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Posted: 9 months ago
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Part 6

Kiara, the optimist, didn't seem to notice the storm brewing in his eyes. "Palki, this is my fiancé, Rudraksh," she said, her voice ringing with joy. Palki's expression was a canvas of emotions, regret, hope, and fear all fighting for dominance. The room grew quiet as the significance of the introduction dawned on the others. Shaurya, his twin, the man who had stolen everything from him, took a step back, his eyes wide with shock at how Rajveer could be alive .

His mother, Preeta, her hand flying to her mouth, searched his face for any sign of the son she had lost. Her eyes filled with tears, and she took a shaky step forward, the years of mourning etched into the lines around her eyes. " Rajveer ?" she whispered, her voice trembling with disbelief. , Karan, stood stoic, his eyes boring into Rudraksh's soul as if trying to peel back the layers of the man before him to find the son he had known. The silence was deafening, the air thick with the weight of unspoken words and unresolved pain. It was as if time had stopped, the world holding its breath, waiting for the explosion of emotions that was inevitable.


Preeta took a tentative step forward, her hand reaching out as if to touch a ghost. " Rajveer ?" she whispered, her voice trembling with a cocktail of emotions. The colors of their past swirling around him, threatening to consume him whole.



Karan, his stoic exterior cracking, stepped forward, his eyes brimming with tears. He enveloped Rudraksh in a bear hug, the strength of his embrace a silent acknowledgment of the pain they had all endured. The years of mourning seemed to melt away in that moment, replaced by a surge of hope and love that had been buried for so long. Karan's arms tightened around him, and for the first time in what felt like an eternity, Rudraksh felt the warmth of his father's love. "I knew it," Karan murmured into his ear. "I knew you were out there, fighting to come back to us." Preeta, her hand shaking, reached for his face, her eyes searching for the son she had lost. "Is it really you, my boy?" she whispered, her voice barely audible above the din of the party. Rudraksh nodded, unable to find the words to explain the tumultuous journey that had brought him to this moment. Preeta's hand touched his cheek, her eyes brimming with tears. "Mera Beta ," she breathed. "Mene kabhi umeed nahi jora Tha ki tum zinda ho."


Shaurya looked at him with a mix of shock and anger, his fists clenched at his sides. "How?" he managed to ask, his voice hoarse with emotion. "We thought you were dead." Rudraksh took a step back, feeling the weight of their stares. "I don't have time to explain everything now," he said, his voice steady despite the quaking of his soul. "But I promise I will, soon." The room was a cacophony of whispers, the tension palpable as the partygoers tried to make sense of the revelation.


Kiara, her hand still in his, squeezed reassuringly. "Let's go somewhere quieter," she suggested, her eyes filled with concern. They stepped out onto the terrace, the cool evening breeze a stark contrast to the heat of the room they'd left behind. The city lights twinkled like distant stars, a silent backdrop to their unfolding drama. Rudraksh leaned against the railing, his knuckles white as he gripped the cold metal. "It's not your fault," he said, his eyes on the horizon. "It's mine. I should have told you everything.



" Kiara looked at him, her eyes searching his, "What do you mean?" He took a deep breath, the night air cool against his flushed skin. "Palki is a part of my past, a part I've kept hidden from everyone, including you." Kiara's eyes searched his, confusion giving way to understanding. "I've always known there was something you weren't telling me," she murmured. "But I trusted you, Rudraksh. I still trust you." He squeezed her hand, a silent thank you for her unwavering belief in him. "After the party," he assured her, "I'll tell you everything. I promise." I never meant to keep it from you," he began, his voice low and earnest. "But when I saw Palki that night with Shaurya , I realized she had moved on, I thought it was best to leave her in the past." He took a deep breath, feeling the weight of his deception heavy in the air. "I wanted to start fresh with you, without the shadow of what had been.

" Kiara tells Rudraksh that Palki is engaged to Shaurya and that they are getting married in 1 month.Rudraksh remembered the ring he saw in Palki finger and then had a fb of the one he made her wear but he shut down the memory and held kiara hand and took her to the centre where her family and his family were standing.

Palki looked on as Rudraksh was smiling whilst he looked at kiara. A pang of something raw and unpleasant twisted in her gut, a feeling she hadn't expected to feel again. It was a smile that once had been reserved for her, a smile, a smile that that promised warmth and protection. But fate had woven a tangled web, and now she was standing here, engaged to Shaurya, a man she didn't love but one who but one who held the power to either save or destroy the life of the man who truly owned her heart, Rajveer.

The room seemed to shrink around her as the memory of Shaurya's chilling ultimatum three years ago echoed in her mind.

Her thoughts drifted back to that fateful night three years ago when Shaurya had presented her with a choice so cruel

it had seemed like a twisted game. She had to either break Rajveer's heart beyond repair or watch him be torn away.

from her permanently. The memory was as vivid as if it had occurred only moments ago. She recalled the wickedness in Shaurya's voice as he had laid out the ultimatum, his eyes cold and unyielding. Palki had felt like, her fate was sealed by the hands of someone who didn't care for her happiness. The stark contrast of his cold eyes and harsh voice as he had told her,"Marry me, or watch as I ruin Rajveer right infront of your eyes," had been the moment her world had tilted on its axis.

She had agreed, not for herself, but for the sake of the only person who had ever truly loved her. The bitterness of

that choice still lingered on her tongue, a constant reminder of the price she had paid for a love she could never claim.

Now, as she observed Rudraksh and Kiara, she couldn't help but feel a sense of déjà vu. It was a scene that could have played out with her and Rajveer in their place. The jealousy that gnawed at her was for the love she had lost

Palki's heart ached as she remembered the way Rajveer's eyes had searched hers that night, filled with pain and betrayal.

She had been so convincing in her deceit, and there wasn’t much more she had to do to make him hate her as she was-entwined in Shaurya arms in the bed that Rajveer slept in.

The room was a whirlwind of colors and chatter, yet all Palki could hear was the deafening silence of her own thoughts. She watched as Kiara placed a gentle hand on Rudraksh's arm, a gesture of comfort and understanding.Palki felt a stab of jealousy, so sharp it took her breath away. It wasn’t just the physical closeness that stung, but the emotional bond she could see forming between them. It was a bond she had dreamt of sharing with him, a bond that had been snatched by her cruel fate.

Her gaze shifted to Kiara, who was blissfully unaware of the storm brewing inside Palki. She was beautiful, in a way that made Palki’s own heart ache. Petite, with a sprinkle of freckles across her nose, and a laugh that could light up the darkest of rooms, Kiara was everything Palki wasn’t. But more importantly, she had the one thing Palki desired most genuine smile from Rudraksh. It was a smile that didn’t come with the burden of a forced alliance or the shadow of a threat. It was pure and untainted by the bitterness that had come to define Palki’s existence.

Palki's eyes narrowed as she watched Rudraksh's smile softly at kiara full of so much warmth.A pang of something raw and unpleasant twisted in her gut, a feeling she hadn't expected to feel again. It was a smile that once had been reserved for her, a smile that promised warmth and protection. But fate had woven a tangled web, and now she was standing here, engaged to Shaurya, a man she didn't love but one who but one who held the power to either save or destroy the life of the man who truly owned her heart, Rajveer.

Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago
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Part 7




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Her gaze flickered to Rajveer, standing stoically at the edge of the crowd, his eyes were dark and unreadable, his jaw set in a firm line. It was as if he had become a stranger to her, a shadow of the man she once knew so intimately. She longed to reach out to him, to explain, to apologize, but she was trapped by the webs Shaurya sowed of deceit. Palki's heart raced as she searched for any flicker of regret, any hint of the love she knew he felt for her. But all she found was a wall of indifference, a mask even more impenetrable than the one she had crafted for herself.


Why was he allowing this to happen? Did he not feel the same pain she did, the same longing? Or had he truly moved on? When she found him, his eyes were dark and unreadable, his jaw set in a firm line. It was as if he had become a stranger to her, a shadow of the man she once knew so intimately. She longed to reach out to him, to explain, to apologize, but she was trapped by her own web of deceit.


She watched as Kiara placed a gentle hand on Rudraksh's arm, a gesture of comfort and understanding. Palki felt a stab of jealousy, so sharp it took her breath away. It wasn't just the physical closeness that stung, but the emotional bond she could see forming between them. It was a bond she had dreamt of sharing with him, a bond she had been robbed of by her cruel fate .

The weight of her engagement ring felt like a shackle on her finger, a constant reminder of the choice she had made. Her hand clenched around the cool metal, the diamond digging into her skin. Palki took a deep breath, trying to quell the tumult of emotions that threatened to spill over. She knew she had to be strong, for Rudraksh's sake. She couldn't let him see how much it hurt, how much she wished she could be the one standing beside him, holding his hand, sharing in the joy that should have been theirs.


As the evening progressed, Palki found it increasingly difficult to maintain the facade. She watched as Rudraksh and Kiara danced together, their movements synchronized, their laughter ringing out clear and free. Each twirl and dip was a dagger in her heart, a stark reminder of what could have been. But she couldn't tear her gaze away.

Three years ago, she had been in Kiara's place, wrapped in the protective embrace of the man who now looked at her with nothing but coldness in his eyes. It was a night that had been etched into her soul, a moment when she realized that love could be as cruel as it was beautiful.


The party was a blur around her as she approached him, her heart hammering in her chest like a caged bird. "Rajveer," she began, her voice shaky. His eyes met hers, and for a brief moment, she saw the pain she had caused reflected there. "What is this, Palki?" he asked, his voice low and dangerous. She took a deep breath, steeling herself for his wrath Palki felt her heart crack a little more with every breath . She wanted to tell him about the ultimatum, the fear that had driven her to make that terrible choice, but she couldn't. Not yet. Not when Shaurya was so close, his gaze sharp and The room grew colder, and Palki shivered. She could feel Shaurya's eyes on them, watching their exchange with a predatory gaze. She knew she had to tread carefully. Any misstep and she could lose everything, including her Rajveer life.

But looking into the abyss of Rudraksh gaze, she realized she might already have lost the one thing that truly mattered: his trust. Why are you doing this?" she asked, her voice barely audible above the din of the party.


"Why are you with her?" The accusation hung heavy in the air, and for a moment, she thought she saw a flicker of guilt in his eyes. But it was gone as quickly as it had come, replaced with a steely resolve that she had never seen in him before.

Palki," he said, his voice filled with a mix of sadness and anger, "you made your choice. You chose this life with him. Don't pretend like you didn't know what you were doing." His words cut through her like a knife, and she felt a tear slide down her cheek. She had hoped, deep down, that he would understand, that he would see the fear that had driven her to make that fateful decision. You gave up on us, Palki," Rudraksh said, his voice low and measured. "You chose him over me. You chose to betray me to destroy my love into pieces I had to move on." His words were like a slap in the face, and she felt the sting of them down to her very core. But she knew he was right. She had made her choice, and now she had to live with it.

Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago
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Part 8

Her eyes searched his, looking for the man she had loved so fiercely. "Do you love her?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. The question hung in the air, charged with the weight of all that had been lost between them. For a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath as they waited for his response. For a moment, the world seemed to hold its breath as they waited for his response. Rajveer, now Rudraksh, took a deep breath eyes never leaving hers. "Love is complicated, Palki," he began, his voice filled with a sadness that made her ache. After what happened, I had to move on. I had to survive. I couldn't be the man you knew anymore." He paused, his gaze dropping to the floor. "And Kiara, she’s been my everything a friend my biggest supporter she held it down for me,She was there through it all, she held the broken pieces of Rajveer and made him into Rudraksh.whatever she’s done for me thank you would never be enough for it.

” Rajveer paused, his expression unreadable. "You think you know what love is until it slaps you in the face and shows. you just how little you understand." He looked away, his eyes lingering on Kiara's laughter. "Rudraksh loves her he corrected his voice. "And he would do anything to protect her, just as I would have done anything for you. " Palki felt a stab of of pain.

"But why the change?" she pressed, her voice shaking slightly. Why did you become someone else?" Rudraksh gaze never left hers as he replied, "To survive, Palki. To protect what was left of me. After what happened, I couldn't bear to be the man who had lost everything. I had to become someone new, someone stronger." His voice was filled with a quiet intensity that sent chills down her. her spine. "Someone who could rebuild themselves after there whole world was destroyed infront of them."Rudraksh eyes. darkened, and his expression grew solemn. "To escape the shadow of the man I once was," he replied.


Rudraksh congratulates Palki for her engagement with Shaurya and wishes her the best for her future he walks away with with his shoulders tense and back to where Kiara was standing.

Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am shocked that shaurya and sunny caused Rajveer's accident.i wish shaurya hadn't gone to this extent.glad that luthra business fell down after shaurya took over the business.rajveer is now a successful businessman called rudraksh who is coming back for revenge.superb.

Is kian an important character?I am surprised that palki is kiara's friend.rudraksh told kiara about palki.but I am worried whether kiara will misunderstand palki.palveer conversation was emotional. Rudraksh says that just to move on he chose to be with kiara.i am worried whether kiara will end up getting hurt.which actress plays kiara?

For Rajveer, Palki was his entire world and now he thinks that Palki destroyed his world so for him he no longer wants to be connected to Palki so he changed everything about himself to no longer be attached to her.

He became Rudraksh because he needed to build his life again from scratch without their being anything related from the past that would have stopped him from becoming Rudraksh.

Kiara helped him to become Rudraksh she motivated him to start again and to move forward in life she basically is like his lifeline as she saved him and is helping him with his revenge.

Rudraksh wants to move on with Kiara . in his head he already has moved on with Kiara. Because for him in his head he loves Kiara

He basically convinces himself that he loves Kiara because he doesn’t want to think of the possibility that he still loves Palki. because it’s wrong for him.He doesn’t want to fall in her love again and be destroyed by it.

But in his heart he loves Palki and he hates that because after everything that she did to him his heart is still connected to her and he doesn’t understand why that is.

Remember he thinks that Shaurya and Palki tried to kill him so they can easily be together without him being there.

He thinks that Palki never loved him and played with his feelings from the start and stringed him along.

He saw Shalki together in his bed and they both were in a compromising position.

He saw Palki interacting a lot with Shaurya before their separation.

All of this thoughts are going on in his head


Kian is Rudraksh right hand he knows everything about Rajveer past he knows what Rajveer felt for Palki and what she did to him

He’ll have a frenemies equation with Palki.

Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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Posted: 9 months ago
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Rudraksh is going to start his revenge on Palki and Shaurya now. Brace yourself guys as he isn’t going to hold back
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Posted: 9 months ago
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Please say which actresses play palki and kiara.


Originally posted by: Ramisa26

For Rajveer, Palki was his entire world and now he thinks that Palki destroyed his world so for him he no longer wants to be connected to Palki so he changed everything about himself to no longer be attached to her.

He became Rudraksh because he needed to build his life again from scratch without their being anything related from the past that would have stopped him from becoming Rudraksh.

Kiara helped him to become Rudraksh she motivated him to start again and to move forward in life she basically is like his lifeline as she saved him and is helping him with his revenge.

Rudraksh wants to move on with Kiara . in his head he already has moved on with Kiara. Because for him in his head he loves Kiara

He basically convinces himself that he loves Kiara because he doesn’t want to think of the possibility that he still loves Palki. because it’s wrong for him.He doesn’t want to fall in her love again and be destroyed by it.

But in his heart he loves Palki and he hates that because after everything that she did to him his heart is still connected to her and he doesn’t understand why that is.

Remember he thinks that Shaurya and Palki tried to kill him so they can easily be together without him being there.

He thinks that Palki never loved him and played with his feelings from the start and stringed him along.

He saw Shalki together in his bed and they both were in a compromising position.

He saw Palki interacting a lot with Shaurya before their separation.

All of this thoughts are going on in his head


Kian is Rudraksh right hand he knows everything about Rajveer past he knows what Rajveer felt for Palki and what she did to him

He’ll have a frenemies equation with Palki.

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Please say which actresses play palki and kiara.




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Palki played by Ayushi Khurana



Kiara would be played by Reem sameer


For some reason the picture disappears after I upload it I don’t know why

Edited by Ramisa26 - 9 months ago
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I am surprised that Palki is Ayushi.I asked to know whether its sana or Adrija who plays Palki.But its a third person.I think if you put the picture of palki and kiara in the introduction the readers can imagine the right person as the character..


Originally posted by: Ramisa26

Palki would be played by Ayushi Khurana

Kiara would be played by Reem sameer

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am surprised that Palki is Ayushi.I asked to know whether its sana or Adrija who plays Palki.But its a third person.I think if you put the picture of palki and kiara in the introduction the readers can imagine the right person as the character..


Yeh I did want it to be Sana but then I thought If I did her then Adrija fans might not like it as some of them prefer Palki with Adrija

Whereas other with Sana

So to not upset the either I put a different girl

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