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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a new Jai-Bani Fanfic

Preview:
Bani is getting married. Jai comes there and stops the wedding tells everyone that Bani cannot marry someone else as she is his wife.

All are shocked and Bani is stunned as she has never seen him in her entire life but Jai knows every detail about her life. How?

Part-I

Bani is getting married at her house. The entire house is decorated like a new bride. The barat has come and warmala has already happened. The groom is someone Bani's parents has selected. This is an arrange marriage.
The atmosphere is electric and all the guests are rejoicing and having a great time.

The time has come for pheras. The groom is sitting at the Mandap and is waiting for Bani to come.

Bani comes with followed by her mother and sister Rano. Bani is wearing a red saree and is looking like a princess she has expensive jewellery around her neck. She is looking like an angel.

People are talking about the groom being so lucky that he is getting such a beautiful bride.

Bani comes and sits at the mandap. The Pandit is now chanting all the mantras.

Just as the pheras are about to begin, Jai Walia the a business tycoon, a well-known face comes to the wedding his eyes are searching for someone.

Finally, when his eyes see the person he is looking for he is shocked to see Bani is getting married.

The mysterious caller had given him the right information. From the looks of it, it appeared that the wedding ceremony was yet to commence.

Jai started to cover the distance between the mandap and him at a rapid pace.

Just as Bani and the groom are stand up for the pheras Jai stops them.

All the guests, including Bani's parents, Groom's parents, Rano, the groom and Bani himself stand there wondering who he is?

Jai says, "Yeh Shaddi nahi ho sakti. Tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahi ho Bani?" ( This marriage cannot take place. Why are u doing this to me Bani?

Bani is dumstruck she has never seen this man before. She is speechless. Seeing her reaction, her father says-"Tum hota kyun ho meri beti se yeh sawal karne wala? (Who are u to ask such questions to my daughter?)

Jai looks surprised and says, "Yeh aap Bani se kyun nahi poochta ki main uska kya lagta hoon? Kya rishta hai Bani aur mera? Bani tum chupp kyun ho batati kyun nahi ki sacchai kya hai? (Do not ask me ask Bani what she means to me? Ask Bani what is my relationship to her? Bani how can u remain so quiet why don't u tell them what is the truth?)

Bani has is numb she has no clue what is talking about? She cannot understand why he is doing this to her? Who is he?

Bani's father says- "Tum hi kyun nahi batate ki kya rishta hai tumhara meri beti ka saath?" (Why don't u tell me what is ur relationship with my daughter?)

Jai looks at her father and says -"Theek hai. Main batata hoon kya rishta hai Bani ka mujshe. Bani meri patni hai. Hamari shaadi ho chuki hai."(Ok!!! I will tell you my relationship with Bani. Bani is my wife. We have already married each other.

There is a stunned silence in the entire wedding ceremony. Bani's parents to groom parents to the groom and Bani herself cannot believe that this man had called her his wife. She had never seen him before.

Bani finally says- "Papa, yeh jhoot hai main isa jaanti bhi nahi hoon. Aap mera vishwaas kare." (Papa, he is lying, I do not know this man. Please trust me.)

Bani's father tells her- "Main jaanta hoon ki yeh jhoot bole raha hai? Kya saboot hai hi yeh tumhari biwi hai?" (I know he is lying about this whole thing. He says to Jai what proof there is that his daughter is his wife.)

Jai takes out the marriage photographs and the marriage certificate that proves Bani is his wife.

Bani's parents and Bani is shocked to see the wedding pictures and the marriage certificate the signature on it is of Bani that she cannot believe it is not fake.

But how is this possible?

There is a stunned silence now.

All of them are looking at Jai and Bani.

Preview for next part-
Jai further proves his wedding to Bani giving details.
Bani is shocked.
Jai takes Bani with him.
What is Jai's motive?

Love to know ur comments.

Pls tell me should I stop or continue.

Keep smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey Manish

wow wht a rocking start yaar. very well written. waiting for the next part soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i like ur intro.....its something different....I wonder how bani doesn know about it....it cant be amnesia...because rano is there too...what is happening...continue soon

CK❤️
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow yaar, what an interesting start!! excellent cliffhanger, please please please update soon!!! 👏 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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haila 👏
continue soon dear
awesome fanfic
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Posted: 19 years ago
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can't wait to see what happens next this is really good.
plzzz continue
i'll be waiting
thank
ks
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Posted: 19 years ago
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luved the way it started
can't wait to read what happens next
pls cont soon
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Thank you for all ur lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-II
Jai and Bani are looking at each other in stunned silence. The entire wedding ceremony has come to a complete standstill after what has just been revealed.

Jai breaks his silence, "I prove u futher that she is my wife."

Jai calls two more people. Bani sees them from a distance she is unable to know who exactly they are. By the time they come in full view she is stunned to see two of her childhood friends coming to testify about her marriage and this shocks her further.

Even her parents cannot refute these two girls. They know them very well. Bani has these two girls are liks sisters and there are no secrets among them.

Bani's parents are looking at her and saying like what is happening? Bani is equally confused.

Jai says- "Bani kya yah dono tumhari bachpan ki friend nahi hai.? Hai ya na?" (Bani is these not your childhood friends yes or no?"

Bani nods her head in agreement.

Jai looks at Bani's father and tells her- "Chailye main jhoot bhol raha hoon, lekin inhe aapse aur bani se jhoot bhol kar kya milega? Yeh aapko sacchai batayegi?"(Ok!!! I maybe lying agreed. But these two do not have to lie, what will they achieve in doing so? They will tell you what the truth is.

Then these two girls, Hema and Abha tell Bani's parents that how Jai-Bani fell in love and how they both wanted to get married and Bani was afraid to tell you people so both Jai-Bani decided to get married and we were the two witnesses who were present at the wedding. Bani is married to Jai Walia. She is his wife.

This completely baffles Bani the most. She cannot believe why her friends would lie for a man who she does not know.

Jai does not wait for anymore questioning or answers. He goes up to the mandap. He catches Bani's hand and drags her out of her own wedding. There is a stunned silence as know one can believe what just happened.

Jai comes and pushes Bani in the car. Then he comes around and sits in the car. Before Bani is able to protest any further he takes out his hankerchief which is laced with choloroform and presses his hankerchief on Bani's nose and Bani becomes unconscious.

He smiles and takes out his mask of Jai Walia which he was wearing and takes out his mobile and calls to say that job is done, I am bringing Bani with me.

By the time Bani's comes back to her senses she finds herself in a abadoned warehouse. It is dark and she is unable to know where she is. By the time she comes to her senses fully. She sees a man lying on the floor who is gagged and bounded by rope. She goes closer to see and is shocked to see that the man is none other than Jai Walia. She cannot believe why he is in such a state?

On the other hand, Bani's parents decide to lodge a police compliant against Jai Walia for kidnapping their daughter. Bani's father walks into the police commissioners office. There is a man already sitting there.

Bani's parents come and say that they want to lodge a complaint against Jai Walia, the businees tycoon for kidnapping their daughter. The police commissioner is shocked to hear this and so is the man sitting next to Bani's parents.

The man says,"This is not possible Jai will not do anything like this."
Bani's father says,"Oh!! yeah and what makes u such an expert on Jai's behaviour?"
The man says, "I am Hari Kishen Walia, Jai is my son."
Bani's father is stunned.
Before their begins a verbal battle the police commissioner says that Jai could not kidnap anyone as two days ago Jai Walia was kidnapped in front of Walia Mansion.
This stuns Bani's parents to no end.
So who was the man who had come and took Bani?

Preview for Next Part-
Bani-Jai meet for the first time in captivity.
They both realize they are just a part of a much bigger plan.
Jai-Bani come to know part of the plan and are shocked to hear it.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow hun...........Great parts!!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow that is a great fanfic man!! pls do do do continue! 😊

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