Ashi FF://Dominated Love Chapter 19 is Up.*completed* - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow amazing update loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
amazing
so she is his only obsession
her running away will make him madder
wht is the past that she is so scared of
ASR is a man possessed he will find her no matter what
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why does she hate Arnav ? When will we get to know their past ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was amazingly awesome👍🏼... so, their past's are connected.. Arnav loves her but she hate him... wanna know how Arnav gonna make her his and fall in love with him.. loved the update ❤️... continue soon dear, waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35


Finally I managed to read this story and I must say what amazing piece this is.

I love every part of it.



So Arnav proposed Khushi and she hate him.
That was very interesting.

I am curious to know how will Arnav change her opinion.


I don't believe Khushi will manage ever to free herself from him.😆

Thanx for pm and sorry for late reply


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1 brought back the memories of epi 1
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#37
They knew each other from past?
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Awesome can't wait for the next update
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nice and awesome
pls update soon
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Chapter#4

*History (Flashbacks)*

Mira Kaya and Amar Kaya were happily married to each other, Mira was an orphanage just like Amar. Amar Kaya was only son of Kabir Kaya and Nidhi Kaya, very close friends of Malik family.

When he was 8 year old his parents dead in an accident and he was adopted by Subathra Malik who took care of him just for her husband's sake not from heart, for her poor people were a curse and Amar had lost his class because his father had lost his business and money, they were coming back to Lucknow called by Akul Malik when they met with accident and being a good friend he adopt his friend's blood and loved him just his two sons "Arjun" and "Aryan".

Being Malik blood they both were just like their father but "proud" and "envy" was adopted and taught by their own mother.

And they were jealous of Amar because, he was more handsome and he was more intelligent, very brave, he was more respectful to elders and got love from everyone.

They were jealous of him because their father treated him equal to them. They wanted to hurt him and they did hurt him so much that he died even before his age.

For Amar they both were good brothers as they used to pretend. He was too nave and young to understand their motives.

They both brothers were jealous but after Mira entered in their lives they started hating him.


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"HEY YOU!!!" a young boy of 14 years saw a little girl playing in their garden a smirk appear on his lips as he approached little cute girl. She became afraid looking at a tall boy.

"WON'T YOU PLAY WITH ME?" "NO" the little girl turn her face away and the boy felt angry "OK AS YOU WISH BUT REMEMBER, NONE WILL PLAY WITH YOU" and with that he glared to the children and they ran away afraid. "I HATE YOU" the little girl said in her baby language.

"CHOTE SHE IS CHILD...DON'T FORCE HER" his mother said picking the girl in her arms kissing her cuddy cheeks.

"NO YOU KNOW WHEN SHE WILL TURN 18 I WILL MARRY HER"

"CHOTE TU BHI NA" his mother slap his head playfully "WHAT! I AM NOT KIDDING ...I WILL MARRY HER" his mother looked at him with a smile and shaking her head she left thinking he was kidding but she didn't that her son was determine and super serious to made her his bride.


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After some hours: (:P)

"I LOVE YOU" khushi said this to Arnav's cousin; they were playing "Guddi-Gudda" and Arnav was burning with jealousy looking at his cousin Aarav playing with her and she was giggling too.

He went near Aarav saying "YOU HAVE TO STUDY GO...DON'T PLAY WITH HER OR ELSE YOUR GRADES WILL BE DOWN AND YOUR MOTHER WILL BE SO ANGRY AT YOU" he eyed khushi angrily as she clutched Aarav's hand asking him to play with her. Aarav look down and then at his big brother finally "BRO SHE IS A LITTLE CHILD WE SHOULDN'T MADE HER CRY, MAMA TOLD ME TO PLAY WITH HER"

"COME WE WILL PLAY FOOTBALL" said Arnav knowing very well about his little bro. Aarav got up immediately and he took him away from her looking at khushi angrily but she was a child only 3 years old...she didn't even knew why this boy is so bad J.


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3 days later

"HOW YOU ARE RATNA DI?" asked Mira lovingly.

"I AM PERFECTLY FINE DOLL" she hugged her. Ratna hugged her sister in law who went out of town to see her aunt-the only relation she had in the world.

"WHERE IS MY PRINCESS?" said Amar looking everywhere-his only daughter, his soul.

He felt tug in his pants and smiled looking down at his daughter; he picked her in his arms.

"AWE MY PRINCESS...MY KHUSHI" he kissed her cuddy cheeks and she giggles aloud. Kissing her father's face making it wet with her saliva. Arnav looked at her kissing her father so lovingly and unknowingly smiled.

"SHE MISSED YOU A LOT...ONLY I KNOW HOW SHE SNATCH MY MAMA AT NIGHTS" said Arnav smiling and hugged Amar and Mira kissed his forehead like a mother.

"NO IT WAS FUN TO BE WITH KHUSHI AT NIGHTS CHOTE" said his mother placing tray filled with tea and snacks on the side table.

"YOU JUST DON'T LOVE ME ANYMORE I KNOW" Arnav said faking sad.

"OHH MY SON...YOU MADE HIM SAD" Mira laughed and kissed his hairs lovingly.

"LOOK MIRE MAA LOVES ME MORE THAN YOU" Mira laughed aloud and everyone join her.

In few minutes, Akul Malik and Arjun Malik too joined them, Arjun looked at Amar and then at Mira with envy.

Mira was his passion even in university, he was senior and she was college student(many universities have community colleges) he had a crush on her but she was a girl with such a big attitude and never let any guy nearing her but he was not any other guy he was Arjun Malik but still that girl have guts to ignore him too. It was not so bad feelings but things turn worst when she herself came to Amar and introduce herself to him. What was the difference between them but still she shack her hands with Amar, not with him.

He looked away from her as started talking about business with Amar, Aryan and his father.

Akul Malik loves Mira as much as he loved his other daughter in laws so they have no problem with the couple. They are happy with them.

"BABU JI, I WAS THINKING ABOUT OUR NEW PROJECT" said Mira smiling brightly at her Father in Law. She had study business and knew a lot about it.

"YES DAUGHTER TELL ME WHAT'S IN YOUR MIND" she smiled brightly before saying "BABU JI OUR NEW CLIENTS...I THINK WE SHOULDN'T WORK WITH THEM" everyone in the room was shocked but they knew only Mira had so damn confidence to argue with babu ji and her this quality was in her daughter too.

"WHY DAUGHTER?" asked Akul "BABU JI LAST YEAR REMEMBER WE HAD A DEAL AND WE SUFFER MAJOR LOSS IN IT AND I THINK WE ARE REPEATING THAT MISTAKE AGAIN" she stopped and said again getting approval from Akul "SO WE SHOULD COLLABORATE WITH RAJPOOTS" everyone gasped hearing her, everyone in Lucknow know about Malik/Raajpoot were rival from ages.

Akul calmly took a deep breath and said "GIVE ME A BETTER REASON TO COLLABORATE WITH THEM...PURSUED ME" she looked at Amar who smiled warmly telling her he is with her and that was enough for her.

"THIS DEAL WILL GIVE US 55% LOSS BECAUSE EVERYONE KNOW, THE PLACE WE ARE GOING TO RECONSTRUCT IS VERY DESERTED PLACE AND WE HAVE TO SPENT MONEY NO DOUBLE TO CLEAN THAT PLACE, THEN CONSTRUCTION WORKS, THEN PEOPLE WHO LIVE THERE..." she was cut off by Arjun Malik

"WE HAVE PERMISSION FROM COURT TO USE THAT PLACE FOR OUR PROJECT"

"BABU JI WE ARE BUILDING A NEW WORLD AT THAT PLACE...CAN WE LEAVE PEOPLE HELPLESS TO SUFFER SO THAT WE CAN MAKE OUR CITY BEAUTIFUL" her voice was low but still audible to everyone.

"SO WE CAN'T LET OUR COMPANY SUFFER" Akul Malik looked at his son before saying "NEVER MADE MONEY YOUR PASSION, LET IT BE YOUR PROFESSION" this thing was set in Arnav's mind and Akul turn toward Mira "CONTINUE" he said kindly.

she looked up and said "LAST YEAR WE GOT A PROJECT WHICH WE THOUGHT TO START THIS YEAR AND WE ARE SEARCHING FOR A CLIENT SO THAT WE CAN START IT BUT BABUJI RAAJPOOT ALWAYS HAD AN EYE ON OUR PROJECT SO" pause "I THINK WE SHOULD COLLABORATE WITH THEM"

"NONSENSE..." said both brothers in union and Subathra got up saying "AKUL JI NOW THIS ORPHANAGE GIRL WILL ORDER YOU WHAT TO DO" her eyes become teary hearing her MIL calling her orphanage.

"SUBATHRA JI LET US HEAR HER FIRST THEN WE CAN DISCUSS...AND (putting his hand on her head) DON'T CALL MY DAUGHTER ORPHAN...YOU CAN CALL HER ORPHAN AFTER MY DEATH"

"AKUL JI WHAT NONSENSE ARE YOU SAYING, I DON'T LIKE IT" Subathra said angrily "I ALSO DON'T LIKE WHEN YOU CALL HER THAT"

Subathra kept quiet and Akul asked Mira to continue "THE PLACE..." she told them every detail she could get for this project and surprisingly everyone was amused and had no offense on this collaboration. She knew how to make her place in other's heart and khushi had inherited this quality from her mother.

Mira was the woman who spread happiness with Ratna who helped her in every work. She liked Mira because the only member, her son was attached to, except her was Mira and she was well educated and she teach Arnav and Anjali and treat them very nicely.

Ratna is married to Arjun and they both are very happy. She was a simple village girl with strong morals which were inherited to her both children but in case of Arnav the rudeness and shrewdness inherited by father overcome her sweetness and soft nature. Her son had lost his heart at very young age and she was unaware of this fact.

Present Time

"ASR..." Arnav looked up at aman's tense form.

"YES"

"KHUSHI JI HAD LEFT THE CITY" he said closing his eyes.

"WHAT THE!!! HOW DARE SHE? GIVE ME DETAILS IN NEXT HOUR" he sat down closing his eyes. he was very angry.

Note#

OK i gave a loOng Flashbacks i know but i just wanted to give a long overview to their past because it way too important for this fiction to progress...hope you all won't mind their will be many more flashbacks till i let you know about Arnav's mother's suicide attempt and Khushi's parent's death. after that their will be arshi, arshi and arshi.



plzz stop reading if you don't like it :/😆i am not gonna change this plot ;-)

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