Ardhika SS - Someone Like You Updated 24/04/16 (CH 9, Pg 32) - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Fab update
Love the car convo
Arjun starting to fall for radhika
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update..
Finally Arjun's misunderstanding is cleared..
Atleast now he knows Radhika is not getting merried..
Hope soon he will know that Neil is just a friend..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Arjun and Radhika are getting to know each other.. I don't know why but I feel Arjun's convo with Radhika reminded me of the way he used to talk with his Mom..No holds barred kind of convo..well,I could be wrong..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arrey yaar @esprit, i like this SS for sure...this comment z gng to b lengthy...i vl make as short as possible...so sorry for dat
d title z too good...arjun's smile z enough to say dat it seems...

d thing z, this became my favorite update for many reasons...

as usual too good...i really appreciate u for d way u r using d dialogs btwn d characters...

d first part of this update i am not gng to forget it seems...

i thought radhika gone into analysis mode for sure...never ever i thought in my dreams also she vl come vth dat conclusion...ROFL..wat a conclusion she came at d end...nice...d reason y she came to dat conclusion was too good...

//so i was in my new office , at lunch break i just was checking d forum, wen i saw d update i wanted to read, normally i wnt do dat at workplace...so i just read d first part ...n wen i read radhika's conclusion not only neil, i also spilled my juice on my laptop, n wat remained in my mouth also spilled on my laptop, i started coughing badly...so ppl around me looked at me worriedly, i dnt know wat to do...just closed my laptop ...such an experience yaar//

i like the FB always...


d conversation btween arjun n his mom was too good...especially d dialogs u use on them...

i thought arjun remembered his mom bcz of d medine kit of radhika, in d lonavala travel...but u made dat nice...

i liked each n every line in this update...

arjun at last got dat radhika z not getting married...in his happiness he never gave much thought abt ridhima name it seems...hmm he vl get it soon r8...

ranch...wether arjun z gng to go all cow boy get up?

wen arjun said, he never vl throw her out...it just reminded me DYM only...how many times he throed her

i liked d way u gav d answer thorugh radhika, dat y she felt dant not real arjun...its an answer for DYM arjun too...she can't explain...but knows...totally nice...

//shahid afridi z my fav too...no boundaries for sure...he z a good player..n when he was bowling his hair looks so good...it reminds me of school so much...n lonavala z another favorite...//


neil z really nice...

great gng...


waiting for next update...

Merry Christmas in advance...



Edited by lovv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks everyone... i shall try and reply to everyone soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Again thanks all ... sorry but next update will take me longer... my husband surprised me with a vacation trip. So I won't have access to the online world for some time! Anyway Happy Holidays, and wishing you a Merry Christmas, Happy New Year!!
And in a couple of weeks, I shall resume writing this!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Okay finally I caught up after being MIA for so long.
I really don't know what to say other than just simply Fantastic! I just love how you are building the story. And the flashback snippets for Arjun and Radhika really bring depth to the story...the banter, tender moments, and the brief encounters...you can see this relationship forming between the two

I really love the character development.

I see Saral is joining the cast here and he's definitely there to stir the pot I see.

I like Aunt Nandini here and Arjun's Mom just sounded like a sweetheart. I really enjoyed the theater flashback with Arjun and his Mom.

I really cannot wait to read more.

Wishing you and your family Happy Holidays!

--Grace 😃



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Posted: 9 years ago
Enjoy ur trip...
Merry Christmas...

Happy New Year to u n to ur entire family...


take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
What to say...i seriously need to google some words to define ur writing...fantastic..
u should be writer..

I jus loved raneil interaction both on a 20-20 question answer round rads asked about neil liking sam and neil asked about arjun...there convo was cute..it reminded me of my clg days wen i asked a girl if she likes a guy(he was my frnd) or not...

M likin arjun-mom combo more now...his mom is so humble and sweet the way she asked about radhika was so cute...

And teji readin out rads diary...lol

I loved the car scene,finally arjun's thought about rads marriage is clear...and he is content...even i support pakistan...i jus like all the players...some of them cos of their personal life activities..the pakistan players contribute their money for building school and social causes...

Overall FANTASTIC...!!

Njoy ur holidays and happy new yr...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much for appreciating this!! I hope to start writing the next update very soon. Just settling back in after holiday and prepping for new years!
Sorry if I can't reply to every post this time around - but i figure you all would love for me to work on the update rather than responding to every comment. That being said, I do love to read and truly appreciate all the likes and comments! It is a huge motivation for me to write.

Happy Holidays everyone!!

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