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Posted: 7 years ago

Dil to hai dil❤️

His attraction for her was out in the open for her to see, her own vulnerability and innocence was all out in the open for him to accept.

He scooted closer, she stirred stopping her stroking

"I am not going to kiss you Avantika he whispered "Not here, I will kiss you when we go back home, and you are in my bed he promised

Her body quivered as she went up in flames.

He lifted his head and buried his face in her neck, she lay on her back as she received his weight, she felt a strong pull, and a demanding rub of his lips on her neck under her ears, her insides ached at that hungry nip.

His upper body pressing down on hers, her arm now wrapped around his waist inside his tee, the warm embrace a comforting secure hold.

Their legs slowly looping coiling around each other, feeling each other's strength and softness and firmness.

"Bilqul nahi she whispered arching when she found his finger tips sneaking under her tee, turning away bashful and red

She felt under her left ear, secretly, it was sore.

She placed her palm to cool it off as he pulled her closer to his body

There was a knock on the door

He went still at first, she felt his breathing on the back of her neck, urgent and frustrated

His arm under her body, he attempted to fondle

"haritt she scolded wiggling, trying to free his arm, as she rolled over his upper body

Another bangle snapped

"Saari choodiyan tor rahe hain aap she said unhappily sitting up in a hurry since the knocking wouldn't subside

He lay back and stretched, reaching for her back, his finger tips feeling her back, tapping her bra strap

She swung away from him scrambling out of the bed, falling off with knotting up sheets impeding her walk

The noisy clank of her bangles agitating her more

She ran to the door

It was SURBHI

"I thot you back BUA she hugged and began to cry

"I am here, I will be here forever she picked up the tiny 7 year old

"Is Fa here?

"Hey there Harit sat up in bed

Picked up his phone and began to check email

Teeku ran out as fast as she could after brushing her teeth, thankfully noticing the scar he had left on her skin as she rinsed her mouth off, changing into another tee hurriedly

The family sat around the living room with various kinds of breakfast spread out in giant trays

"Arey wah uth gayin? Himani grinned

KOI NAHI CHHEDEGA hamari chhutki ko Dhruv waved a finger

"Siway HUM DONO KE Vibhu informed

The whole gang laughed hysterically

"You guys are cheap Teeku said sitting primly by her Dad

"Dhruv rehne do beta Shyam waved

"Dadd... ab shuru kaha kiye hain, achha Teeku, damaad ji thak gaye kya, abhi taq so rahe hain Vibhu growled making a face

"Nahi, aapne beer pilayi she spat back

"DO BEER pee unhoney Meeta ribbed

"Aapko kaise pata? Teeku questioned

"Hum AAPKI tarah nahi hain husband kamre mein aate hain to hum BAAT karte hain

Teeku walked squarely into that one

"Bhabhi ek gaana ho jaaye! Vibhu requested Bani

She was an amazing untrained self taught singer. She liked to be fussed over though

Guptas had antakshari nights every month, Bani's team always won

"Teeku ke moh mein hain dulhe raja abhi gaana sahi nahi rahega she cuddled with Dhruv

Guptas were open and funny and not conservative

The difference was stark

Teeku stuffed her face with muffins and donuts.

Another 20 minutes of coaxing and cajoling happened

Bani began to sing and Harit walked in, in awe of the voice, sitting down in the far corner across from Teeku. Avantika's heart thumped feverishly when he bend down to sit, the simple black fleece bottom and the grey curling frayed at the edge graphic tee, he looked mouthwatering she thought as warm color spread to her face. Himani noticed her daughter checking out her husband, a quiver of satisfaction escaped her anxious heart

"Dil to hail hil, Dil ka aitbaar kya keeje, aa gaya jo kisi pe pyaar kya keeje

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJdTTrkq7vA

Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

This guy is very strategic yaar... knows when it pays best to stay awake... 😆 .. she's fully caught in his liar 😊

Posh reprobates... lovely title that... two joint families with their own formulas for running. Bani is fine folks. Meeta quizzes. Now why did that Haradar failed to beep? Is it the comfort of her own room or is it that she's mentally set that he's going to share her bed here.

Teeku remember meeta's birds and Bees about husbands arms and legs. No doubt in teeku's mind now.Ha ha. He caught her completely unawares and moved in before she could make sense of her sorroundings.




Second that .. Nice title 👏

Absolutely it's her Lilac room/bed comfort zone that interfered with Haradar'.
Broken bangles, flushed skin are going to give clues to Meeta bhabhi at breakfast or is it going to be lunch 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Perfect timing . Just finished a very late lunch. Wow. Beautiful song Nisha. Hearing it after eons . So goes with the mood . Sooper 👏
Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
"I am not going to kiss you Avantika he whispered "Not here, I will kiss you when we go back home, and you are in my bed he promised

IM CRYING

LIKE WHY Di?

Love you.
But WHY do u create these people ?
Don't want me to get married probably.
I'll NEVER find R&b or harit
💔

None of us will.

*sobs*
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Posted: 7 years ago
What a beautiful song. Took a listen and saved it to my play list.
This trip is going to transform them the way they look at each other. Lovely way they are allowing themselves to grow bold with their intimacy levels. Family is beginning to heave a sigh of relief. Nice relaxed setting.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Harit needs to join in the antakshari and hum a cheesy Hindi number.
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Posted: 7 years ago
SUPERRR HOTTT Nisha!

Was reading under covers and came out all flushed and blushing, smiling thinking hubs isn't around. Lo, behold! Who was out there - he caught me red handed - took the phone away and the stupid phone wasn't even locked 😡 . Wise enough to close the page I was reading. This guy went to my WhatsApp and literally searched for Jas' name as he caught me cutting my phone convo with Jas when he entered the room recently and I couldn't change my teenage girly expression then. Can you believe this Jas? If you got a missed call from my WhatsApp that was him. Thank god he didn't look at our texts 😳 . Thappichen (escaped)! What have you done Nisha!

All you unmarried girls out there, enjoy this phase of blushing and giggling and zillion dreams of R&B and Harit!
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Posted: 7 years ago
too cute RG! 😆 I am deathly afraid these days if I leave the browser open and my niece and nephew start using my phone or computer.
Lovely update Nisha. Teeku has so much to look forward to once she gets back to her sasuraal. 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
RG, enjoy the attention of your husband.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha, I read both the updates in middle of the night and couldn't sleep for sometime after both of them.
I love the way you are taking this love story of Harit and avanatika.
This is man can't be resisted.
I want tikku to be jealous of attention he gets from her parents.
And I have every reason to love this Harit. I didn't think that I would ditch R&B.
But this one is:
Lawyer
From UP
Brahmin
Intelligent
Smart funny
Family man
Authoritative and accommodating
Kind
Considerate of everyone's feeling.
The way he gave Tikku time to settle and didn't push her is awesome. He was pretending he is indifferent and look at him now.
Thank you for this story and Harit specifically.

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