NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 30~Chapter 35-UPD JUN 2nd

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

After I finished reading it, I am now like this...

Can't take our eyes off this lady can we?

Chellam don't you think she's giving takkar to your suited booted lawyer avtaar

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jayaks02

@jayaks02

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Very nice chapter lashy. I particularly liked the interaction with the miners and site survey and their conversations there. Some ice is now being broken on a permanent basis.

Also loved how he called her Heera. That was simply .

Somehow I did not take so much fascination for Vaid kaka till now. But you have done his characterization well. He is one innocent person who keeps blurting out.

A quiet river flowing now in Parnagarh. Wish to know what Shezade is upto. 😆

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: lashy

Can't take our eyes off this lady can we?
Chellam don't you think she's giving takkar to your suited booted lawyer avtaar

No I'm no where near to this stunning beauty!!! I guess I'm safe and better remain in my Sanyasini avatar!! 😆

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roseraja1915

@roseraja1915

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

C35 pic : picture-perfect paradise, Lashy Sahiba! Beautiful!

Does this mean each chapter from now on will be accompanied by a teaser picture?

I definitely hope so , Lashy dear.😊

You don't have to edit it - knowing how much time it takes to do that- just post something that is relevant to the update, dearie. 😃

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divya

@diya2291

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Hi Di ...After Long Time M Commenting Here ..
N Not On Fb ...😆

And You Know What ..This Chapter Is My Favourite Now ... Issshhh Totally Magical Heavenly ..And List Goes On

Haww That Furniture Maker Was Trying To Be Smart With Heera By Giving Lame Excuse , Just Coz Khan Sahib Was Muslim But He Can't Stand Infront Of Smart And Tricky Women Right ..At The End He Have To Do As He Can't Loose His Customer To Others

Amk and His Plans No One Can Understand ...The Way He Protected Panagrah Land And People And How Smartly He Tricked Old Man By Using Shezade's Name ..Hihi Even That Old Men Tongue Tied To Answer ..But All Made Heera To Know His Good Intention Towards Her People Which Made Khan Sahib Shocked As He Earned A Thank You From Her ...And My My Finally ..Yaaay Finally She Called Him Khan Sahib ..Dhinka Chika Moment It Is 😆

Vivad Kaka I Was Like Oh God SomeOne Stop Him ..He Kept Blabbering ..😆
But Result Was ...OmG ...Khan Sahib Explanation ...He Called Her Heera...Gosh .. ...all Led My Heart Do Somersault, Blushing Throughout That Part ...Dreamy Moment
Thank You So Much Di For This Delightful Chapter ..Dono How Many Times M Going To Read This Chapter

Edited by diya2291 - 8 years ago

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Yes She called him as 'Khan Sahib'

And

He called her as 'Heera'

Edited by Kalgi22 - 8 years ago

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Sabdabhala

@Sabdabhala

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

LASHY DEAR 🤗

WHAT AN AWESOME CHAPTER 🥳

AND JUST WHEN I THINK IT IS LONGER POSSIBLE FOR ME TO FALL MORE IN LOVE WITH KHAN SAHIB, I AM PROVED WRONG BY YOU ❤️

THE ENTIRE CHAPTER WAS SUPERB ⭐️👏

RECALLING THE NICEST BITS -

HEERA' S CHAGRIN WHEN SHE REALIZES WHAT THE CARPENTER GUY IS UPTO 😆 SHE MIGHT HAVE HER EMOTIONS FOR HIS IN SEVERE CONFLICT 😉 BUT LOYALTY SEEMS TO BE HER STRONG SUITS TOO

THE WAY HE INVITED HER INTO THE SABHA, GOT UP WHEN SHE ARRIVED, GAVE HER A SUITABLE SEAT AND DECLARED HER TO BE A PERSON OF PROMINENCE, WAS AWESOME

THE WAY HE HAD ALREADY SPUN THE TALES OF REGARDING THE IMAGINARY GEOLOGIST WHO HAD SUGGESTED THE CORRECT MINING SPOT - THIS SHOWED HOW CLOSELY HE GUARDED THE BEAUTY OF THE PLACE, EVEN THOUGH IT DOESNT YET FEEL LIKE HOME TO HIM

AND HIS TRUST AND BELIEF THAT SHE WOULD BE QUICK ON THE UPTAKE TO CONTINUE THE CHARADE CREATED BY HIM WAS HEART WARMING

AND WHEN HEERA THANKED HIM BY ADDRESSING HIM AS KHAN SAHIB - UFFF 😳 I WAS FEELING LIKE I MIGHT FLY AWAY BEING ELATED AND LIGHT HEADED WITH HAPPINESS 😆

IN ALL THE SCENES OF THIS CHAPTER THE THAW OF THE ICE BETWEEN THE TWO HAS BEEN OVERTLY PERCEPTIBLE, AND IT FEELS WONDERFUL ⭐️

YES THE LAST SCENE DID SEEM AVOIDABLE AT FIRST, BUT THANKS TO YOUR AMAZING APPROACH 👏 I ACTUALLY FELT BAD IT ENDED 😆

AND THE ELEVEN LADDUS WRAPPED IN THE SILK POUCH

THEY SEEM TO HAVE CARVED A FIRM PLACE FOR THEMSELVES IN HISTORY 😉😆

I AM GLAD HEERA IS NOT SAD, ANGRY OR BITTER

AND I PARTICULARLY LOVED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED AMK IN THE LAST FEW LINES OF THE CHAPTER - HE MAKES HER PRIVY TO HIS INNERMOST EMOTIONS IN THE SIMPLEST OF WAYS

AND THEN WALKS AWAY, LEAVING HER TO RELIVE AND RELISH THE SCENE - AS SWEET AND AS SPECIAL AS THE LADDUS SHE GIFTED HIM

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE. PLEASE DONT MAKE US WAIT SO LONG FOR TE NEXT ONE 😭

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karkuzhali

@karkuzhali

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
No I'm no where near to this stunning beauty!!! I guess I'm safe and better remain in my Sanyasini avatar!! 😆

😳 🤣

(rofl because I am now a teenager!)

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#69

another marvelous updte 👏 AMK's diplomatic way of handling things his intelligence was just👏⭐️d confession part was just amazing...😉how royally he changed her mood... few secs ago wen he handled d things wid d merchants had left her awe but suddenly wen she knew d abt samarth singh aka AMK d things chnged in a split of a sec😆but d confession again turned d tables in his favor😉😛not only dt he addressed her as Heera 😛nywys waiting for another blockbuster updte...njoyed reading it thoroughly as usual no doubt in dat