IshRa FF - Tu hi manzil dil tera musaafir (pt 5- pg 7) 15th may - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting start

So ishra r married

But ishita not happy with it

Why ?

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Part one:


IshRa reached to their room after getting a warm welcome by the members of Bhallas. The soon Rinky, Raman's sister dropped Ishita at the entrance of room and left off, Raman locked the door and recieved a tight slap on his face. He was shocked. He looked at Ishita holding his cheeks with one hand.

"Ishita, what's wrong with you? Tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi hai kya? Main jab keh raha hoon ki Akash tumhare liye sahi ladka nahi tha tab bhi tum samajhne ko taiyar nahi ho." He said angrily as she slapped him for no reason and adding to this, she isn't trusting him.

Ishita pointed a finger on his face and replied back,"Shut up Raman! Who are you to decide ki mere liye kon sahi hai aur kon galat? Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki tum mere liye bane ho? Mujhe dhokha diya hai tumne! DHOKHA!" She shouted crying helplessly and hid her face in her palms.

Raman couldn't see her like this. He moved closer to her and said cupping her face under his palms like a baby, "Calm down Ishita! You shouldn't cry like this." Wiping off her tears, " tumhe andaza nahi hai ki mai tumhe kitna chahta hoon. Isiliye tum is tarah behave kar rahi ho. I love you so much, meri jaan."

Ishita looked into his eyes when he said so politely. He brought her more closer and was going to hug her when she pushed him and said, "But I hate you Raman! Tumne mujhse mera pyar china hai. Mai tumse nafrat kar sakti hoon, pyaar nahi."

Raman- Ishitaaa, I understand tumhe bura lag raha Akash ke bare me soch kar but tum hi batao agar wo tumse pyar karta tha to mandap me kyu nahi aya? Kyu tumhe akela chor chala gaya wo? Shadi kyu nahi ki usne tumse? Answer me.

Ishita was tongue tied listening him. She realised he was right at his place. She thought, "Raman se nafrat karti hoon mai ye sach hai but unki sachchai se bhi mai mukar nahi sakti. Akash ne mujhe dhokha diya? Wo mujhse shadi nahi karna chahta tha? Agar pyar karta tha to last moment usne muu kyu mod lia? Hamari shadi honi thi ajj, but wo aya nahi. Aur uski jagah in logo ne meri shadi Raman se kara di!"

Raman broke the ice seeing her lost in her thoughts.

R- Ishita, hamari shadi hum dono ke marzi se hui hai, tmhare khilaf nahi. But mai samajh sakta hoon tumhe waqt chahiye hoga cheezo ko samajhne me. Mujhe kisi baat ki jaldi nahi hai Ishita, tum meri biwi ho aur ab mujhe tum par pura haq hai.

Ishita heard him saying about his rights on her and looked at him in nervous. Raman noticed her being uneasy and said immediately, "Sahi suna tumne Ishita, mera pura haq hai tum par. But tension ki koi baat nahi hai, jab tak tum na chaho mai tum par koi haq nahi jatane wala." He smiled at the end which brought a slight smile on Ishita's face too.

Ishita felt good listening him.

I- I don't know kehne ke liye kya bacha hai. Ye baat mai pehle clear karna chahti hoon ki hamare rishte me koi pyar nahi hai aur na hoga! Mera dil sirf Akash ke liye dhadakta tha aur rahega. Aur mai bahut ache se janti hoon wo mujhe dhokha nahi dega. Mujhe waqt chahiye jab tak tum mujhse dur raho!

He nodded simple as he knew Ishita is definitely going to find out the truth behind Akash not coming to mandap to get married and he too wanted her to know this by herself so she realizes Akash was not a good boy and accept her marriage with him!

R- okay Ishita, jaisa tumhe thik lage! Abhi ke liye tum bed par soo jao fresh ho kar! Mai guest room me soo lunga!

I- Agar aunty ko kharab laga to..I mean unka beta apna room chor kae guest room me...

Raman interrupted- don't worry, she will understand. We are not normal married couple. Our relationship is going to take time to get strong.

Saying so, he left the room after taking his night suit with him while Ishita was seeing him going and his words "our relationship is going to take time to get strong" echoed in her ears.


That's all guys, hoped you liked the update. Please hit the like button and comment down your response. Buddy me for the PMs!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Nice starting

Plz continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Superb update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#15

Interesting start.

Pl continue soon.

It would be nice if you could mention / describe their dressing style n looks at the earliest.

It helps in forming a picture of ishra in the mind .

Helps in following the story n the leads more .

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Awesome update waiting to read further continue soon

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Part two:


Next morning, Raman was the first to wake up. He opened his eyes and found himself in the guest room. He recalled last night happenings and made his way to their room to get ready for the day. He thought to knock on the door but stopped thinking her sound sleep will get disturbed. So he silently got into the room and found Ishita sleeping very peacefully in her bridal attire only as if an angel has stepped down on land. He couldn't stop admiring her and moved near to the bed and settled down around her cautious enough not to disturb her sleep. He caressed her hair lovingly and gently and drifted in Ishita's thoughts.

"Today is the new beginning of our life, Ishita. We are going to be a couple for the rest of our life and this feeling is heavenly. I love u a lot to lose you. Haan maine haar man li thi tumhare junoon ko dekh kar uss Akash ke liye but kismat ne saath diya to zindagi sawar gayi. Tum meri biwi ban gayi. Isse zyada aur kuch nahi chahiye rab se mujhe. Upar wale ne mujhe tumse ek rishte me baandh diya..ab jo pyar ki kami hai hum dono ke darmiyaa, wo mai launga. Itna pyar ki tum duniya bhul jaogi mere ishq me."

He adored her for a long time and climbed down from the bed so she doesn't wake up. Then he got his clothes and went to get ready. After a while, he came out wrapping a towel around his waist and rubbing his wet hair when his eyes fell upon Ishita who has just woken up and was looking lost in her thoughts. Raman went near her and broke her stupor.

R- ishita.

Ishita responded hearing his soft voice calling her name. A smile appeared on her lips unknown to her but disappeared soon when she realised she's smiling looking at him, actually staring at her handsome hubby who was looking too dashing.

I- huh?

R- go and get freshen up and come down for some rituals. Everybody is waiting for us.

Ishita just nodded and left the bed and went to open her suitcase to get her dress for the day when he stopped her saying, "ishita, don't mind but your clothes are arranged in the cupboard. I agree you don't love me now but we are married in the eyes of people and we have to act accordingly in front of them. "

I- i know this Raman but what are you trying to say?

R- I mean to say, go and select your clothes from the cupboard as there are varieties for the married woman. Maa has especially selected those for you.

I- okay, don't worry.

Saying so, ishita got up and went near cupboard while Raman smiled seeing her agree on his words so easily. Ishita stepped into the washroom while Raman started getting ready. He was combing his hair when he heard Ishita shouting from washroom. He ran near washroom and asked knocking, "Ishita what happened? Should I come inside?" He asked getting tensed.

I- yes please come Raman!

Raman ran into the washroom when ishita hugged him tightly.

R- kya hua ishita?

He encircled his arms around her and caressed her back.

I- please lift me in your arms Raman, waha par chipkali hai, mujhe bahut dar lagta hai unse.

Raman smiled hearing her and took her in his arms protectively and came out of the washroom.

R- tum chipkali se darti ho? He laughed and tried to tease her.

I- to kya hua? Apko dar nahi lagta unse to kya ye meri galti hai batao.

She asked making a baby face which Raman couldn't stop admiring and planted a soft gentle kiss on her nose.

R- you are a baby, my little baby.

Ishita smiled hearing him and engulfed in his arms more fearing lizard when she realized what was she doing. She quickly made a serious face and said- mujhe niche utaro. I'm fine.

Raman obeyed her and put her down.

R- tum yahi ruko mai aata hoon.

Saying so, he entered into the washroom and shooed away the lizard and came back.

R- ab tumhe darne ki zarurat nahi, mai hu hamesha tumhare saath.

Ishita narrowed her eyebrows when he continued- i mean maine bhaga diya hai usse..tum jaa kar fresh ho sakti ho.

I- that's fine.

Ishita went away from there while Raman smiled ruffling his hair- beta Raman..taiyar ho ja apni biwi ko apne baaho me hamesha sama lene ke liye.

Soon Ishita got ready and came downstairs when her eyes fell on Raman who was having his morning tea and chatting with his parents. She smiled looking at him thinking how calm and a nice person he is! He was looking so carefree as if nothing has happened. No any changes has taken in his life and was freely living his every moment. Toshi ji noticed her looking at Raman and beamed a smile which went noticed by Raman. He looked in the direction where his mother was looking and found Ishita's staring at him. He felt good. He did a happy dance in his mind seeing her melting in his love a little. He was going to say something when his eyes dropped at her appearance. She was looking very beautiful in red saree with golden embroidery. She was wearing a sleek diamond necklace around her neck and jhumkas in her ears. Her round almond eyes were shinning after applying kohl and and a dark mauve red lipstick. He couldn't get his eyes off when he noticed she had applied sindoor and smiled a bit.

T- puttar tu udhar ki kar rahi hai? Aaja idhar hamare paas..rasam shuru hone wich waqt lagni hai.

Ishita came back to senses and nodded.

She touched the senior Bhallas feet and recieved their blessings.

Mr Bhalla- puttar, don't worry for anything. We know you are little uncomfortable with this new bond. Have plenty of time to understand each other. We just want to see both of you happy!

T- haan ishita puttar, tu hamari bahu nahi beti ban kar reh! Kisi chiz ki chinta mat karna. Samjhi?

Ishita downcasted her eyes and smiled nodding her head.

Soon their rituals started and everybody enjoyed while Ishita's thoughts were somewhere else. She was looking for free time so she could find out about Akash. Raman noticed her and thought to give her some lone time. He excused her from everybody and brought her to their room.

R- ishita tum rest karo, mai office jata hu. Kisi chiz ki zarurat ho to ghar par sab hai..kisi se bhi keh sakti ho.

I- hmm, okay.

Raman left for office while Ishita looked at her hand filled with chooras which toshiji had made her wear as ritual. She liked them a lot though she tried to disliked them. She remembered something and picked up her mobile. She dialled somebody's number and waited for the person to pick it up.

I- hello Akash?

A- ishita?

Ishita's eyes welled up listening his voice. She asked crying, "where are you? Tum aaye kyu nahi shadi karne mujhse? Dekho meri shadi Raman se ho gayi. But mai to tumse pyar karti hu na, please mujhe lene aa jaao. Mai tumhare saath rehna chahti hu, Raman ke saath nahi"

A- listen Ishita, don't call after I cut the call! Maine kabhi tujhse pyar kiya hi nahi tha. To be honest, I was just after your money! Since your father denied to give us your property after marriage. I left you, I'm sorry but forget me.

He cut the call after saying this. Ishita was numb to react anything! She never believed Akash was after just her property. Her parents tried to make her understand but she was so much in love with Akash that she failed to identify! Tears were rolling down her eyes as water flows in rivers! Shr couldn't help but fainted.


Long update! I know! I wanted to post this very quick because I'm very keen to know do you want to read further? I'm not very happy with thr response but posted this because of those who liked nd commented! If I don't get 40+ likes, I'll drop it.


Thanks.

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Awesome update waiting to read more continue soon

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Awesome update

Continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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She fainted, don't tell me she is pregnant with akash child now...


Anyways don't be fishearted, people love stories but don't leave in middle n go.

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