MERE BROTHER KI DULHAN-SUKOR FF epilogue page 14

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The story will begin from where Suraj puts all blame on Chakor for the bridal swap and goes away from the mandap.
Chakor too follows him devastated and Tejaswini requests all guests to leave including Imli & Chakor's parents. Ranjana faints and everyone goes away from the mandap except Imli and Suraj where Suraj instigates Imli against Chakor.

Chakor runs after Vivaan who comes back to his room.
His eyes roamed and he adores the room which he has himself decorated for his and Chakor's wedding night but everything ruined.
Chakor runs to his room and hugs him.

"Vivaan, I am innocent Vivaan. I can never break your trust. I haven't done this." Chakor said sobbing but Vivaan pays no heed to her.
He pulls her away and goes towards the bed. On the white sheet, there were rose petals kept in form of heart. Vivaan's heart ached to see that. He then throws all the rose petals from the bed.

Chakor holds Vivaan's hands and says," Vivaan, don't do this. Don't hurt yourself and me. Please trust me Vivaan. "

"Trust, your talking about trust. There is nothing left now Chakor.
The sindoor, the mangalsutra what you are wearing shows that you are now Suraj's wife. If you wanted this only, then you should have tol the me earlier Chakor. Why, why did you do this why?" Vivaan said with all anger in his voice.

Chakor is about to say but Imli comes inside the room. Chakor rushes towards Imli and holds her hand, " imli, you believe me Imli. How can I do this? I haven't done anything. I haven't done this. You've got to believe me Imli . Please", Chakor said in her pleading voice but Imli's face was as hard as stone.

"You are a cheater , you cheated me. You knew, you knew that I am pregnant with Suraj's child still you played your cards. You have snatched everything from me, my love my child's father, everything ", Imli said crying and ran away from there.

"Imli, imli listen to me", Chakor shouted but in vain.

Vivaan took all the paintings of Chakor which he made and went out of the room which made chakor follow him. He reached towards the mandap and burnt all the paintings.
Chakor pleaded him not to do so but he burnt all the paintings.
Vivaan went away from there and Chakor sat on floor with a thud.
Tejaswini came & saw Chakor sitting on the floor.

"Chakor enough of your drama, now continue all these things in your room but not here. You do not care for your reputation but unfortunately, you are know the elder daughter in law of the Rajwanshi's so just get up. " Tejaswini said and Chakor got up without realising what she is upto.
Tejaswini brings her to Suraj's room and gives her a glass of milk and tells her to go inside.
Chakor follows her order and goes inside the room.


Suraj sees Chakor lost in her own world so he whistles and says,"here you come by bandhua billi(bonded cat) oh sorry sorry , hamari bandhua biwi (bonded/collateral wife."

Due to his voice, Chakor comes into reality and she realises where is she. She puts the glass of milk on the table and walks towards Suraj.
"Neither I am your wife nor your labour. So just shut up. " she says shouting.

"Keep your voice low biwi, here people are there. And by the way, now we are in my room so why just you accept that you all this swapping game in order to get married to me, Suraj Rajvanshi. " Suraj says smirking.

Chakor looks at him in disgust and shouts on him, " I don't want a man like you in my life , and I haven't done any swapping game, you, you have done all this".

Suraj looks at him and says, "but why I will do so, when I have Tina with me ,her dad's money. By the way, hats off to you. You gave all the Azadganj people's their freedom but what have you done to yourself, you have become my collateral. Now what you will do MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ
RAJVANSHI? "

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I am a big fan of Sukor so I am writing a new fan fiction of them.
From the beginning of the leap, I found their chemistry very sizzling and perfect. I was planning to write a fan fiction and here I am.


INDEX
  1. chapter 1 - page1
  2. chapter 2- page 1
  3. chapter 3- page 1
  4. chapter 4- page 2
  5. Chapter 5- page 2
  6. chapter 6-page 4
  7. chapter 7-page 5
  8. chapter 8-page 6

chapter 9-page 8
chapter 10A-page 10
chapter 10B-12
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Thank u so much for the wonderful sukor ff...I was craving for sukor ff...I'm a big big fan of sukor...if possible plz update regularly and make it lengthy. ...welldone 😊
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Chapter 2

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Chakor looks at him in disgust and shouts on him, " I don't want a man like you in my life , and I haven't done any swapping game, you, you have done all this".

Suraj looks at him and says, "but why I will do so, when I have Tina with me ,her dad's money. By the way, hats off to you. You gave all the Azadganj people's their freedom but what have you done to yourself, you have become my collateral. Now what you will do MRS. CHAKOR SURAJ
RAJVANSHI? "
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Third Person's POV

Suraj touches Chakor's cheek with his hands and says," now you are mine Biwi (wife) and no one is accept in this room except we two."

Chakor turns her hand in disgust and slaps his head due to which Suraj chuckles and says," what you thought, I will touch you. You are not even my standard so bullshit about it."

Then he went inside the bathroom for freshening up and Chakor sat on the ground while resting her head on the fall. Tears started to flow through her eyes and she started crying. Life has took a sudden turn. When she was a small child, she never use to cry but now tears are now and then coming through her eyes. She was feeling so tired that she slept there only.
Minutes later Suraj came back changing himself in a v neck t shirt and track pants.
He saw Chakor sleeping peacefully. Tears stains were still on her cheeks.He went towards her and bent down to pick her up. He picked her and carefully placed her on his bed. Then slowly, he took off her jwelleries, her bangles except the mangalsutra and then finally he took off her veil. He smirked and said," time for the next high voltage drama."
Then he slept beside Chakor closing the lights.

On the other side, Vivaan and Imli's anger level went down and they realised that Chakor was innocent. She didn't do it on purpose.hell she didn't did anything. Both Vivaan & Imli confronted each other and realised that they had committed such a big mistake by blaming Chakor and hadn't understood Chakor's perspective. Hence, they decided to talk to Chakor next morning and both went to sleep thus, imli ending up on bed and Vivaan on sofa.

The next morning, both imli and Vivaan woke up early and went to Chakor's room oops... Suraj & Chakor's bedroom. They both saw that the room was closed from outside and they opened it from outside and knocked. Chakor woke up quickly realising it must be Vivaan. She quickly opened the door of the room and Vivaan and Imli came inside the room.
Chakor said," Vivaan I knew, you will come. I knew you will believe me."
Vivaan was to say something but his eyes went through the room.

Both Vivaan & Imli were shocked to see the view. Chakor's necklace, earrings and bangles were kept on the table well, necklace was hanging down the table and Suraj was lying shirtless on the bed with Chakor's veil covering his face.

Vivaan again looked at Chakor and said, " I would've believed you Chakor but what my eyes is watching now, it's hard to believe you "
Chakor was about to say but she heard Suraj's voice," biwi, please don't shout, look I am really tired after last night so please let me sleep."
Chakor was shocked to the core listening his voice. She then looked at her jwelleries and then at Suraj. Then she turned her head to Vivaan & Imli. Tears spilled through Imli's eyes.
Chakor said," Vivaan ,it is not..."
But Vivaan cut her off and said," Imli, let's go. They both are too tired ."
Chakor tried to stop them but in vain. Soon, she heard someone laughing.
"That was fun biwi", Suraj said laughing but got a slap from Chakor. He looked at her in anger and saw her eyes red with anger.

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Another update!
I couldn't believe myself. Two chapters back to back.
Well that's a Sukor fan.
Keep Vommenting.
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brillent stiry. nice start waiting for next. please update soon
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wow! that was a great ff! waiting for the other chapters
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here comes Chapter 3.
thanks a lot for support.

CHAPTER 3


Recap

Vivaan again looked at Chakor and said, " I would've believed you Chakor but what my eyes is watching now, it's hard to believe you "
Chakor was about to say but she heard Suraj's voice," biwi, please don't shout, look I am really tired after last night so please let me sleep."
Chakor was shocked to the core listening his voice. She then looked at her jwelleries and then at Suraj. Then she turned her head to Vivaan & Imli. Tears spilled through Imli's eyes.
Chakor said," Vivaan ,it is not..."
But Vivaan cut her off and said," Imli, let's go. They both are too tired ."
Chakor tried to stop them but in vain. Soon, she heard someone laughing.
"That was fun biwi", Suraj said laughing but got a slap from Chakor. He looked at her in anger and saw her eyes red with anger.

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"How could you dog, you moron", Chakor said.
"How dare you shout on me, Chakor", Suraj said gritting his teeth.
"How dare I, how could you? Marrying me wasn't enough for you that you did all these? Vivaan and Imli must be thinking that we were together yesterday. I won't leave you", said Chakor and snatched her dupatta/scarf from Suraj's hand and covered her head with that. Then she went towards the bathroom, before stepping in, she gave a hard glare to Suraj and went inside the bathroom. After closing the door, she sat on the floor and started crying. But soon, she pacified herself.
"No chakor, don't cry. You are not weak. You gave freedom to the whole Azadganj, you can give freedom to yourself also. Don't fall weak Chakor", she mumbled and stood up.

On the other side, Suraj was fuming.
"Chakor, how could you. How could you slap me? How could you shout on me? That also because of that Vivaan. Last night also, why Vivaan only", he said while pacing to and fro in the room but immediately he stopped in his tracks.
"Wait a second, am I angry on Chakor because 24*7 she cares about Vivaan? " He asked himself and remembered about the last night.

(Flashback)
After settling Chakor on the right side of the bed, he took the left side and slept on the farthest corner as possible. There was no sofa so he didn't have any option . moreover, he didn't wanted to go out because it was his room. But it was unable for him sleep like that so he shifted more towards the right side and hence, more towards Chakor. Suddenly, Chakor placed an arm on his arm and held it tightly. He wanted to remove her hand but he couldn't do that because he didn't want to. Her soft fingers holding his arms. He hated to admit it but he did liked his touch. He was about to touch her face when Chakor mumbled, "Vivaan, don't leave me."
Immediately, anger flashed through his face and he removed Chakor's hands from his. He quickly went up and went towards the window.
"Vivaan, Vivaan and Vivaan. Why does always everyone care about Vivaan? ", he asked angrily to no one.
(Flashback ends)

"Now just wait and watch, what I will do now", Suraj said and smirked.
Just then he heard the sound of door creaking. Immediately, he realised that it was bathroom's door so he went out of the room.
Soon, Chakor came out in her bathroom gown. She looked for her bags and realised that her bag was kept in Vivaan's room and she was in Suraj's room. She peaked through the door and found no one in the corridor so she ran to Vivaan's room. The room opened and there stood Vivaan.
Chakor said, " Vivaan, I...", she was about to say but she stopped looking at Vivaan. He was crying. His eyes were red.
"Vivaan, do you also think what you saw was true?", Chakor asked.
Vivaan didn't said anything instead he went inside his room and brought Chakor's bags and placed it in front of her.
"Vivaan please listen to me, I know you are hur...", Chakor was about to say her words but her leg slipped and she was about to fall when Vivaan caught her by holding her waist.
They both looked at each other intensely. But their love moment was cut off by Suraj.
"Bhabhi tera devar deewana,hai raam meri biwi ko na le jaana", he sang and approached them and further continued,
"Vivaan's bhabhi, your devar is really a mad lover after you, but he can't get you because, I , Suraj Rajvanshi is here for my wife, Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi", he said pressuring the each word.

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Another update done!
Please guys please give this book a try. Yesterday, I saw the SBS segment & even read it here. I don't think this would happen.
many people also wrote about Imli preggy with Suraj's child, but how can one be sure.She didn't even went to doctor for god sake.. and Suraj is a negative character so he will not change so easily but he will.
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wow! lovely update !! super awesome 3 rd chapter!!! u write really well!!
pl update soon

and yes jennisha , totally agree with you suraj is negative and we will have to wait for him to change!!! and am certainly willing to wait !! 😃




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Here comes Chapter 4.

Recap

"Vivaan please listen to me, I know you are hur...", Chakor was about to say her words but her leg slipped and she was about to fall when Vivaan caught her by holding her waist.
They both looked at each other intensely. But their love moment was cut off by Suraj.
"Bhabhi tera devar deewana,hai raam meri biwi ko na le jaana", he sang and approached them and further continued,
"Vivaan's bhabhi, your devar is really a mad lover after you, but he can't get you because, I , Suraj Rajvanshi is here for my wife, Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi", he said pressuring the each word.

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"So biwi, let's go to our room", Suraj said to Chakor and picked her up and said the servants to bring her bag to his room.

Chakor struggled to get out of his grip but in vain. As they reached their room Suraj placed her on his bed. Soon, Cheeku Suraj's trusted man brought Chakor's bags. Suraj took the bags and closed the room. Then he turned towards Chakor. His eyes were red which clearly showed he was angry.
"Why the hell did you went out of the room like this? Anyone could have seen you?" Suraj said gritting his teeth.

"I went to Vivaan , okay and it wasn't my wish. My bags were kept in Vivaan's room and why do you care?", Chakor said annoyingly.

"Why do I care? For god sake we are married Chakor. I know you love that Vivaan but going like this. anyone could have watched you like this. Next time be careful," said Suraj looking directly into Chakor's eyes.

And for the first time in all her life she felt Suraj caring for her. She felt him pleading for her. She didn't said anything but just nodded and seeing her agreeing, Suraj sighed in satisfaction.

Then Suraj left the room giving ample time to Chakor to get ready.
After 15 minutes, Suraj went upstairs to see for Chakor and Chakor was also coming down the stairs adjusting her dupatta / scarf while Suraj's eyes were on his phone. Both were in same direction opposite others and both collided with each other. Both Suraj and Chakor went rolling down the stairs.
Chakor was above Suraj.
Suraj was holding Chakor's waist and Chakor's head was on Suraj's chest while her hands were on Suraj's shoulders. Then Chakor opened her one eye and raised her head. Seeing Suraj staring intensely at her, she tried to lift up but in vain.
Suraj was holding her waist tightly and was continously looking at her.

Dehleez pe mere dil ke
Jo Rakhe hai tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Ha sikha maine Jeena Jeena
Kaise Jeena
Ha sikha maine Jeena mere Humdam
Na sikha maine Jeena jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum.

Both Suraj and Chakor were lost in each others' eyes but their eye contact broke with a squeal.

"Bhaiya," a girl came inside shouting.

Suraj looked at that girl and he smiled which didn't got missed by Chakor.
Suraj released Chakor and went up and then he helped Chakor in getting up.
The girl put her bags aside and ran in Suraj's arms.
"Bhaiya, I missed you a lot, " the girl said.

"Well my sweet Ragi, I missed you too", Suraj said smiling.
"Don't call me Ragi, it's Ragini", Ragini said pouting.
"Okay, Ragi", Suraj said mischievously and Ragini punched slightly on Suraj's shoulder.

Chakor was adoring both the brother sister scratch that, she was adoring the new side of Suraj which was hidden under cover.

Soon, Vivaan and Imli came down and saw Ragini.
Ragini ran into Vivaan's arms next.
"Bhaiyu, how are you? " Ragini asked.
"I am good Ragini ,how are you? " Vivaan said.
"Better than ever. Ahaan! That goes for you too. Your jodi looks too good with Chakor. Both are looking perfect,"Ragini said looking at Imli," And Suraj Bhaiya , you and Imli also look together fabulous but yeah! Don't romance outside the room guys, keep someone privacy", said Ragini chuckling while looking at Chakor and Suraj.

Chakor's cheeks heated up listening to what Ragini said while Suraj's eyes popped out.
Ragini looked at them smirking and said,"Guys, I saw both of you. Imli on Suraj and Suraj underneath Imli, intense eye lock."

Suraj and Chakor looked at each other and then at Ragini.
"Adi told me about you all", Ragini said.
"Ragini, you are wrong over here. I am Chakor and I am married to Suraj and Imli is married to Vivaan, " said Chakor.

"What? How did this happen and when?" asked Ragini getting confused.

"Arrey, Ragini beta," said Tejaswini and hugged her.
"Maa, I missed you a lot", said Ragini . Tears forming in her eyes.

"Aww, you go in your room and freshened up. I will make something for you to eat", said Tejaswini and Ragini nodded.

<<Fast Forward > >

Chakor was in the garden sitting on the bench when Ragini came, "may I sit here ?" She asked.
Chakor nodded and Ragini sat beside her.

"So how did all things changed? " asked Ragini.
"I don't know Ragini, everything was full proof. Imli was about to get married to Suraj and Me with Vivaan but how I and Imli got exchanged no one knows", Chakor said.

"I don't who is behind all these things but do you have a doubt on Suraj Bhaiya? " Ragini asked.

"I don't know, I don't know, who is behind the the swapping game but I will find out, " said Chakor determinedly.
"And I will help you too," Ragini said assuring her.
"Thanks", Chakor said and hugged her.

Soon after that, Ragini went to Imli, she was in Vivaan's room arranging things.
"Imli, " shouted Ragini and hugged her.
"Ragini, whoa slow down. " said Imli.
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That's all for today.will update the next chapter soon.
Hope you eill like ot.
Please hit the like button.

There are many Vikor lovers in this forum and I too found the Vikor pair very good before leap but now I ship sukor more.
Suraj's character reminds me of Parma from Ishaqzaade movie played by Arjun Kapoor.
So I will wait when Suraj will change for good.

the role of Ragini is played by MRUNAL THAKUR who played the role of Bulbul in Kumkum Bhagya.

Thank you

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Ohh so cute! SuKor happening slow and steady😆 update soon, I'll be waiting!
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Wow nice upstatiring romance between sukor ..but like ur scrpit entering ragin awesome ..👍🏼waitting for next update
Yes but now also sukor shipping mor than vikor suraj's character will soon change but have to take time ..😃

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