’AJNABI’ (COMPLETED...FINALLY!)

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coolwoman

@coolwoman

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Posted: 19 years ago

#91

Amazing, really beautiful

MT please continue with yr ff, I love reading yr ff, its just oooffffff

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91118

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Posted: 19 years ago

#92

omg, MT!!! that was fabulous 👏 👏 jai is sooo sweet...i love how he remembers her and calls her princess in the end...aww 😳 😳

You have to continue!!! NO hopefully....you really really have to continue! 😃

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poddav

@poddav

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Posted: 19 years ago

#93

plz plz cont soon , very very intresting story.

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nahar-saloni

@nahar-saloni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#94

tooo good mistletoe. pls continue sooooooooooon

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FATEMA HASHAM

@tima91

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Posted: 19 years ago

#95

very interesting....plz continue soon

fab story

-tima

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catcat

@catcat

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Posted: 19 years ago

#96

"how charming Jai looked when he was busy and lost in some work, how his salt and pepper hair curled up in the sides, how his brows furrowed in concentration, how he tapped his cheeks with his fingers, how he murmered something softly……" Very appealing portrait of JW .
The tree count part during car ride was a very delightful touch.
Part 1 & 2 make a very engrossing tale. Do continue,MT//CAT

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Bisma

@bismazaman2000

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Posted: 19 years ago

#97

omg!!!!that was awesome........he did recognise her.....then y didn't he tell her in first place 😕......that was gr8.....plzzzz do cont soon.......no wat will be bani's reaction??i'm eagerly waiting for the next part 😃