Love Forever [FF][MayUr]#2 LAST PART /pg-35 - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago
ruchi!!!!!!!!
plz make everything alright soon. this was really sad.
and sorry for the late comment.
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!! RUCHIII!
FINALLY TUMNE MAYANK KI AKHEN KOLDI..LOL!!
BUT THIS WAS A SAD PART!!
FEEL BAD 4 NUPUR!!
I HOPE ARMAAN WILL HELP HER
AND CHEER HER UP!!
PLS RUCHI MAYUR KO THIK KARO!!
CONT SOON!!
SEE YAA
LOVE UUUU
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Posted: 16 years ago
ruchi.......................waiting n waiting n waiting........... 🤔
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
Edited by AngelArTi1988 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!! but sad part.........hope its mayank who gets a second chance......so sry fr d late reply.........as usual it was too gud......i cud fell mayur's emotions........im feelin really sad fr nups yaar......jaldi se sab kuch teekh karde ok?

luv
ananya
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Posted: 16 years ago
''sometimes life doesnt give u another chance ''
oh ruchi i am literally crying after reading your update.
Your saying does make one ponder, its sooo sad yet it would be wrong to deny this at times life is toooo harsh and doesn't give us another chance. I won't say that we should be sooo careful about each and every step in life but neither be carefree in life.
however at times life does give one another chance, i hope mayank is given another chance, please don't make it really sad, i can't stand mayur being parted but mayank should suffer and properly convince and do things which builds up nupur's trust in mayank again.
I am sooo angry at mayank but you know what the way mayank has made nupur suffer, he himself has undergone the same pain and suffering, possibly even more.
What a writer my ruchi is. Oh gosh ruchi the way you write always leaves me mesmirised, it gives me goosebumps man.
You surely are a magic queen and you are my professor snape, i am soo under your spell and ruchi magic, i loveddddddddd your update ruchi.
so sorry for replying late ruchi, have been quite busy man. Keep it ruchi, hugs.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanx a tonn guyzzz ! love yaaa
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi ruchi...hows u yaar???tk cr.... 🤗
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Ruchi..!! 🤗

This was such an emotional roller coaster ride and you took us all for it, free of cost. :P
Nupur's reaction was quite justified and so was Mayank's, in a way. The outburst was so naturally written - I loved it.

I am looking forward to the next part... keep PMing me... I will strictly endorse the der aaye durust aaye motto. 😊
Love you!

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART-31

Mayank , sitting in his room , jst wondered how easily he lost his trust on Nupur -the one whom he trusted the most , after his mother . He didnt know wat to do ?.wat to say ? , he culdnt evn thinking of looking into her eyes and talking to her was not evn on the cards !!..but he had to do something , he culdnt afford to loose nupur !!..he culdnt afford to loose HIS LIFE , he culdnt afford to loose her TRUST !!..he jst culdnt ! he was thnking , when his mom came to his room - Mayank looked down , but Shilpa went to him and without uttering a word , she hugged him !!..a warm motherly hug , that was the need of the time ...mayank was shocked at this but then he let his emotions over-rule him , he cried bitterly but Shilpa didnt utter a word but calmed him down , after a while mayank calmed down a bit and he looked at Shilpa with apologetic face , but Shilpa made her way to door and before leaving , she said ''My son is always the WINNER !!..and i TRUST HIM !!"

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Armaan was sitiing next to Nupur , who jst had her medicine .
Nupur : tum jao , i can stay alone at home
Armaan : i cant leave u alone , u are not well
Nupur : mein teekh hoon Armaan , and i am not a kid !!
Armaan : par tum akeli hogi , gunjan bhi Rhea ke paas hai -
Nupur : becoz Rhea needs her , and u too !
Armaan : par -
Nupur ; kuch nahin hai ...i had my dinner , i had my medicine and now i am gonna sleep off !!...
Armaan : are u sure ? ..
Nupur [giggles] ;i dont need a baby-sitter with me !
Armaan : shut-up !..chal teekh ahi , phir mein jaata hoon
Nupur : ek kaam karna , jaate huyi , jst lock the door from outside , mera neeche jaane ka mann nahin hai
Armaan : gunjan ke paas keys hain ghar ki ?
Nupur : haan uske paas hai , woh aake subah khol legi
Armaan : good nite aur agar koi zaroorat huyi toh bula lena !
Nupur : surely , good nite aur Rhea ka khayal rakhna
Armaan smiled and went out of room .
As soon as Armaan went , nupur's face lost the smile , which she plastered throughout the day ..she went near the window and thought ab Mayank - the one whom she loved the most and now the one who made her loose the ability to trust anyone ..
tears rolled down her cheeks and all the while Mayank's harsh words buzzed in her ears , till she heard someone step into her room
Nupur turned around and saw none other than but Mayank , Armaan allowed mayank to meet nupur ...
She looked him aghast ..he hated her , so wat was he doing here , wat does he wants now? wat does he want to say now ?..wat ?..
''wat are u doing here '' anger visible in her voice
''Nupur , meri baat -''..
''I dont wanna hear a single word ...jst move away '' Nupur interruppted in between
''Nupur -plz listne to me once'' mayank said in pleading tone ...
''mujhe kuch nahin sunna hai mayank...plzzz chale jao yahaan se''..nupur said , as she turned her face away , coz she felt tears brimming her eyes
''Nupur ,i know , i was rude'' mayank said , advancing in the room
''really ?...u were rude ?..u butchered my feelings to core , and u say u were rude'' Nupur shot at him , turning to face him with tears in her eyes
Mayank was stunned after her reply and wich affected him evn more was tears in her eyes.
'' mujhse galti huyi hai ..mein janta hoon ..i am really sorry abt that , i mean it nupur ''' mayank said in a pleading tone ..his eyes were filled with tears
'' mujhe kuch nahin pata mayank ...i jst know one thing -U DIDNT TRUST ME !!'' nupur said as moved away from him '' ab kyun aaye ho ...mein khush hoon Armaan ke saath , tumhe yehi lagta tha na ...toh phir why are u bothered abt me , when u didnt care abt me ..tell me mayank ?'' Nupur questioned him back ,..and she felt bit dizzy ,so she sat on the edge on the bed
''I love u Nupur ..'' Mayank replied her back
Nupur looked at Myanak instantly ..it was as if she wanted to hear only these three words..only these three words she wanted but -
''but u dont trust me mayank'' Nupur said , her voice broke down ..she was feeling helpless ..she didnt know wat in this world is correct and wat not !!..
Mayank observed her changing expressions , a relief but then again a turmoil on her face ...
Mayank unknowingly kept her hand on sharp edge of the lamp and it pierced his skin
'' gosshh''
Nupur looked at him and then his hand , which was bleeding profusely -all her anger vanished in a second ...she remembered nthing but one thiing that MAYANK IS HURT
''aankhen hai ya button , dikhta nahin hai '' nupur scolded mayank as she took his hand in hers
Mayank smiled at her innocence , he silently thanked the sharp edge , for piercing in his hand
''mere shakal kyun dekh rahe hoo , aao mere saath '' nupur said , as they both made way to basin . Nupur washed the blood away and kept on scolding mayank for being so careless...
after washing the blood away ,'' tum room mein baitho , mein first-aid box lekar aayi'' ...nupur ordered mayank !!
Mayank smiled a bit and went to roo ,after a while nupur came with first-aid box , she bandaged his hand ..but al the while mayank looked at nupur , her changing expressions -care to pain to relief
Nupur jst came to her world , when she felt mayank's intense gaze on hre ..she cursed herself for loosing out so soon ..for being so sensitive when it comes to mayank..for being soo MADLY IN LOVE WITH HIM
she got up from the bed , when she felt mayank holding her wrist with other hand
'' leave me mayank ''..nupur said , loooking other way
'' i wont '' mayank replied back
'' plz mayank '' Nupur broke down ..words resisted to come out , tears ran down her cheeks
Mayank turned nuupur towards him ...
'' i hate u mayank'' nupur said in a childish tone, before mayank culd say a anythng..Myaank smiled a bit
'' but i love u to core of my heart '' Mayank replied
Nupur didnt have courage left to fight with her feelings , she hugged him tight , as tightly as she culd , tears rolled down her cheeks , she buried her face in mayank's chest
'' why did u hurt me? and urself evn more than me'' nupur asked in broken tone
''i'll never do tthat ...i am sorry ' mayank replied , as he hugged her closer to his heart
Both didnt utter a single word after that ..both embraced each other ..mayank slowly kissed on her forehead and nupur gave up herself in his arms !!

PS : THANK U GUYS !!..i am feeling much better now ...thanx to u all
this is the second last part of my FF-LOVE FOREVER and last part is gonna be updated within few dayz !!
Plz use ''like'' tab 😳
Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
gud one.. Pls updtae the next part soon.... 😊

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