Let Me Love You ♥️ A MaAn story- completed / 14.11 - Page 8

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Posted: 3 years ago
#71

May I say it was little hot and sweet.

Well penned down dear.👏

Posted: 3 years ago
#72

thank you thank you thank you so much for the lovely comments🤗


will post the last part very soon, gotto run my Sunday errands now, boriinggggg!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#73

Bs inni baato pe to anuj ki dil aa jata hai... Awesome dear💓💓

Posted: 3 years ago
#74

Teaser pg 1

Part 1: pg 2

Part 2: pg 5

Part 3: pg 7

Part 4: pg 9



Part 5:


“Anu” he called her name softly when he felt her tremble slightly against him...perhaps it was the midnight cold breeze that made her shiver he thought...


“hmmmm” she replied in a mildly miffed tone, not wanting to disturb the perfect proximity of her face close to his heart where she could hear his heartbeat loud and alive...


Drawing her hair off her face, he tucked them gently behind her ear and said “Anu andar chalein tumhein thand lag rahi hai”


“nahi abhi nahi” knowing well that she would refuse, he wrapped his arm around and pulled her closer to keep her warm and she gladly snuggled in so close that his strong manly scent made her giddy.



A few moments later he kissed her hand again and locked her fingers with his...then placing her hand on his heart he cautiously asked...

”Anu...iss rishte ka kya naam hai?”



Reluctantly, she pulled herself up and looked at him purposely...her hand still twined with his, she gently dragged him to her side and put his hand on her chest and said “Anuj iss rishte ka koi naam nahi, kyuki aap toh pyaar se bohot aage nikal gaye”


She wanted him to know how much she valued him and his unconditional love for her...


He quietly listened with modestly downcast eyes, cause to him loving her was second nature...it was something that had become a large part of him, something he was immensely proud of, a feeling that gave him a reason to live.



She wanted him to know how eager she was to return his love, though she knew it would take her a lifetime and more to pay him back in kind, she wished to start right this moment...



Moving his hand from her chest to her face, she stroked it with her lips and fervidly said “Anuj main jaanti hoon ki aapne badle mein kuch nahi chaaha...par ab meri baari hai pyaar jataane ki.....”



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Rushing back into the room to avoid getting drenched by the unexpected rain shower, Anuj briskly ran one hand through his hair and looked at the other to cherish her touch on it...



She noticed him smile and felt a little tingly thinking of it herself...

Is this what love feels like? she asked herself coyly and ‘indeed’ replied her heart...



Rubbing her arms to keep busy, she pretended to look out to enjoy the raindrops falling on the glass door...there was again a very awkward yet enjoyable silence in the room.


He felt it too and though he never wanted her to leave, he knew having her there any longer would be wrong....


Posing to check if she was wet, he walked to the bathroom to fetch a towel and said “bohot raat ho gayi hai na, tumhe tumhare room tak chod doon?”


Hoping she would understand, he handed her the towel and held on to the question...”hmm” she nodded and wiped her dry clothes.


As he turned around to get his phone, he instantly stopped at the strong jerk he felt when her arms slid in from the back up to his chest as she pulled him in a flaming embrace...



He felt her heaving breath on his back as he thrusted her closer. She was glad he couldn't see how vulnerable she looked in that moment...She hugged him tight and he held on tighter.



“Anuj mai aapse bohot bohot bohot pyaar karti hoon” her words threw him in a frenzy and she felt relieved and alive...he had never felt this feeling before, the rewarding sense of acceptance and belonging was sweeter than honey and stronger than his will...



Reeling with passion and not wanting the emotion to end, he plucked her arms off his chest and towed her around to face him...she couldn’t get herself to look up to his face, her face turned a shade darker than the pink she was wearing...



“Anu!” she stared at the floor as her head felt dizzy.

“Anu” he called her name again making it sound like the sweetest name ever.

“Anu meri taraf dekho, look at me?” this time she gave in and timidly lifted her head to play with his piercing gaze...


Stepping closer than the closest he could get , he ardently scooped her face in his hands and let his touch linger on her soft skin...


Then wiping the unseeable tears with his thumb, he fervently stared at her gorgeous face...


Relishing the chaotic closeness, she watched him watch her lovingly...


This was the moment he wished to live for eternity, with her, with them being one...



Hopelessly giving in to the insane temptation, he panted as he inched closer to her face until she could feel his warm and sensuous breath on her bare neck...”let me love you’ he whispered and intimately pressed his lips on hers...





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ok that was not what I expected and wasn't as long I know, sorry.

I did want something intense but kinda got carried away? oh well, it is what it is☺️ accha the songs here are aaj jaane ki zidd na karo by Arijit, love the intimacy in it...or Shayad from Love Aaj Kal 2 which is quite nice too...lagja gale is still too precious to use on this one I thought😌

so yeah that was the end to this series...please drop in a short comment to say if this was a decent enough end? I shall be back with something new next weekend hopefully, until then, keep active and enjoy the drama!


Goodnight!

Edited by hinz - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#77

My chutu sa heart is still doing dhak dhak aloud.

Last comment was hot n sweet, this is love dear.❤️👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#78

Uffff! Just when it was about to get very hot and steamy.

Let me love you! … what we all want for them… so glad they got it together and voiced everything.

Loved Anu’s forwardness…

Loved shayad… that song was so right for them.

So many beautiful lines in this…

”Anu...iss rishte ka kya naam hai?”

“Anuj iss rishte ka koi naam nahi, kyuki aapne toh pyaar se bohot aage nikal gaye”


This felt so real…it’s a rishte of love, love from both sides!

She wanted him to know how eager she was to return his love, though she knew it would take her a lifetime and more to pay him back in kind, she wished to start right this moment...

“Anuj main jaanti hoon ki aapne badle mein kuch nahi chaaha...par ab meri baari hai pyaar jataane ki.....”

All of the lines leading Anuj’s last words

flaming embrace… so hot 🔥

Bohot bohot bohot pyaar 🥰


really enjoyed reading this… sad it’s come to an end but loved the ending.

I really enjoyed this Story and I am looking forward to a whole new story next week 😄


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Posted: 3 years ago
#79

Aww ending on a high note. Thanks for writing this story.👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#80

🥰🥰just wow! You made “The hopelessly in love at this age feeling” sound so endearing!!

I so wish in show the Anuj and Anu will act little bold after reading this 😉

Simply amazing. Keep writing for us crazy MaAn lovers plz🥰😍

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