Jindal House
Night Before Karwachauth
It was Akshat & Guddan's second karwachauth. They love each other but don't have the guts to confess it as both of them don't want to ruin their friendship. They decided they will confess it on karwachauth day by keeping fast for each other. Akshat returned from restaurant & went to his room. He bought a saree for her, as he entered the room he saw Guddan was struggling to eat. Seeing her struggle he started laughing & went near her. She just gave him a angry look.
AJ(smiling):Aisa joker ki tarah kyu kha rahi ho
G:Toh kya Karen haat mein mehendi lagi hai aur hume bohat bhook lagi hai
Guddan showed her mehendi hands to Akshat. He just smiled & sat beside her & started feeding her.
AJ:Lo main khila deta hun waise mere liye vrat rakh rahi ho kya?
G:Haan naa.. humara matlab hai Dadi ne rakhne ko kahan.. aur waise bhi pichli baar bhi toh rakha tha aur issh bar toh aap mere dost hai.. aur dost ke liye kuch bhi
Akshat was happy hearing this but decided to tease her.
AJ:Lekin Guddan rakh paogi matlab pura din bina khaye
G(angrily):Bilkul rakh payenge.. humse yeh bohat ache se ho payega dekh lena
Akshat just nodded. Guddan then saw the saree box he bought for her.
G:Yeh humare liye
AJ(nervous): Haan maa ne bola tumhare liye leke anneko
G(in mind):Hume laga Jindal Saab apne maan se laye hai humare liya par nehi.. Khadus se expect karna hi bekr hai
AJ(in mind):Jhoot bolne ki kya zaroorat thi bol deta khud laya hoon lekin phir kya reason deta
AJ:Chalo jaldi so jao kal subha jaldi uthna hai
Guddan nodded & both of them went to sleep. Here, Durga & Saraswati heard their conversation.
S:Durga di yeh Guddan toh vrat rakhne wali hai
D:Chinta maat karo Saru kal Guddan apna vrat pura nehi kar payegi
Both gave each other a devilish smile.
Next Day
Guddan woke up early & got ready for sargi & went to hall. Dadi handed her sargi. Durga & Saraswati made a face.
Da:Yeh le beta teri sargi
Just then Akshat came downstairs. All were shocked as Akshat never woke up early on this day.
Da:Lalla tu itni jaldi kyun uth gaya
AJ:Utha nehi hun maa neend toot gayi apki issh ladli bahu ki wajah se itna awaz jo kar rahi thi
G:Ekdm humpe ilzam maat lagayi ulta humne kamse kam awaz kiyi hai.. aur agar neend toot gayi hai phir sojayi
AJ:Sone jaraha hun pyas lagi hai pani peene jaraha hun... aap log continue kijiye
Akshat went to kitchen & all the ladies started having their sargi. Akshat looked around to see if anyone was coming or not. After he checked the coast was clear he started to having sargi which was kept on kitchen table.
AJ(in mind):Tum agar meri lambi umar ke liya vrat rakh sakti ho toh mein kyun nehi
After finishing his sargi he went to back to his room normally. After all the ladies completed their sargi they also went to their room to catch some sleep. When Guddan came Akshat was already sleeping, as she went to her side she noticed the water bottle in their room was full.
G(in mind):Pani toh tha phir kyun kitchen mein gaye..
Guddan confused went to sleep.
Later
Akshat was getting ready to leave for restaurant. Guddan came to room with his coffee & gave to him. He took it & thought how to avoid this.
AJ:Guddan mera ek kaam karogi study mein jao wahan ek red file woh leke aao thoda pls
Gudaan went from there & in the meantime he throws the coffee in washroom. As she entered he acted like he drank the coffee & took the file from her.
AJ:Acha bye
G:Acha suniye
AJ:Kahiye
G:Aaj jaldi aana pichli baar ki tarah late kiya toh bohat bura hojayega
AJ:yes madam
And Akshat left smiling. As Guddan was going somewhere she started feeling uneasy. She ran to washroom & vomited. After vomiting she came out holding her head.
G:Arey bapre sargi toh puri nikal gayi abb pura din kaise khaali pet rahungi
Durga & Saraswati smiled looking at Guddan's condition from outside.
D:Abb mein bhi dekhti hun kaise yeh kaise apna vrat pura karti hai
FLASHBACK
Durga & Saraswati mixed mushrooms in Guddan's sargi as she is allergic to it.
FLASHBACK END
S:Ab ayega asli maaza
Evening
Guddan was getting ready for karwachauth paath. She wore the pink saree which was brought by Akshat. She asked Durga to conduct the paath this time as she doesn't want to fight with her today. As she was wearing jewellery she started feeling giddy & sat on bed holding her head. She already vomited two-three times since morning.
G:Bash thodi der ki baat hai.. Guddan sab ho payega
Again she got up & started getting ready. As she was sick she was looking a little bit pale also. Akshat came into room & saw Guddan & was mesmerised. He went to her & stood behind her.
G:Aap ageya
AJ:Ab aana toh tha tumne hukum jo diya tha
Both of them smiled & Akshat showed her his bag & indicated her to look into it. She saw inside the bag & saw lots of chocolates, she looked at him confused.
AJ:Tum yeh chocolates khalo kisiko kuch pata nehi chalega tumhara chehra dekh kar pata chal raha ki kitni bhook lagi hai
G(angrily):Dekhiye Jindal Saab teen bate humesha yaad rakhiye. Pehli ki hum na vrat rakha hai aisa nehi todenge, dusri hum yeh vrat chand nikalne ke baat hi todenge aur teesri baat batane ki zaroorat nehi hai apko samaj achuki hogi.
Saying this she left the room. Akshat scratches his neck.
AJ(in mind):Ab manana padega
Here Guddan came downstairs thinking how to express her feelings to him.
G(in mind):Hume chand nikelne se pehle apni dil ki baat batani padegi Jindal Saab ko
All of a sudden she got an idea & went back to room. She checked if Akshat was there in the room & saw he went to washroom. She quickly opened her cupboard & pulled out a packet & kept on bed, then she quickly wrote a letter & kept with the packet & left the room. Akshat came out from washroom & saw the letter & packet. He opened the packet & saw it was cream colour kurta. He opened the letter.
Letter
Jindal Saab bohat din se ek baat kehni thi par himat nehi juta paa rahi thi aaj himat jutayi hai.. Hum apse bohat pyar karte hai Jindal Saab.. I love you.. agar aap yeh kurta pehen ke aate hai toh hum manage apne hume apni patni ki darja de diya hai..
Guddan
Akshat was very happy reading the letter. He wore the kurta.
AJ(in mind):Tumne himat dikhayi hai mein bhi tumhe aaj dil ki baat kehdunga
Karwachauth paath was completed & all the ladies gathered on terrace. All men also came except Akshat. By this time Guddan is now totally weak & was searching Akshat. Suddenly Akshat pulled her in a corner & caged her between his arms. Guddan looked down & saw he wore the kurta which she brought for him. She smiled & hugged him tightly. He also returned back the hug.
AJ(whispering):Tumne toh apni dil ki baat kehdi Guddan.. ab meri bari.. mein bhi tumse bohat pyar karta hu Guddan.. I love you..
G(whisping):I love you too Jindal Saab..
Again Guddan started feeling giddy & was about to fall but Akshst holded her in time.
AJ(worried):Kya hua mein aate hi notice kar raha hun tumhari tabiyat thik nehi hai kya
G:Woh
L(shouted):Arey Sab jaldi aayi ye chand Nikal aaya
G:Chaliye chand nikal gaya
Both went towards everyone & started doing rituals. After rituals Akshat made drank Guddan water.
AJ:Ab mujhe pilayo
G:Matlab aapne bhi vrat rakha hai.. par apne toh coffee piyi thi na
AJ:Haan toh tum rakh sakti ho toh mein kyun nehi aur maine tumhara kamre se nikal teh hi coffee phek diya tha
G:Kya zaroorat thi.. aap bhi na
Guddan made Akshat drank water & broke his fast. Seeing all this Durga & Saraswati were fuming in anger as their plan failed & top of that Akshat also fasted for Guddan. As Akshat was about to made Guddan eat sweet she fainted & falls in his arms. Akshat was shocked & patted her.
AJ:Guddan aakhen kholo.. Guddan.. Kishore jaldi doctor ko phone karo..
K:Haan
Akshat took Guddan to their room & laid her down. After sometime doctor arrived & checked Guddan.
Doc:Inka blood pressure fall karne ki wajah se yeh behos hogayi hai kal se inhone kuch khaya nehi kya?
L:lekin doctor sasuma ne toh subha sargi khayi thi bohat sari aur kal raat ko bhi dinner kiya tha
Guddan came to concious & sat up on bed. Ahshat sat beside her.
Doc:Apne kal se kuch khaya nehi kya
G:Khaya toh tha magar
Da:Magar kya beta
G:Woh aaj subha se bohat baar ulti huyi hai uske baat se kuch nehi khaya
All were shocked hearing this, Durga & Saraswati became scared.
AJ:Bataya kyu nehi
Doc:Apko kisibhi khane ke cheez se allergy hai?
G:Woh Kaju aur Mushroom se
Doc:Hosakta apne galti se kuch kha liya ho.. inhe kuch khila dijiye aur yeh dawai dijiye subha tak thik hojayegi..
Doctor left.
L:Sasuma ko inse allergy isliye kisibhi khane mein yeh nehi diya tha
Akshat also remembered when he ate sargi those things were not there. Guddan remembered today when she entered in kitchen she saw mushrooms empty box & looked at Durga & Saraswati, she realized it was done by them.
G:Chodiye na yeh sab... app log jakar kha lijiye waise hi bohat raat ho chuki hai..
All left & before leaving Laxmi kept Ahshat & Guddan's food. Ahshat & Guddan fed each other.
AJ:Ainda aisi harqat maat karna samjhi
Guddan nodded & hugged him tightly. Akshat also hugged.
G:Yeh karwachauth hum zindagi bhar nehi bhoolenge
AJ:Kyun
G:Kyunki hume humara pyar jo milgaya.. I love you Jindal Saab
AJ:I love you too Guddan
And both of them spend their night together in each other's arms as husband & wife.
The End
Finally completed.. Sorry for grammatical mistakes & long one. Hope you guys like it.. Ab jo track chal raha hai uska kuch nehi karsakte hai toh yeh parke thoda khush ho jao.
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