AvNeil FF: 'A MILLIONAIRE'S First Love Thread #3 (Upto Chap 68) - Page 103

Originally posted by: Binh

Wow just wow... Aww.! Thank u

I am so eager to tell you that in the fight for making me lose all my heart .. It was neither Neil nor avni who won, even though they lost with a tiniest of the tiniest possible difference.. It was the little poem which has all my heart... I loved it way too much! Kudos to you for writing that and this entire ff! Wow.!! Now thats first.! I am so glad that My simple poem made such impact on ur heart.! Its always heartening to know that ur hardwork is being appreciated.!

I was amazed to see how the girl turned the tables and teased Neil even when it was her who should have been teased.. Bring on the unexpectedness.! 😉 I can totally understand Neil's plight as of how should he tell her that the stunts she pulled off last night were way more tough for him than any of the stunts of kkk! Hahaha.! Thats so true.! The first thing was to handle her and the second is to tell her.! But atleast she remember about the kiss.!

I loved how avni was comfortable with Neil and acting soo adorable! I so wanted to pull her cheeks when she was being soo tipsy and confused but then satisfied myself by sending flying kisses to her! IKR.! Even me too.! I was all the way like "aww" she is such a gem.! I must thank tequila for bringing out this never before seen avatar of avni which was all needy, dependent and so easy and relaxed ! Taqueilla is the biggest AvNeil shipper.!

I bet if Neil is allowed to do all that his heart desires that too without any second thoughts he is never ever going to resist tequila! Hahahaha.! Infact he is going to recommend this very often to his harsh on herself fiancee.!

Drunken diaries were certainly among my most favorite chapters even though I love to read and reread all the chapters whenever I get time. Aww, i am touched.! Thank u so much.!

Update soonish!

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it

superb

update soon

Originally posted by: Reenaxavneil

Well I'm not a big writer such as yourself I have just written a few Avneil stories on wattpad. No no no.! I am also not a big writer or even close to it.! Infact very recently started writing fiction and still on learning stage.! This is my first ever long FF.! I will try to read ur stories. 😊 Usually I imagine what I want to see in a chapter and jot it down so I can expand on it later. Even i do the same.! But I can understand your block, I still haven't managed to complete a chapter I was supposed to pen down dys ago. Hahahaha.! Happens to all of us.! So if that is the case then do take your time because I know your next chapter will be back with a bang! Aww.! Keep ur faith alive on me.!

Originally posted by: Shaiksafia

Omg she kissed him [:D/] Yeah.!!!! She kissed him.!!!! 😳 love love Avni's drunken dairies absolutely beautiful and thrilling chapters So glad to know that u enjoyed this sequence.!
Still can't believe she kissed him uff I am blushing 😳 Mr Self control ki toh are daath deni padegi banda kya cheez hai 😉 IKR.!! He is such a principled person.!
Judah again 😭
The whole conversation about whether Avni is in love or not was adorable Thanks for pointing that out.! I am glad that u liked it.!

Originally posted by: chavi12345

Awsome update...

Originally posted by: Ankita713

Heyy! So sorry for my long absence and that too during the the best three updates. No problem at all.! College k admission mein thoda uljhi huyi thi but now its all settled. Oh wow.! College admissions n all.! Thats great.! I hope u have locked ur decisions with full heart Now let me read the chapters. Coming back in a jiffy!😉 Take ur own time.! 😊

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hey,
Thank u so much for ur lovely review.!
Means a lot to me.!

Much love!

Originally posted by: iris_diaries

OMG, yeh chapter toh meri chocolate box ki tarah sweet or demanding hogaya. Taqueilla is like FiveStar...jo khaya so kho gaya. And here Avni is the cutie cutie James chocolate chewing gum ki tarah humare Dairymilk Nestle bar Millionaire ke upar chipke baithi hai. Aur humare Millionaire ki sane brain Kinderjoy ki tarah dance karrahi hai.😊😊 Yeh lo, yaha hum Taqueilla, kiss and morning wood pe aagae or aap chocolates pe hi ataki hai.! 😆😆

And this short poem, its just like a Ferroro rocher... securing a permanent place in our heart. So glad to know that.!

Maybe I overdid a bit.but u know what I have a wonderful sweet tooth.😊 Yeah i can see that.!

It feels so good and peaceful to know that Neil knows she already loves him. But who will be the most holy person to help her realise this. As DD said, Sabko dikhta hai, so that includes Neil too.! Well good question, you will have to wait a bit more to know who that person will be.!

BTW, maine socha it will be Avni who will get embarrased but here it seems the guess backfired. OMG, brain and heart might hide them under the opaque layer of our shin but those betraying hormones... they always spill the beans.😆 Unexpected rehne ka apna hi alag maza hai.! Why should boys have all the fun of teasing.! 😉

I was imagining how it would feel to have ur pillow moving up and down in a steady rhythme... earthquake or shockwave through HEART😉

Di... was Neil awake all the tie or only when Avni caressed his hairs? He woke up later.!

But today Avni did a great thing: continuously pleading her brain to play a recorded tape of the blissful kiss they had shared. Hmm.! Chalo atleast she remembered she kissed.!

She has really crossed a long way...right from uncertain to baby steps to caring to jealousy to indifference to press and finally longing to love.

Its really a great journey.👏 Eggzhactly.!!!! And all these stood out more coz of the pace of story.! As u can see we have reached the level of developing sexual tension and needs between them.!

Let Neil take his cold shower and calm down his exponentially aroused hormones.😉

What are ur concerns Di.. feel free to share to all of us.😕 Will surely do.!

take care

loads of love