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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Our baby Aneri is afraid of being without her Princess Auntie and Ocean Uncle as she isn't used to live in a different environment than the orphanage. On one hand, I think that Arnav did the right thing by forcing her to go without him but on the other hand, I think she is so little to handle the new change in her life. Next update, she will meet more people and I guess move to USA. And once again, will have to change her life style. I just hope that, being with kids at her age will help her to decrease her timidity, as Lavanya and Aman's kids will be her new playmate from now onwards.

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Jigs, you have brought to life so vividly all of the characters. Each one has evolved in their own way. The Payal we saw in San Diego was so different from the Payal of today, as she takes stock of her life. You've shown that sense of quietude so well as she looks into herself and tries to understand where she's at.

As is Avni. She is seeking to make reparation for her shortcomings with Khushi as she showers love on Aneri. As you said, "bittersweet" for Khushi. The daughter in her and the mother in her, both coming to the fore.

It was emotional seeing the bond Riya and Pratik have with their grandparents. Their source of security, their constant in their young lives.

I love how you've shown Aneri getting comfortable with her new family. As she demands, pouts, and showers love and kisses on them. Haq se. Her cute, adorable antics endear her to me more and more with each chapter. Her selflessness makes my heart melt each time. The first thing she wants to do with the "pop pops" is share them. I can just visualise her in the red and cream patiala with an arm full of bangles hugging her Ocean uncle's knees as she surveys the newcomers. The faith she has in her Ocean uncle to make things right for everyone. How she's slowly coming to believe that to be true for her "uncle and aunty". That mention of "old house" indicative of her feelings as she slowly allows herself to think of this as her house. Not pushing, and letting her take things at her pace must be so difficult for them. But for Aneri to begin to feel secure in her little world again that's what she needs. It has to come from within her.

One of my favourite parts of the update was Arnav and Khushi sitting on the chaise by the pool and Khushi kissing Arnav's palm as they both think of their Pari twinkling down on them. And then their attention goes to the baby monitor as their Aneri shifts in her sleep. There's just something about how this all comes together that I find very poignantly moving.

I love how you're showing the balance between Arnav and Khushi as parents and as a couple. Each aspect of the relationship is being done justice without compromising the other.

Once again the glimpse you give us in Aneri's mind as she wants to call her Princess Aunty and Ocean Uncle, Amma and Papa, makes me want to enfold her in an embrace. The turmoil in her heart wrenching. Seeing her rush into Arnav's arms lifts the heart though. Her parents will always be their for our darling Aneri.

Can I give you a hug my love?

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Jigs, this update was just amazing.

Every line in this update tells us how much you love children and how much you observe them and their behaviour.

Be it, Aneri making her dad and Nanu do all the stuff like brushing her doll's hair, play pretend games etc, my elder one would do the same thing if I say its sleep time at night and my younger one still does it.

The kids are so enthusiastic about all the activities going on around them and they just do not want the day to end soon and try to extend the day as longer longer longer as possible. Kids are indeed the cutest.

Reading about Aneri, I am reliving my kids's younger days again. And it is such a treat to read about her and her daily activities and her sankiness.

And she has so so so many people to dance to her tunes too. 😆

It was so emotional to read how Avni was trying to relive Khushi's childhood through Aneri.

And it is a universal fact that, once couples become parents majority of talks between them is focused on kids and their activities. Looks like Arnav and Khushi too are doing the same. Their late night talks are mostly about Aneri, what she did today, how she reacted, how she looked. 😆

I had read somewhere that the joy a mother feels when she dresses up her little one in new clothes and feels happy seeing her kid all dressed up and cute, is the purest kind of joy one can actually feel. The kid does not care whether it is dressed in the finest of clothes or rags, but the mother dresses up the kid anyway so that her kid looks the best, looks beautiful and I felt the same joy imagining Aneri dressed up in the new Patiala suit and Khushi rejoicing seeing her daughter all dressed up for the celebrations.

Payal has changed so much and I am so glad that she has changed for the better.

And Prateik and Riya are really good kids. They made Aneri feel so comfortable and they showed how welcome she is in the family. By the end of the day, it was so nice to read about Aneri running around and mixing with everyone freely.

And Kabir's entry was like cherry on the top. And a surprise engagement on Diwali which Roshni is unaware of!!! How happy happy happy Aneri would be that her doctor uncle is marrying her didi !!!

And the last part just tore my heart away. How much of pain and fear this little one is holding in her heart and she feels calling Arnav and Khushi as Dad and Mom will take them away from her.

How can anyone convince her that it is not the case? How can anyone make this little one understand that her fears are unwarranted for?

Oh dear, what will Arnav and Khushi do now??

Jigs, love love love you for such a wonderful story. 🤗

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

You did it again writer ji - a wonderfully endearing update-

Avni is the best Nani !! She is slowly redeeming herself - I love this - everyone deserves a chance to make amends in life at least once ... for we all live just once

When something or someone is missing from your life you realize how much they truly mean - this is Riya and Pratik - not through their fault - but they had begun to take things and people for granted .. Nana, Nani , Massi and Mausa all provided them love and a semblance of family life..

Aneri - a truly brave child to be afraid to say the two names that Arnav & Khushi want to hear so badly, names that would complete them.. names that this poor child fears will make them disappear.

How does once convince her that a 'hamesha' really does exist...

Name two stars as Amma and babu ji - Chanda Mama is there too..

Every night they watch over this precious princess.. when Aneri is convinced of this, perhaps calling Princess Aunty & Ocean Uncle Mummy and Papa will be easier, when her fear subsides..

Celebration time for Kabir and Roshni- does this mean dancing for Khushi and Aneri !!

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Its Diwali in Revealed time line and like any festival this festival too has brought happiness in the lives of their characters. The time where we usually sit back and revive ourselves and same has happened to the characters here. Be it Payal or Avni. Looks like a shock from parents knocked enough sense to Payal.

New parents on block are doing great. They are adjusting well and so is the latest addition of the family. She is a doll. A girl too mature for her age. Her antics, her pouts, her slowly but surely showing haq in her own way brings the naughtiness in this story. Her getting along with her cousins and opening up to them. Her act of sharing; her zid in the cute way is all endearing. I love her being back to being child BAS.

Her fear to call ocean uncle and aunt mom and dad is so understandable. Her little mind living in orphanage has made up that who ever you call as mom and dad or amma and babuji are sure to part away with you. Does it even matter what she calls them for now until she is comfortable. Legal or ortherwise.

For ARSHi she is their daughter and I am sure they will help her out with her insecurities and the day is not so far when they will hear her call them Mom and Dad.

I am in love with this ANERI.❤️

Kabir is back and is ready to be bound in relation👍🏼

This will be a real DIWALI for Gupta clan.😃

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

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ohhh poor Aneri..my heart goes out to that child...am loving Pratik and Riya too..such nice kids..Payal's changed behavior us a surprise..

superb update as usual Jigs..love u..

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anukap

@anukap

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

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so happy for arnav and khushi to have aneri in their lives...they both and little aneri deserve every happiness in life. am sure with the love and nurturing that aneri will receive from the raids and her adopted extended family, she will soon forget the nightmares. hope payal will also redeem herself.

Jigs you have crafted a lovely story...don't want it to end at all...want to spend more time with the Raizadas and watch Aneri grow up:)

Love and hugs.

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

UnRes :-)

Awesome jigs :-)

Arnav is enjoying the days with aneri and being with the two most important ladies of his life.. kushi on the other hand is fully enjoying her motherhood. . Amazing...

I'm glad to read that avni is making up for what she has lost with kushi... favourite nani.. that's so sweet to hear..

It's a very good family time for the guptas with all the grandchildren at their place and celebrating diwali together. .. loved the way pratik and riya got along with aneri and made her comfortable.. and i was shocked to see payal's behaviour. .. did she learn her manners atlast??? Good for her ;-)

So, krabs is back for the engagement. .. fun time for arshi and aneri :-)

Nice to see that aneri's nightmares have stopped. . But, will they return after listening to the convo of pratik and her nana, nani..

Oh no!!! Can't see things going back to square one :-(

Waiting jigs..

Thanx for the pm :D

Edited by pravallika - 9 years ago