ZDMN EDT#19| 16/5 - pg 111 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_22

Ye writers kya kar rhe hai. Mera dimaag bhot zyada negativity speculate kar raha hai. Aaj ka precap... Felt like it's Param who was there to kill tilli.

Now when I think, kal ke episode me Param had slapped balli. I am having a feeling he did this because balli betrayed Charu and gang. And the others are taking it as his anger for his brother's death.

Also in today's episode, the way he became defensive when Batra sir and Monami came to meet him. He asked if Barkha had told them something.

Mai aur mera dimaag dono hi bhot kuch soch rhe hai. I need something to calm down now. Twin, have you written something?

Agar they show ki Param is with the terrorists, it will affect the Trp negatively. And god forbade I hope they aren't that keen on showing an imposter for Param too. Inka imposter imposter game show ko le dubega.

Though I loved the episode, the emotions and everything today too.

I wish they can give us an apt theory for all of this. 😂😂

I have no idea what they are making Param out to be. Maybe he's mentally stable and has been brainwashed. Maybe he's the boss.

But if he was the boss, wouldn't he hold at least a little bit of hostility to the academy? He seems perfectly fine with Monami and Batra Sir and even seems fine with the academy.

If anything, he seems to be recalling things. I still stand by what I said earlier.

Maybe, in Param's unstable mind, he thought since his brother never came back for him, he's the one responsible for all the torture they went through. Maybe they did make him do some things and convinced him what he was doing was in the name of the country.

Written something? Abhi toh ek FF ka chapter 1 post kara hai maine. Wo padh le. Wait, woh toh tumne padh li. Uske alaawa puchh rahi ho?

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I have no idea what they are making Param out to be. Maybe he's mentally stable and has been brainwashed. Maybe he's the boss.

But if he was the boss, wouldn't he hold at least a little bit of hostility to the academy? He seems perfectly fine with Monami and Batra Sir and even seems fine with the academy.

If anything, he seems to be recalling things. I still stand by what I said earlier.

Maybe, in Param's unstable mind, he thought since his brother never came back for him, he's the one responsible for all the torture they went through. Maybe they did make him do some things and convinced him what he was doing was in the name of the country.

Written something? Abhi toh ek FF ka chapter 1 post kara hai maine. Wo padh le. Wait, woh toh tumne padh li. Uske alaawa puchh rahi ho?

Hmm. But we don't really have any proof that he isn't hostile towards anyone. I don't know, I just feel there's something. Something subtle.

Him being brainwashed and tortured and maybe made to do something he is guilty of is something I can relate to. He does looks a bit guilty, then confused and sad and angry. Looks like there are going to be so many layers.

Yeah. I am asking for something new if you have written. But still I am at the moment reading your previous works. 😂🤣

yeh Param sabke dimag chakara raha hai.........

akhir kya hai ye insan..

but he looked smart in army uniform and all cleaned up.

So looks like Balli saw his trying ti kill Tilli.... if Balli goes to Batra sir or Monu they will not believe him off course...

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_22

Hmm. But we don't really have any proof that he isn't hostile towards anyone. I don't know, I just feel there's something. Something subtle.

Him being brainwashed and tortured and maybe made to do something he is guilty of is something I can relate to. He does looks a bit guilty, then confused and sad and angry. Looks like there are going to be so many layers.

Yeah. I am asking for something new if you have written. But still I am at the moment reading your previous works. 😂🤣

He doesn't seem to be hostile towards anyone. Like, even in the tone. Today, when he was talking to Monami and Batra Sir, he seemed lost in his thoughts, a little scared but not hostile towards them.

I don't know. Maybe he had been brainwashed, maybe he's broken under the pressure and turned to the bad side. Ab yeh toh sab tab hi pata chalega jab reveal hoga.

Aww, it feels so nice to have people demand to read my work and be eager to read it. 😳 I am writing Chapter 2 of it.

Us mein, I plan to have Moran's first meeting and SidSa's first meeting. It'll be very different from the show. Not sure if you'll like it since the show one was excellent (especially of Karan-Monami) but... don't know. And no, I didn't forget about Faizi-Koel. I have a later meeting planned for them which will be in chapter 3.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

He doesn't seem to be hostile towards anyone. Like, even in the tone. Today, when he was talking to Monami and Batra Sir, he seemed lost in his thoughts, a little scared but not hostile towards them.

I don't know. Maybe he had been brainwashed, maybe he's broken under the pressure and turned to the bad side. Ab yeh toh sab tab hi pata chalega jab reveal hoga.

Aww, it feels so nice to have people demand to read my work and be eager to read it. 😳 I am writing Chapter 2 of it.

Us mein, I plan to have Moran's first meeting and SidSa's first meeting. It'll be very different from the show. Not sure if you'll like it since the show one was excellent (especially of Karan-Monami) but... don't know. And no, I didn't forget about Faizi-Koel. I have a later meeting planned for them which will be in chapter 3.

Hmm... Maybe, I am thinking too much. Solving too much questions does that to you, I guess?

You should by now know that we can never NOT like your work twin. You are an amazing writer. So don't you again start with your self analytical sessions. Let us be the judge here😂🤣. Aur else, "tu phir boli!" 😂😂 I AM WAITING... Scratch that... I am eagerly eyeing out towards my notification to know about the update. 🤣🤣

if its total saans bahu drama, they have ways of re-inventing a love story

They show separation track, memory lost, galat-faimi, heroin staying away from hero due to blackmail ,memory loss, leap............. and we get to see same couple re-inventing their love...

but realistic (relatively) shows like these,, we dnt get it... its one shot or at max 2 shot we can see love story blooming...

So the more different way to re0visit this story the better,,, and we can do it via FF

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Hey. Come and discuss in this EDT. That one is finished.

I really felt bad for Barkha, especially that scene where she is sitting on the floor and recalling the moment Param pushed her away and Monami telling her Karan was martyred. Loved Shriya's acting. 👍🏼

Something is definitely wrong with Param. No idea what though.

I really liked that scene where Monami talks to Karan's photo. Trying to sambhaalo herself when all she wants is to break.

No idea about the Balli-Karan swap and all. No idea at all. Pata nahi. That scene where Monami walks away after sunaoing him and then that zoom in on Balli and that pause, I was just waiting for him to say something that'll confirm he's Karan. But he didn't. 🤔 At times, I think he's Balli, at times, I think he's Karan.

As for the Param-Batra Sir-Monami convo:

Batra Sir apologizes to Param for the way he was told of Karan's death and sympathizes with him. He comments about how weird destiny is that they returned Param to them and took Karan away.

Monami asks Param if he's okay. He responds in yes and then asks why they're here and if Barkha has said anything to them about him. The two get confused. Batra Sir clarifies they are here to inform that they'll give a last goodbye to Karan and that he should come in his uniform and that Karan would feel good about that.

Barkha comes with the uniform and assures them they'll be there. Monami asks what they'll tell to Baby. She replies that Baby is growing up and she'll tell the truth that her Chachu was martyred while fighting the enemies for the country.

Thanks for letting me know ❤️ And definitely I felt sad for Barkha , the actress enacted it so beautifully. I expect some scenes of Param and Barkha after he becomes Normal. She needs a vent out and a whole load of happiness and Baby deserves a loving dad. The scene between baby and bhabhi was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time🥺

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_22

Hmm... Maybe, I am thinking too much. Solving too much questions does that to you, I guess?

You should by now know that we can never NOT like your work twin. You are an amazing writer. So don't you again start with your self analytical sessions. Let us be the judge here😂🤣. Aur else, "tu phir boli!" 😂😂 I AM WAITING... Scratch that... I am eagerly eyeing out towards my notification to know about the update. 🤣🤣

Me thinking too much as well. Definitely the problems. Isliye apna attention maine story ki taraf shift maar diya. Already 9 different missions ke ideas hain mere paas. 😆

I'll tag you when I update, Twin. 👍🏼 I'll do it as soon I am done with the chapter. Hopefully, aaj raat hi ho jaaye since I have a lot of ideas for the dialogues toh bahut zyaada nahi sochna.

And the precap.

It was definitely Param and the way Tilli was apologizing to him , it did seem like he is the boss. And in the precap I felt that it isn't Bali but Karan coz Bali doesn't have the courage to do all this. I feel that Param has been brutally tortured and brainwashed into becoming a terrorist.

I just hope the makers don't make him plain negative especially since He has been an appreciated soldier from the very first episode.

Originally posted by: FairyWings1234

And the precap.

It was definitely Param and the way Tilli was apologizing to him , it did seem like he is the boss. And in the precap I felt that it isn't Bali but Karan coz Bali doesn't have the courage to do all this. I feel that Param has been brutally tortured and brainwashed into becoming a terrorist.

I just hope the makers don't make him plain negative especially since He has been an appreciated soldier from the very first episode.

Feels like Captain America/Winter Soldier😆 mind control would be an interesting turn.