FF: IMPERATIVE IMPULSES [Ch17-20, 20/05/24 Completed] - Page 29

Originally posted by: Soldierindia

Loved the chapter your character essence is amazing the logical approach to a positive and healthy relationship without any portrayal of forceful anger and abuse like in the show actually attracts audience here readers show mai to ab actors bhi bore ho rahe hai l feel like they are just waiting for the torture to end

Hopefully we get to see more of ur works and chapter is. worth rereading again and again just to enjoy the development camaraderie b/w sahan

Thank you for the beautiful encouragement; it is very meaningful for me, especially in the moments of self-doubts while writing. ❤️🤗

Going by the current schedule, you wont have to wait for too long.😊

Hi,

Great to see you here enjoying the ff!

I feel sad for the show and have lost any expectations from it; it is turning unreasonable at every step.

I will definitely keep you in mind for PM/tag in the next update.

Loved the new chapter. I read it at least 4 times before realizing I needed to write a comment too 😅😅 God knows, what's happening with me these days!

My most favorite parts were -- 1. The opening scene where Angad worries about Sahiba's nightmare. 2. Him helping his wife by cleaning up so they could be fashionable late and 3. The part where he stands up for his wife against Seerat and clears his feelings for Seerat or lack of one!

Seerat 😡 How self-centered is she to assume everything is about her?

Last but not the least, the side-lined Garry and Seerat!

I can't wait for their 'away time'! Hope it helps them bond and grow as an individual and as a couple!

A special mention to my most favourite line in this part ----> 😂🤣

"Jasleen jaate jaate apni bahu ko bhi leke jao....."

That part was fab! 😂🤣

This was a really lovely update! Makers should have take. Cues from your work on how proceed! If they have blend the OG with your work, we would have had a flawless beautiful show with so much promising character development for everyone!!!! I just loved how SahAn are started to understand one another, and try to make the other feel more at ease. Even Manveer demonstrates what she expects Sahiba to do in case someone steps out of bounds!

Originally posted by: mirai07

Loved the new chapter. I read it at least 4 times before realizing I needed to write a comment too 😅😅 God knows, what's happening with me these days!

Heya, it is endearing to see that you all love to re-read it several times, but none is obliged to comment! I just love chatting though. 😃

My most favorite parts were -- 1. The opening scene where Angad worries about Sahiba's nightmare. 2. Him helping his wife by cleaning up so they could be fashionable late and 3. The part where he stands up for his wife against Seerat and clears his feelings for Seerat or lack of one!

I had fun writing these scenes, I wanted to redirect angry Angad in Seerat's direction because she deserves it the most.

Seerat 😡 How self-centered is she to assume everything is about her?

A lot. Probably more than it would be deemed reasonable even by Jasleen's standards.

Last but not the least, the side-lined Garry and Seerat!

I want Garry to witness how Seerat tricked him and that her trickery is not limited to lying about her family's financial status.

I can't wait for their 'away time'! Hope it helps them bond and grow as an individual and as a couple!

Oh it would. They are already in for an adventure.

A special mention to my most favourite line in this part ----> 😂🤣

"Jasleen jaate jaate apni bahu ko bhi leke jao....."

That part was fab! 😂🤣

Well this is what I wanted Manbir to say to Jasleen.... so here we are. Glad you like it.

Originally posted by: averma4583

This was a really lovely update! Makers should have take. Cues from your work on how proceed! If they have blend the OG with your work, we would have had a flawless beautiful show with so much promising character development for everyone!!!! I just loved how SahAn are started to understand one another, and try to make the other feel more at ease. Even Manveer demonstrates what she expects Sahiba to do in case someone steps out of bounds!

Hi averma4583,

I love hearing from you. This is really a massive compliment in itself. And coming from you, it becomes more special since your work and mirai07's work motivated me to post my writing here.

Regarding the show, I think it is a general consensus among production teams that normal, positive does not sell anymore, which is why they show whatever they show these days. But since I am not part of it, I believe I can use the chance to write something positive for once. And that people on the forum like it, makes me hopeful for the change in the attitudes of production teams in future.

I will try to make upcoming chapters better.

It’s good to come back to your Liz because you truly flesh out the characters and the storyline well.

Angad and Sahiba are blooming slowly but surely and the greatest thing about them, communication between the two. Angad is putting in more effort of course but that is fitting too, he is the older and smarter person between them (unlike whatever the character in the show is).

I returned here for the stories and it was worth coming back to ❤️ Waiting for more.

Originally posted by: NidhaA

It’s good to come back to your Liz because you truly flesh out the characters and the storyline well.

Angad and Sahiba are blooming slowly but surely and the greatest thing about them, communication between the two. Angad is putting in more effort of course but that is fitting too, he is the older and smarter person between them (unlike whatever the character in the show is).

I returned here for the stories and it was worth coming back to ❤️ Waiting for more.

Hii,

I am happy that my story is the reason worth hanging out on this forum. 😊 I like consistency in the characters, which is what I project in my stories. And when I see that the characters and their consistent behaviors look natural, it comforts me, like a job done properly. 🤓

I would be posting the update soon, can't wait to hear your opinion on that!

Amazing update. Love the storyline

Please update soon