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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamika163


<font color="#cc0033">weekend.. stay tuned😉</font>

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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Anu when is the second part coming?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sparkling_gems

Anu when is the second part coming?


very soon dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
it's gnna be updated tmrw so stay tuned :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnk u all for all the appreciation... 🤗 here goes the next part.. enjoy.. waiting ur reviews😳

CB co-production's

PART 2

Priya somehow managed to drift in an uncomfortable sleep on the couch in fetal position trying to make all her anguish and pain subside with a tear stained face ,on the other side
Ram had now nursed himself the sixth drink of the day ,somehow the drinks too failed to subside his pain ,he couldn't understand as how his life had turned upside down in just a few days ,his marriage which started upon as a compromise had been the most beautiful thing that happened to him in his 40 years of lonely life ,she came in like a gush of wind making his senses go wild,he had never acted so immaturely ,so impatient or impulsive her elegance.her beauty ,he remembered how during his honeymoon he used to frequently go out of the room coz sumtimes he didn't have faith on himself... everything about her was a dream to his eyes her motherly affection ,care her fragrance her everything ' all the thoughts made his head go fuzzy he decided to go to bed when all their moments once again rushed in his head ,so he decided to sleep on the couch and slumped on it without changing , he woke up early in the morning as his body was cramped sleeping in such a little place, he stretched his muscles , when his temples started to throb due to hangover and he frantically searched all over for his medicines but found none ,he went and opened the windows to have some fresh air when he witnessed the rising sun ,he wondered what this rising sun symbolized in his life and stood there for a while gazing at the orange piece of fireball , he too didn't get as how his beautiful life caught an evil eye and his relationship shattered into smithereens ,he decided to have a walk in the lawn to soothe his pounding head , he went there barefoot and as he stepped on the grass a tickly sensation rushed him and it felt good he had crossed half the lawn when a something pierced in his foot he yelped priya's name aloud and a tear spilled from his eyes and he shut it tight ,he opened his eyes in anticipation to see the face of his thoughts but instead saw bansi kaka's bald head bend down , sir do u need help ram shook his head in negative and took out the piece of little stone chip and went to get ready for the day ahead , he got ready his normal suit the same one in which priya thought he looked too much boring he couldn't find his tie and searched it here and there ,he called priya twice but getting no response ,he knew that she was not with him!,he got frusty and walked out without wearing any he stopped by nuts room just to check her ,he gently knocked and went in he saw nuts watching a fashion show on t.v. he knew she misses her work badly ,he went o sit near her bed and asked her about her health, nuts gazed up at his brother from top to bottom,his hair were roughly combed no tie and an ugly colored shirt beneath and his eyes had dark circles around ,nuts gently asked him
Nuts : bhai are u fine
Ram(plastering a fake smile): absolutely nuts I'm perfectly fine it's just of a bit of workload nothing else , ok
Nuts : hmm going for the office than?
Ram : hmm lots of work for the day.
Nuts : bhai don't take too much of stress and keep a check on your health ok?
Ram : thnx choti and u too take care
Nuts (after pondering a lot): bhai are u not happy with the decision which u took?
Ram : no choti its not like that I am trusting u fully and hence this decision and I hope u never ever break my trust upon u ok choti ? I don't miss ur bhabhi 24x7 bugs my mind and my heart so I dn't need to miss her as she is right here (pointing the finger towards his heart )ok now bye than and don't take stress ok?
Nuts nodded a yes and saw ram's retreating figure ,guilt and pain was clearly evident on her face and she wondered as how her action had caused a lot of hurt to her bhai , Whatever she did was jst for her selfish needs but she didn't knew her bhai loved priya soo much!
Ram took the car and reached straight to the ganesha temple where he often came along with priya after her cancer report , he went in and folded his hands and bowed down in front of the idol and asked god for the well being of priya and turned around to witness priya there dressed in jeans and kurti praying to god ,his gazed at her with amazement when priya finished her prayers and looked up to witness a pair of eyes gazing at her .
Edited by Anamika163 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
me firstt😃
hope every likes the CnB productions do comment 😊
Edited by sammy_108 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Awesome work Anu and Shags...keep it up guyz...you both rock👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
i loveee ittt 👏

you guys are amaaazzinggg!!
update sooon yaar!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Aww!!
I feel bad for ram ;-(
but u both are really talented writers.
Hats off to both of u. :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Wow!!..this is really gr8t update Anu!..u r so talented!!!👏 👏 👏

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