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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#161

verryyy hot and nice chapter

love om and how he seemed to understand that gaurs wasn't comfortable showing emotional intimacy

I just hope that with time they both understand that their relationship is more than just sex

really loved the chapter

and hated her stepmother damn a real b I tch👏

keep. up the good work darling👏

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Aaliyah

@indigal07

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Niharika is so awful!!! 😡 😡 Something bad has got to happen to her, she has it coming with all the terrible things she said to our poor Gauri. When Omkara and Gauri will finally be in a permanent happy relationship in the future, it will be a big slap in the face for her. And as much as I don't like Mr. Sharma either, I kind of hope he leaves Niharika too. She deserves the worst! 😡

Okay, now that I'm done fuming over her horridness, I LOVED this update!!! I love every update, actually, you're such a terrific writer and I always look forward to reading this irresistible FF! 😉

The hot steamy scenes are amazing, and I love how Omkara picks up on Gauri's subtle body language cues, the way she moves out of his embrace and maintains a distance from him. I hope he's able to gain her trust, and that she can open herself up to him emotionally. I know it will be super difficult for her, but I think Om is the kind of patient person that will help her through her commitment issues. I hope he is always consistent in his affection towards her. It may be a long way from now, but I can't wait till they realize they're both in love. ❤️

Wonderful update again Savina! Eagerly awaiting the next one when you have a chance to write it! 😳

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Awesome n emotional update.

Loved it.

Rikara moments were hot n passionate.

Gauri was comfortable with his physical intimacy but when comes to emotional she was uncomfortable n he noticed that n try to give her her space.

Gauri doesn't want to get attached with him emotionally as she can't bear any heart break.

Niharika is so disgusting she is provoking Gauri with her words n deriving sadistic pleasure seeing her breaking down.how cruel she is to say such words to Gauri.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for the pm:)

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Rati0992

@Rati0992

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#164

This was the awesum .. i want to c how now omkara help her to make her confess her insecurities n loneliness to him ... 😊

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Mehnaz

@DeewaniMastaani

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

God, you really can bring out the worst off a person! I so wanna wring that vile woman's neck and f**king slap off her sadistic grin till she forgets how to smile. Shit! Angry much? Yeah, you brought out this Hot, fire burnin-anger outta me, girl! Loved your work! Did a splendid job on the intimate scenes and the exact on-point emotiobs that you described so perfectly. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Please Please Please update ASAP! ❤️

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aditi27

@aditi27

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

I like how he is picking up of the subtleties of her actions. Poor girl is already going through so much. I hope he can break through the wall she has put up and teaches her to love

Again.

Great writing. Please up date soon.

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Poor Ri. Pity her that she has gone through a lot in her life but need not to be afraid, Our Kara gonna bring and give her all the happiness in the future. Waiting eagerly for next update.

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Savina

@Savinaa

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
hope Gauri can learn to love and trust Omkara

I hope the same too.

Thank you dear 😊

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Savina

@Savinaa

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: DEFOM
reserved
going to read all d parts till now
loved the 1st part a lot the concept is very good

Thank you dear 😊 Will wait to hear your take on the story 😳

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Savina

@Savinaa

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Gosh..!! It was breathtaking..their intimacy isn't something vulgar..you wrote it with so much intensity...Kara is somehow trying to connect himself emotionally with him...but Ri being Ri isn't going to fall for any emotional intimacy..she's comfortable with him in bed..and for now that's what she feels...Omkara understood her discomfort on his advances...hmm..he's a gentleman man...and a keeper...don't know why but his forehead kiss made me think of his intentions again..is he really having just fun with her..? Don't think so...he's aware of the tension between Ri and Niharika..but he didn't anything or said something that'll make her uncomfortable...Ri is trying to show more than she feels for Kara before Niharika...and our Kara could sense that...I just hated it when that witch said so much to her...she's already broken...and that woman is trying to shatter her into pieces..I'm just waiting for thee moment when she's going to regret her own words after Ri find her happily ever after...I know its a bit early to think of something like that..but couldn't tolerate Niharika's behavior..I hope Ri would trust him and able to love...by the way have with how many chapters you're going to finish the story..?? I just hope bohot sara chapters ho...it's making me more interested with each update...

Thank you so much Tasnim 😳

And no, he isn't having fun with her. He's trying to explore her, both emotionally and physically ☺️

Yes Niharika is a 🤬 And she's here to stay for a long time

I havent planned on the number of chapters, but it is going to be a long story. I hope none of them get bored by then 😆

Thanks a bunch again... I will try my level best to keep up the reader's interest 😃