Ishra ss-chahun naa phir kyun main tujhe,pt 11 on pg 128 updt on Mar 4 - Page 49

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Posted: 8 years ago
Fully emitionak
Ishita and raman live for kids, their craving for them is shown beautifully
Ishita shocked to know shagun is raman wife, she us scared thinking adiru r raman kids and he will take them
On toshi insistence she leaves the kids and gies
But she us worried as they don't come, she is having various thoughts of losing the kids
Atlast they come and she us relieved
She feels bad seeing raman in pain but can't let go her kids
She does DNA and confirms a dry r rain kuds
She wants to leave so gets a transfer
Raman is shocked knowing abt her transfer and tries to change her decision but could not
Appa is finding fishy in her behaviiir
She avoids raman meeting adiru, that scene felt bad for raman
Ishita listens kids talk and feels she is being selfish and taking away the kids right to be with their fatber
Raman drunk and comes and pleads her to let him meet adiru, and seeing g raman crying towards the kids she feels bad and decides to give the kids to him
I am sure raman will nit let her go leaving the kids as he know it is painful

Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Ishita came to know the truth
Trying to running away but her heart is stopping her
Feeling bad for raman
Plz update the next part soon
Eagerly waiting to read how ishita will give the kids to raman
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Posted: 8 years ago
Author's note-as I got 200+ likes and very lovely comments in less then 24 hours, I am here with next updt of this story as I promised. But before updating this part, I want to thank all of u for such an awesome response. Love u all.


One thing more, who hasn't commented yet. I want their two different comments for two updates, greedy me

PART 7

ishita-i can't let them live in pain for my selfish motive. I have to give adi rooh to Raman. Coz they r his children. Raman ko pata bhi nahi ki adi rooh uske bachche hai, phir bhi woh itni takleef mein hai. What if he come to know that I am running away with his kids, how much he will hate me and what if my kids too start hating me for keeping them away from their family. No no I can't see hatred in their eyes. It's better to live in pain then seeing hatred for me in their eyes. Tomorrow I will tell everyone the truth, tomorrow I will give Raman his kids. She said determined while tears were flowing continuously from her eyes. And she fall asleep crying only.

Next morning, ishita got up feeling chillness around her and found herself sleeping on the floor only. She got up in a jiffy and went to check rumandi, she was determined to tell the truth to Raman but to her disappointment Raman was already gone.

Ishita was going to her room when her eyes fell on a note kept on the table under paperweight.

Ishita picked it and read,

Ishita

Sorry and thanks, sorry for coming to ur house in midnight that to fully drunk and thanks for letting me meet adi rooh, I don't remember what I did last night but if I misbehaved with u in any way, please forgive me as I wasn't in my senses. I so wanted not to drink but drink just to forget ur kids. But I can't do it after drinking also. I know u don't want me near ur kids but don't know what pulls me to them. If u can give me permission, I want to spend some time with them before u leave the city and even after u leave I want to be in ur touch just to get glimpse of them. Don't get me wrong but it's being difficult for me to live without them. Hope u understand me and give me permission.

Ur friend
Raman

Ishita read it and couldn't stop the tears. A father is seeking someone's else permission to meet his own child.

Ishita-no ishita, ishita u can't be so selfish. U have to send adi rooh to Raman. Thinking so again she packed their bags with clothes and some essentials.

Then she went to freshen up, she sat under the shower and cried her heart out.

After an hour, she wake adiru ,she gave them shower and was dressing Ruhi, when Ruhi asked-mumma, aapki aankhen led kyun hai. Aap loye ho.

Ishita rubbed her eyes and said-no bachche, mumma ki eyes mein kuch chala gaya tha. Toh red ho gaya.

Ruhi nodded and asked-hum Kahan jaa lahe hai mumma.

Ishita-raman uncle ke ghar, u guys like there naa.

Ruhi-yech mumma, unke ghal mein bahut bala loom hai, jichme bahut toys hai.

Ishita-i am sending u two to play there. Aap khush ho naa.

Ruhi nodded and hugged ishita, ishita kissed her forehead while a tear escape her eyes. Ishita wiped if in a jiffy coz if Ruhi saw it she will again ask about it.

Ishita-aap jao breakfast karo, I am coming making adi bhaiya ready, OK.

Ruhi nodded and went to have breakfast. Ishita start making adi ready when he said-mumma, Aap bhi chaloge naa.

Ishita nodded in no and said-only u two r going. Mumma ko kaam hai. Aap Ruhi ka khayal rakhna,aap bade bhaiya ho naa. She said sadly.

Adi nodded and ishita hugged him too.

Soon all were on dining table having food. Ishita was feeding adiru while appa was just looking at ishita. He was feeling something fishy about her behaviour.

Appa-r u OK kanna, u r looking disturbed.

Ishita-yesterday I was disturbed but now I am good, as I know what I have to do.

Appa-what.

Ishita make adiru drink water and told them to put their textbooks in the bag. They nodded and went.

Ishita-appa I need ur help.

Appa-what kanna.

Ishita closed her eyes and tears flowed from her eyes. Appa got worried seeing her like this.

Appa-what happened kanna.

Ishita-aap please adi rooh to Raman ke ghar chod aayiye.she said in very low tone.

Appa-kyun.

Ishita look at appa and said-kyunki adi rooh, Raman ke bachche hai. Shagun, Raman ki wife thi. She said making appa shocked.

Appa-how do u know.

Ishita burst into tears and narrated him everything.

Ishita -i tried to ran away appa but can't.main Raman ko takleef de kar apni liye khushiyan nahi chun sakti. It's true that I love them to death but Raman ka inn bachchon par adhikaar mujhse jyada hai. She was saying and crying.

Appa hugged her and consoles her.

Appa-r u sure, Matlab tumhe unhe apne bachchon ki tarah pala hai.

Ishita-but that doesn't change the fact that I am not their mother. De aaiye inhe Raman ko isse pehle main kamzor pad jaun.aur apna faisla badal doon.

Appa-tum nahi chalogi.

Ishita nodded in no and said-itni himmat nahi hai ki apne bachche khud de doon Raman ko. Please do this for me. She pleaded.

Appa nodded and soon adiru came to hall. Ishita wiped her tears and hugged adiru. She showered numerous kisses on their face making them chuckle.

They too kissed ishita back and ishita hugged them again to her heart content.

Soon adiru went happily with appa while ishita ran to her room and cried bitterly throwing herself on the bed.

Raman and his family was having their breakfast when appa entered the house with adiru.

Seeing them Raman got up and went to them. Adiru hugged Raman tight and he too hugged them tightly. He showered their faces with many kisses making adiru smile again.

Ruhi-adi bhiya, aaj chab hume kitna pyaal kal lahe hai.

Adi-haan luhi, hum ichpecial joh hai.

Raman look at appa and said-please come in uncle, ishita nahi aayi. Usse meri taraf se thanks keh dijiyega for sending adi and rooh to me, even if it is for few hours only.

Appa-i want to talk all of u something serious. Can u please adi rooh inside.

Raman obliged to him and send adi rooh to the kids room.

Everyone settled in the drawing room and was looking at appa waiting for him to say anything, but he wasn't saying anything.

Raman-uncle u wanna talk something.

Appa nodded and said-i have brought adi rooh here.

Raman -yes I know.

Appa-forever. He said making everyone shocked.

Toshiji-what do u mean by ,forever.

Appa-actually yesterday when ishita came here, she heard about shagun being Raman's wife and,

Raman-and,

Appa-and ishita got worry as the lady who died giving adi rooh to ishita, her name was Shagun too.

Mr bhalla-shagun. He asked in shock.

Appa nodded and said-ishita took ur DNA sample and did DNA test of adi rooh and found,

Found, all three asked stopping their heartbeat.

Appa-that adi rooh r Raman's child. He said closing his eyes and a tear escape his eyes.

Ramam looked at his parents in utter shock and suddenly all three hugged each other tight.

Toshiji-mere Raman ke bachche mil gate, oye hoye,mere Raman ke bachche.

Mr bhalla -hamara pota aur poti Toshiji. He said with moist eyes and they hugged again.

Raman cried hearing this and ran to them. Adiru was busy in playing with the doll and horse, Raman went to them and hugged them tight. He kissed them to his heart content while tears were flowing from his eyes.

Adi wiped his tears and said-why u r crying uncle, aaj chab kyun lo lahe hai, pehle mumma ab Aap. He said making Raman think about ishita. He realised why she was going away leaving the city.

He told adiru to play and went to appa. He was sitting with moist eyes while Toshiji was calling to sweet shop ordering for lots of sweets .mr bhalla was calling his office saying he will not come today.

Raman went to appa and said-ishita issi liye bhaag rahi thi naa, coz she got to know the truth. He said making everyone look at Raman. Mr and Mrs bhalla came to hear the convo.

Appa look down and said-yes, usse pata chal gaya tha, iss liye woh jaana chahti thi.

Toshiji was about to say something when Raman signalled her to stop.

Appa continued -yes she want to go,kyunki woh bahut pyaar karti hai inse, nahi khona chahti thi unhe, Teen saal se apne seene se lagaa kar paala hai usne adi Ruhi ko. Apni jaan se jyada pyaar kiya hai unhe, apni zindagi, apni saansein di hai unko.but today she has to give him to u just coz she didn't give them birth. But she loved them more then anyone can love her kids. Hamesha dono ko godh mein ek saath lekar ,kabhi dono mein se ek ko bhi nahi choda. Apni zindagi, apna career sab kuch chod diya, I am not telling this to make u realise what she did for ur kids, but bata raha hoon ki usne joh bhi kiya sirf apni mamta ke haathon majbur ho kar kiya. Aap log uske liye dil mein bad feeling mat rakhiyega. She has given her soul to u. He said and couldn't stop his tears.

All eyes got moist hearing his words.

Appa got up and said folding his hands-ab chalta hoon, bachchon ka khayal rakhiyega aur kabhi kabhi le aaiyega, humse milne. Saying so he turn to go when they heard adiru coming down saying, nanu.

All turned and saw them coming down crying. They come and hugged appa.

Ruhi-hume chol kal Kahan jaa lahe hai nanu.

Adi-hume bhi le chalo.he said crying .

Appa hugged them and cried not knowing how to console them.

Appa-u people play here, I will come in evening and will take u.

Adiru-nahi aap nahi aaoge.aapne kaha laman uncle che ki hume yahin chol kar jayenge. Kyun nanu, humne kya galti ki hai. Mumma ke hume ghal se nikaal diya kya, kyun nanu. They said crying bitterly making everyone cry.

Adi-hum kabhi mumma se kuch nahi mangenge, pal hume yahan chol kal mat jaiye.

Appa-aapko toys pasand hai naa, Aap log khelo,main jaldi le jaaunga tum logon ko. He said not able to see them crying.

Adiru-nahi hume bach mumma chahiye. Aul kuch nahi chahiye.they said but appa couldn't say anything. He just cried seeing them crying.

Adiru went to Raman and said crying-uncle, hume mumma paas le chalo, please uncle, hume mumma ke siva kuch nahi chahiye. They said and hugged each other crying bitterly.

Everyone cried seeing the plight of the kids while they were crying saying, mumma.

Appa was about to say something when Raman said-main tum logon ko tumhari mumma ke paas le chalta hoon.

Adiru -promise uncle, Aap le jaoge.he asked happily to which Raman nodded smiling. They hugged Raman tight.

Toshiji-but Raman.

Raman didn't let her complete and said-i want to talk to her.

Appa-please don't be rude to her, I know she did a mistake but she is too shattered now. Please don't hurt her further. It's a request.he said folding his hand.

Raman hold his hand and said-trust me uncle, I will not hurt her. Saying so he picked adiru in his arms and went out of the mansion.

Soon Raman, adiru, Mr and Mrs bhalla and Mr over all wentout to reach iyer house.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Precap-ishra confrontation.

Ps-200+ likes with long comments for earliest updt.
Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome.
Ishu is shattered.
She did dna test .
She took hr transfr.
Raman is shatterd with news.
Ishu seeing raman pain decide to give hr kids.
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor ishita😭
I think both should get married 😃
Finally the truth is out.
Superb update 👏
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Poor ishu and Adiru
Kids can't live without ishu
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovelllyyyuyy @cuteruhi such a tempting update was reading so carefully really scared ki khatam na ho jaye suspence ke sath want to read ishra confortation jaldi next part bhi update karo ur stories are becoming interesting day by day i always wait for ur update and thankq for being regular love this story and ur writting skilll plzzz jaldi update karo na plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
fabulous update
very emotional
ishu finally sent the kids to Raman
the bhalla family came to know about the adiru being ramans children
appa was so sad to leave the kids there and told everyone about ishus love for them
adiru want to go back to their mamma and Raman agrees to it
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update
Only ishita can do like this
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very emotional update. lovely 👏

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