OS - I WANTED YOU, AND NOW YOU'RE MINE!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys, Im back with a second part to my first OS - I WANT YOU, BUT CAN'T HAVE YOU. This one will continue from where the other one ended. Like you all know, I will be posting a tiny teaser first, so let me know what you think. For anyone who is new, do read the first one before this one, it will make a lot more sense. Lol. I will post the full OS soon. Hope you like it. Do leave comments and let me know what you think. Thank you guys for all your support and love so far. I hope I keep up to your expectations. Much Love. Davina.
PS: You will find my 1st OS posted on the Media Gallery on page 1.

TEASER:

I WANTED YOU, AND NOW YOU'RE MINE!

He sat at the edge of his chair watching her as she served everyone food. She deliberately kept smilling at him and bit her lips every now and then. She knew he was looking at her, and she knew that everything she did was turning him on. She needed to get revenge for what he did to her earlier, and this felt like the best way to do it.
Vedika walked towards Sahil with the rotis and placed two on his plate. As she moved her hand back, she grazed his arm, causing a tickling sensation to shoot through Sahil's body. She discreetly leaned into him and dragged her fingers up and down his back. He gave her looks to plead her to stop torturing him. She just smiled. When no one was looking, she took hold of his hand and placed it on her bare waist. Sahil retracted his hand back as quick as he could. He gave her a dagger look and all Vedika could do was bite her lips again and smile. It was only the beginning of dinner and she had already managed to arouse him, which was bad news for Sahil. He just needed to leave from there immediately, or else it would end in severe pain. Vedika found it amusing that Sahil couldn't get aroused, so she wanted to tease him more, unaware of the painful consequence for her lover. Little did she know that she would also bear the consequence.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Davina95

Hey guys, Im back with a second part to my first OS - I WANT YOU, BUT CAN'T HAVE YOU. This one will continue from where the other one ended. Like you all know, I will be posting a tiny teaser first, so let me know what you think. For anyone who is new, do read the first one before this one, it will make a lot more sense. Lol. I will post the full OS soon. Hope you like it. Do leave comments and let me know what you think. Thank you guys for all your support and love so far. I hope I keep up to your expectations. Much Love. Davina.

TEASER:

I WANTED YOU, AND NOW YOU'RE MINE!

He sat at the edge of his chair watching her as she served everyone food. She deliberately kept smilling at him and bit her lips every now and then. She knew he was looking at her, and she knew that everything she did was turning him on. She needed to get revenge for what he did to her earlier, and this felt like the best way to do it.
Vedika walked towards Sahil with the rotis and placed two on his plate. As she moved her hand back, she grazed his arm, causing a tickling sensation to shoot through Sahil's body. She discreetly leaned into him and dragged her fingers up and down his back. He gave her looks to plead her to stop torturing him. She just smiled. When no one was looking, she took hold of his hand and placed it on her bare waist. Sahil retracted his hand back as quick as he could. He gave her a dagger look and all Vedika could do was bite her lips again and smile. It was only the beginning of dinner and she had already managed to arouse him, which was bad news for Sahil. He just needed to leave from there immediately, or else it would end in severe pain. Vedika found it amusing that Sahil couldn't get aroused, so she wanted to tease him more, unaware of the painful consequence for her lover. Little did she know that she would also bear the consequence.

wowww looks interesting ..so this is just the teaser when can we have the full os ??? btw u r an amazing writer...😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lol lol 🤣
Poor sahil...what's his mistake only that now he is tasting his own medicine lol
And vedika is now acting like sahil her pati parmeshwar 🤣

Bechara biwiji k julm seh rha hai lol lol but wait wait she would also bear the consequence haha I know where would you lead this lol

Tell me one thing its the next day after that night na?

Only teaser will not please me...you have to post the os asap I'm dying to read this. I hope it will be ended in sahils room this time.


One suggestion Davina for new readers u can post the link of previous one it will be helpful for them as they don't know where to search n what so next time with full os post the link of last one.
And update soon
Edited by Parud7 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sholmes

wowww looks interesting ..so this is just the teaser when can we have the full os ??? btw u r an amazing writer...😳😳


Aww thank you so much. And yes very soon. It's half way there...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Parud7

Lol lol 🤣

Poor sahil...what's his mistake only that now he is tasting his own medicine lol
And vedika is now acting like sahil her pati parmeshwar 🤣

Bechara biwiji k julm seh rha hai lol lol but wait wait she would also bear the consequence haha I know where would you lead this lol

Tell me one thing its the next day after that night na?

Only teaser will not please me...you have to post the os asap I'm dying to read this. I hope it will be ended in sahils room this time.

One suggestion Davina for new readers u can post the link of previous one it will be helpful for them as they don't know where to search n what so next time with full os post the link of last one.
And update soon


Lol you are hilarious. Yeah Vedika is being naughty this time. You will see a few switches and changes in behaviour in this next piece. It will be really strange to read. I really think that people will find this one really weird. I know you are very impatient but the longer the wait, the better the outcome. Haha. Well my OS is in the media gallery. I will edit it and put that info up.
The 1st one ended in the morning. This teaser is from the same day but in the evening. So this teaser isnt from the beginning of the story, but from the middle of the story. I thought this part had more impact. So I took a bit out of the middle and posted that yet edited it a little so it doesn't give too much away...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Davina95


Lol you are hilarious. Yeah Vedika is being naughty this time. You will see a few switches and changes in behaviour in this next piece. It will be really strange to read. I really think that people will find this one really weird. I know you are very impatient but the longer the wait, the better the outcome. Haha. Well my OS is in the media gallery. I will edit it and put that info up.
The 1st one ended in the morning. This teaser is from the same day but in the evening. So this teaser isnt from the beginning of the story, but from the middle of the story. I thought this part had more impact. So I took a bit out of the middle and posted that yet edited it a little so it doesn't give too much away...

Naughty girl
So u make us to wait more n more don't know when thus wait gets over
So pls don't give this os to ur bf for proof reading otherwise it will take more weeks as u know he is late lateef lol

Nothing is weird when sadika are together. Don't know when the CVS will bring the romance onscreen better to read ur os its beautifully written amazing writer u r

Teaser aisa h to os kesa hoga n I know sahil vedika ko nhi chhodega. She has to pay for her naughtyness lol

Plus one thing will he call her vedikaji now like last time Maya said Abhi bhi vedikaji bulate ho...i hope this time he will say vedika n not "aap" only "tum"
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Posted: 7 years ago
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yayyy u r back with second part wohoo npw biwiji on roll haha torturing hubby aww plz post full OS asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Davina y u always tease us with your hot teaser😳😆
Love the teaser...eager to know what Sahil did earlier for being teasing badly by his biwi🤔😆

Plzz do update soon it looks super interesting and hot too😳☺️...jaldi update karo plzzz...waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow teaser is interesting I look forward ur update hope see this soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's superb just like the previous one 😉
Waiting to read the full OS

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