Arshi: Making Khushi Mine I (THREAD 3)

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Tulips123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

haaayeee!

awesome update

luved it

can't wait for next one

Thanks for updating

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Venkata

@venkata

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Excellent update. Happy that Kushi said yes to marriage

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Omg...omg...omg... Atlast she told YES... Yaahhooo... 👏 [:D/] ...
Khushi's thoughts were written beautifully... You always do a spectacular job in that area... I never get bored but only a wanting to read more...
Thanku for such a beautiful update...
Last sentence was just... Wow...
I was imagining all these & getting happy...
I really wanted to hear his love confession also...
Hope that will happen soon...

Plz continue soon...
Waiting...

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Oh wow...Khushi is so mature. This update has added another layer to her character. She has no one to turn to. She is young and inexperienced, yet she thought through the whole thing with such maturity...loved this.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

I missed a couple of chapters.and i just read them.your narration is simply amazing.its fun and interesting.
I fell in love with the chapter where arnav takes care of khushi.oh,what i wouldnt give to be in her place. 😆 my heart goes out to arnav where he thinks about himself and akashs' life..
and the proposal.. 😆 slow khushi taking out the words from the event manager 😆
And the present chapter..its was lovely..khushis' doubts and apprehensions were so real and just..lol she telling him that he wouldnt know when love would hit him.hehehe..
And the last line..*faints* may we get another kiss? Pretty please. ;)

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

awesome... n thelast dialogue of arnav... mind-blowing...

:) :)

though it does sound nt so gd.. n kind of forcing... bt it still is the sweetest part of his character :)

i mean it just feels how much he needs her in his life :)

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

OMG! What an amazing update you rolled out here. I was anxious till the end to know if she said "Yes". And YAY! she agreed. Loved Khushi's dilemma and Arnav's sincerity. Hope they get happiness together.