shiv Dutt started pursuing me to marry him. You had attacked my maa's maternal kingdom Jwaar Ghaati, said CK coldly and went inside.

"Stay away from rajkumari, said Devgiri firmly, "During the fight for senanayak, I thought you truly care for rajkumari but all you cared was for only tilism key.

"Devgiri, at least you understand me. You were my friend, said V.

"I was you friend but not after what you did with rajkumari, said Devgiri and went inside.

Scene shifts to CK and JS talking. V is overhearing their talks.

"I should have listened to you, pitaji. I should not have gone to Yaksh Mahal to meet Shiv Dutt. Not only I met Shiv Dutt but also I met Virendra there, said CK.

"You have still not forgotten him na? asked JS.

"Its not easy to forget someone but I will move on, replied CK.

"Beta, at your age its normal to for any girl or boy to get attracted to anyone. Same way, you got attracted to Virendra. May be, you will get attracted to some other guys too, said JS.

"For the 1st time, I am seeing a father telling such things to his daughter, said CK.

"There is no wrong in me talking this with you. You are my daughter so I can advise you on this too. You remain as normal with Virendra as you can, smiled JS.

"Pitaji, only me, Champa, Chapla and Devgiri knows that you only pretended to give death sentence to Virendra because you wanted to see who is happy with him dying, said CK.

V was shocked on hearing this as everyone thought that he was spared only due to CK.

"Killing someone who did no wrong is a sin, said JS.

"Now what next? asked CK.

JS hands CK a sword and said, "Kill them. I want you to start afresh after so much tension.

"Okay pitaji, said CK, "Before sunset, I will do this work.

JS kisses her forehead and hugs her.

"Tum ek din aage jaogi, beta, said JS as they broke the hug.

"Kitna aage, pitaji? asked CK with a smile.

"Bahot aage, replied JS with a smile.

V has tears in his eyes seeing the scene. He is moved by JS's love for his daughter when his so-called father was only using him. In fact, he is not his father but someone else who has separated him from his real family for his selfish needs. He has no clue about his real family.

CK and V comes face to face while walking around the palace.

"I hope you have not planned to murder all of us, said CK bitterly.

"I don't want to justify the sins I have done till now but I want to say one thing to you that not everyone is lucky to have a father like Jai Singh, said V and left from there.

CK stood there registering his words.


A/N: What had happened that the tables have turned on SD during the wedding? How come CK is in regular dress when she was in the bridal wear earlier? Why CK told Kamini not to interfere in her family matters? Is CK right in not forgiving V for being the reason of SD coming in her life? Who is V's real family whom even V don't know? Will CK and V ever become friends again? Who is JS telling CK to kill? How will SD's father react on knowing his son being captured by CK and CK asking to hand over his kingdom to her?

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome start
Interesting concept
Love it
Continue soon
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Fantastic Juhi.πŸ‘
Awesome start.
Thanks for PM.😊
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome start

Interesting concept
Love it
Continue soon


Thank u😊
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Originally posted by: RubabNoor11D

Fantastic Juhi.πŸ‘
Awesome start.
Thanks for PM.😊


Thank u😊
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 6 years ago
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Just read this prologue of the FS

Awesome it is.
U gave a different twist to the Sd, CK wedding sequence
I hope CK would forgive V soon but not before teaching pyar ka lesson πŸ˜›
Waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: Neenzm


Just read this prologue of the FS

Awesome it is.
U gave a different twist to the Sd, CK wedding sequence
I hope CK would forgive V soon but not before teaching pyar ka lesson πŸ˜›
Waiting for next part


Thank u😊
CK agreeing to marry SD looked fake to me because it was SD who had only troubled her from weeks not some random guy. CK gave one more reason to V to fall in love with her after this wedding incident of turning tables in SD with othersπŸ˜ƒ.
CK forgave V for playing with her feelings to get tilism ke but she thinks him responsible for SD entering her life so she can't forgive him for that. Right now, only RG is V's support.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very interesting concept
Wow chandrakanta captured that demon shivdatt
Finally chandrakanta met her mother after age
It was obvious that chandrakanta isn't forgive viru for what he did to her
So chandrakanta father faked giving viru death penalty in front of everyone
Which left viru shocked & amazed seeing father daughter bond
Viru felt sad knowing his so called father only use him
Hope now chandrakanta mother will tell viru his true identity
Continue plz
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Originally posted by: cuteariya


Very interesting concept Thank u😊

Wow chandrakanta captured that demon shivdatt
CK did this with the help of her dad, Champa, Chapla and her male DevgiriπŸ˜ƒ

Finally chandrakanta met her mother after age
Yes V brought her back😊

It was obvious that chandrakanta isn't forgive viru for what he did to her
She forgave him for using her for tilism key because in the show he never trapped her in his love but she herself fell for him. She can't forgive him for being the reason of SD entering her life due to his attack on Jwaar Ghaati and him seeing her face.

So chandrakanta father faked giving viru death penalty in front of everyone
Which left viru shocked & amazed seeing father daughter bond
Viru felt sad knowing his so called father only use him
Jai Singh was not a stupid and cruel king to punish any person unnecessarily especially the one who saved his daughter's honour. He did the drama to see who are happy with the dying of the man who saved his daghter. He is understanding more now that what is actually called father's love. He is difference between his and CK's father.

Hope now chandrakanta mother will tell viru his true identity
CK will not her let reveal his true identity to him for some reason

Continue plz

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