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saba

@luv_pavi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#131

continues frm where i hav left

shiv ceme at samar's place to pick trisha

shiv:hey bhabhi

trisha:hi shiv waise thnxx tm ne apna keemti waqt nikaal kar apni bhabhi ko lene aye

shiv:hey kia ho gaya hai bhabhi app ko

trisha:kuch nahi devar jee just kidding

shiv:tou chale

trisha:yes ofcourse

shiv dropes trisha at saurav's place

shiv:ohk bahbhi i hav to go app andar jaiye

trisha:theek hai

AT SAURAV'S PLACE

trisha:namaste ma kaisi hai app

nikhila:arey trisha tu mein bilkul theek ho tu suna

trisha:bas ma wo ghar mein akeli thi tou yaha ah gai

nikhila:acha kia beta aur waise bhi mujhe tujh se baat bhi karni thi

trisha:jee ma kahiye na

nikhila:beta wo mein shiv k baare mein ab tou aos ki bhi shaadi ki umer ho gai hai n meri nazar mein aos k liye aik ladki hai

trisha:😲jee ma koun hai wo

nikhila:ermm NISHA

trisha:😃acha ma ajj mein aur samar bhi ye he baat kar rahe the ma hum donno ko lagta hai k shiv bhi nisha ko asand karta hai

nikhila:arey wah mein aur mahen kal raat ye baat kar rahe the k kia ye donno is rishtey se manzoor ho ge kia

trisha:issi liye tou maa ajj mein aur samar shiv se baat kare ge is baare mein

nikhila:chal ye tou bohat he achi baat hai

NXT SCENE

shiv goes to nisha's institute to pick shreya n nisha

nisha n shrey were cumin frm their institution

shreya:hi bhaiya

shiv:hey tou how waz ur class???

shreya:it waz gud bhaiya

shiv:n tmhari nisha

nisha:fine

shiv:tou chale

nisha n shreya:chalee

da 3 of dem were sitting in restaurant n were chit chattin

shiv:nisha i m extreamly sorry aos din mein ne tmhe bhiya n shreya ne tmhe bhabhi k baare mein jo kuch bhi kaha

shreya:haan nisha yaar so sorry

nisha:oh cum on dat waz just a misunderstanding bas ab tou sab kuch theek hai ne look sab saath mein hai tou fir kia problem hmmm

shiv's cell rang

shiv:samar bhaiya ki call hai

shiv:jee bhaiya

samar:shiv mujhe tm se kuch baat karni hai tm mere ghar ah jao n trisha ko lete huwe anna

shiv:ohkk bhaiya

samar:bye

shiv:bye bhaiya

shiv:bhaiya k pass jaana hai kuch kaam hai aonhe chalo mein tm donno ko chod deta ho n wohi se bhabhi ko bhi le leta ho

nisha n shreya:hmmm

shiv dropped nisha at her place n shreya at their place n picked trisha

IN DA CAR

shiv:bhabhi bhaiya ko kia kaam hai app ko patta hai

trisha:haan pata tou hai

shiv: tou bataiye na

trisha:nhi ghar chalo fir wohi tmhe patta chale ga

shiv:ohk

they reached their

shiv:bhaiya tou ab tak aye he nhi

trisha:arey ah jae ge wait

samar:ah gaya

i dunno wht i hav writtten guys plz bear wit me n extreamly sorry if it's boring actually guys no 1 is contributing here n dat's really bad REENO hav started diz 4r just enjoyment n i know she's feelin very bad plzz guyz do contribute nhi tou u will hav to read my UPDATES (n i know i m not a gud writer)so plzz do contribute it's a requset REENO will feel gud if u all will contribute

saba😳

Edited by luv_pavi - 16 years ago

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#132

oh saba.........

jaanu thnk u vvvv much 4 caring sooo much fr me!

yaar u hve dun a tremendous job....i swear tmne bht bht acha likha hai atleast mjhse tho bht acha likha hai...i luv u fr dis

nd yh shut up...v all luv ur updates...koi aur nhi karraha.....no probz bt plz yaar u keep doin it

i LUVD da scnd part vvv much...nd it wznt borin at all!

luv

reeno

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sneha

@pals_sneha

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#133

wow awesome goin......i enjoyed reading....it ....write more...m excited

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Dina known azz **Angel or Shaz

@xAngelicANGELx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#134

Wow............dnt really have the time to read all the ff..........I think this is the 1st one I read......everything..........

& I must say it's really good😊

Edited by misS Angelic - 16 years ago

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starfan.shrk

@starfan.shrk

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#135

WOW ! Tht ws soo guuuuuuuud. hope evrythin ggoes well n shiv n nisha agree.wundrful upd8s yaar con soon"!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

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saba

@luv_pavi

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!
oh saba.........
jaanu thnk u vvvv much 4 caring sooo much fr me!

yaar u hve dun a tremendous job....i swear tmne bht bht acha likha hai atleast mjhse tho bht acha likha hai...i luv u fr dis

nd yh shut up...v all luv ur updates...koi aur nhi karraha.....no probz bt plz yaar u keep doin it

i LUVD da scnd part vvv much...nd it wznt borin at all!

luv

reeno

oh god reeno basss bhi karo i m flying like a bird huhhh yesh dear i care 4r u see u r also doing a tremendous job n plzzz ur updates r 100000000000 tymz better then mine thnxx a lott 4r liking it luv u 2 dear

saba

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Annet and Janet

@loveabletwinz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#137

hey guyss!

im quite a silent reader.but i have to say that u guys are doing a pretty darn good job..i know .i.ve told reeno that i would pitch in sometimes but im just not finding the time..i will try my best though..whenever the time is right,id like to add a lil :-D but before that i have a lil idea.. i know that reeno wants more people to participate..and a lot of people arnt signing up because they are worried about their writing skills.. i was just thinking that if anyone had an idea that they would like to see in "Kuch Pal", they could probably send their idea to reeno or anyone else who is writing in.. and they could probably write a short part for u.. they would obviously give credit to ur idea.. i dont know..maybe im making more work for reeno and saba and the others...but i was just thinking.. cos im sure a LOT of people have some amazing ideas for this..its just a little thought.. lets see how it goes..oh and yeah..im available too..u can send me ideas too and im plannin on writing in here real quick..so im open :-D

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#138

yeah good idea. Gr888 predictions. Now my turn...

Next Scene :

Samar reaches office. Milind is there staring at him.

Samar : Kyaa hua Milind.

Milind : Bahut hua tumhara natak.

Samar ; Natak. ???

Milind : Haa Natak, bahut jald dad ko tumhare aslieeyat pata chal jaaega.

Milind leaves.

Samar : Dekhte hain, kisse kiske aslieeyat pata chalte hain.

Board Meeting..

Muklul : Agar yeh Tender hume mil jaae to humara bahut faida hoga.

Milind : Woh Mahen papa ne bhi chota business shuru kiyaa hain aur woh bhi es tender ko pane ki koshish karenge.

Samar : Hume sirf apna dekhna hain,

Mukul is happy.

Milind thinks ( Samar jaroor Mahen papa ko humare cotations leak karega aur dad ko pata chal jaaega )

Next Scene :

Samar goes to meet dad with the File and gives him the file. Milind follows him and takes the picture of Mahen and Samar and the file.

Next Scene :

Milind is walking somewhere. So is Mahen. Suddenly Mahen stumbles and is about to fall and Milind runs and helps him. The file from Milinds hand falls down and Milind takes it and gives to him. Mahen feels weak and holds Milind tightly.

Milind : Aap theek to hain na.

Mahen : Haa abh theek hu.

Milind : Main chalta hoon.

Mahen thinks ( tumhare andar ki es achaai ko bahut jald hum bahar laaegee bete ).

Shiv comes from hiding.

Mahen : Kaam ho gaya,

Shiv : Yes, yeh dekho.

Shows the picture of Milind and Mahen.

Mahen : Very Good.

Next day :

Board Meeting :

Mukul ( angry ) : Yeh contract hume nahi mila , kaise. kisne gaddari ki.

Milind grinning.

Milind: dad yeh contract Mahen Kapoor ko mila hain, aur woh bhi humare beech main bahut thoda difference hain. Eska matlab kissine leak kiyaa hain humare cotations.

Samar is surprised.

Mukul : Mujhe pata hain yeh kisne kiyaa hain.

Milind is happy.

Mukul : Mujhe usse aise umeed nahi thee.

Milind : Main to pehle se hi jaanta tha.

Main usse ab business se nikaal doonga.

Mukul goes towards Samar.

Mukul : Tum kitne bhi koshish kar lo, lekin mujhe sachai ka pata chal jaata.

Samar: Kyaa matlab.

Mukul : Aaj jab tumne us photographer se photo's lekar chepaai , maine dekh liyaa.

Samar surprised.

Samar: Kyaa papa . maaf kar deegeyee. Galti ho gayee.

Mukul : Galtii ho gayee , main aise galti kabhi maaf nahi karonga. Aaj se mera sirf ek hi beta business main kaam karega . Maine apne company ke shares jo tum dono ke naam karne wale thee abh sirf ek ke hee naam karonga. Varna kahi mere company bhi us Mahen Kapoor ko .....

Milind is very happy..

Milind: Aap ne bilkul ctheek kiya dad. Main aapse pehle hi kehta thaa.. Es Samar ko too

Mukul slaps Milind. Milind is shocked.

Mukul : Baas , bahut hua.. yeh dekho pictures.

Its actually Mahen and Milinds.

Mukul : Samar tumhey bachane ki liee sab chepa raha thaa aur tu.

Milind : Dad aap yeh pics dekhiyee.

Mukul throws them out without seeing.

Mukul : Get out.

Samar: Dad shaant ho jaaeye. Dekhiyee galtee ho gayee Milind se maaf kar deejeye.

Mukul : Dekhon Samar ko, Sirf Samar ke kehne par tumhay maaf kar raha hoon.

Mukul leaves and Milind sees Samar grinns.

Samar goes out and meets the photographer who came with the pics to meet Mukul as his SHUBCHINTAK... Flash back .

Photographer to the receptionist : Main Mukul Kapoor se milna chahta hoon.

Receptionsit : Kyaa kaam.

P : Uneke faide ke baat hain.

Samar sees Mukul coming out of the cabin so he goes before Mukul and acts surprised to see the picture.

Samar : Dekhiyee yeh baat kissi ko mat batana. Mere dad ko bura lag jaaega. Unke tabhiyat bhi aaj kaal theek nahi rehti. Main unse bahut pyaar karta hoon.

Samar knows that Mukul is hearing everything. Samar goes and hids the pics knowing that Mukul was seeing him.

Flash back ends.

P : Kyun achee acting ke na maine.

Samar : Wonderful. yeh lo.

Gives the P the money.

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sonia

@Mrs.soniayk6

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#139

wowwwwwwwww u guys r rocking so much haapend in kuch pal.thank god u made evryone realize their misunderstanding about sam.

saba ur rocking yaar👏.

i loved ur two parts.n peepo n reeno asusual u both r rocking👏.n lovable u have given a gud idea yaar.i think we can give give gud ideas to reeno so that we can help her.i will definitly try to give some idea's to reeno.thanx 4r the wonderful idea yaar.👏

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Payal

@Peepo

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#140

thank u friends , one thing I have also started writing a small story - Ristey. Plzz do read them as well when time and give me the feedbacks. Its the first time I am writing an entire story and characters on my own. Do help me.

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