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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Chapter 10
waaaooo they are finally understanding eachother,s worth that they cant live without eachother..
superb update..
Sheetal deserves worse !!

Ok i got a good place for Chapter 11 too.
and honestly telling you
I JUST LOVEDDD THIS CHAPTER...
SOOO MUCH
MAY BE THIS IS ALL WE WANTED TO SEE IN IPKKND
ARNAV,s REPENTANCE
HIS CONCERN TOWARDS KHUSHI
AT THE SAMETIME USING HIS ASR MIND TO TACKLE SHITALL
AND
ABOVE ALL KHUSHI AS A MATURE WOMEN..A COMPLETE ARNAV,S KHUSHI..
OHH M GETTING STARTED AGAIN LOL
LOVED THE CHAPTER..
SUPERBBB👏👏
Edited by mbbsrocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Amazing chapter 10!!

Finally we have our Khushi back!

Loved how Arnav got her jalaebis even though he doesn't like these unhygienic foods, he just did it for his wife..

Loved how Arnav defended his wife without any doubt in his mind and gave Sheetal a piece of his mind! She really got what she deserved..

Khushi was really close to knowing the truth about the file and now she has her proof as what what transpired..

Brilliantly written, Anjani!!
Loved how you expressed the feeling...

Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Res😉
For chapter 11

Can't wait...

Edited----

Wonderful update!!!

Arnav realized that he had left no stone unturned in the amount of insulting he had done before to Khushi. Now he will make sure that no one ever does it again.

Love how Khushi voice soothes Arnav right away and releases his stress instantly.

Love how you expressed Arnav feeling here...

Finally she will tell him what she has found out about Sheetal... Such a cliff hanger...

Hope you re doing well, Nidhi, beautifully written...

Thanks for the pm...

Eagerly waitng for next...


Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
loved the update loved arnav realizing how may time he had insulted khushi the same way that shital had done and even worse loved how it and it true even if you don't see a child and it yours no matter what there is always a connection glad he is using his brain and is going to have shital investigated and glad she will be moving out well hope the leech really does leave but knowing she will try something loved that khushi knew he needed her loved how he gave her control to show him how she feel and can't wait for their conversation about what went wrong awesome update thanks for the pm
Edited by dumas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
good one!!! eagerly waiting for the next chapter... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Absolutely wonderful chapter...loved it 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Nice to have you back Nidhi. Hope you and your little ones are doing fine.

Very nice update. Arnav's resolve to not to let anyone insult Khushi is very well written. You have written the exact same incident I was thinking while reading the first half of this update (Lavanya calling police to Shantivan). I liked it when Arnav thought Khushi should also take control in their relationship.

That was a very bad place to stop the update :-). Now eagerly waiting for next chapter when Khushi reveals Sheetal's fraud.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Awesm update...
Arnav decided no one can including
him never will insult her...
thnkgod Sheetal selected d apartment
nd will shift there...
khushi knws d truth behind d meeting..
waiting for d next part now...
fabulous chappy
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
sheetal,arghhh i knw it khushi will find it out nd there she is wit all d evidences nd proofs all ready to expose sheetal's nasty deeds to him..!

Loved it how arnav realised wat pain khushi had gone through wen he had pointed his finger on her saying dat she is a gold digger nd he decided to not let anyone point out a finger on her not for she is Mrs.Raizada but she will get her due respect for d gem of a person she is..!

Den her understnding dat her hubby is not in right mood nd so she tried to cheer him up..!

D kiss she initiated to let him knw abt her love nd arnav made her lead it coz he wanted to make her feel dat she is d one who is d one to take d lead of their rltnship..!

Nd finally d last part where she asked arnav whether she trusts her or not nd d way he answerd her was simply beautiful..!

Their love,ahhh its eternal..! ❤️

beautiful chappy

loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Thanks for the PM
You made my morning.
Loved the chapter.
Like the trust in the relationship.
Beautifully written.
😊

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