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🤣🤣Neil has to be Neil at end of the day 🤣Ye Neil bada chalu cheeze banega future mein 🤣
🤣🤣Neil has to be Neil at end of the day 🤣Ye Neil bada chalu cheeze banega future mein 🤣
Neil kind of stalking Mini 😈
Hero of this series is fairy papaji Ashok
Wish he was her dad
Part 5
Soon the singing competition started and everyone came to give performance. Some were applauded, some had to face hooting, some received neutral reaction. Finally Neil’s turn came. He was still nervous. He looked at Ashok, he thought he owe this to him. After all what Ashok have done for him, he can do at least this much and who knows he can really pull this up. As soon as he stepped from corner of that stage then according to Ashok’s plan the committee member switched off the stage lights. Now Neil could see everyone but due to darkness on stage nobody could see him clearly. When the anchor was about to announce his name at the same time committee member pulled off his mike plug. He thought that he has said the name but nobody heard it actually. The moment lights and sound mistakes started happening people started hooting and making comments on the singer on stage ie, Neil. He was already nervous and after listening to all the funny comments he started to walk back but then Ashok gestured him to continue. He pointed his finger in second row corner where Mini was sitting. Neil looked at her and finally decided to confess his feelings through song.
“Ooooo voooo…Oooo…” As soon as Neil started humming amidst all hooting suddenly the whole auditorium was silent. The range of his voice was such that everyone was instantly aware that they are in for a real treat. They stopped complaining about the lights and other things. So they stayed quiet giving Neil chance to sing further.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera?
As soon as words came out of Neil’s mouth whole auditorium roared with applauses and whistling as he started singing everyone’s favourite song, the song to which every young girl or boy relate to, feel for and adored a lot. Neil gained some confidence after such good response and closed his eyes. When he opened them again he could only imagine Mini, his Mini sitting in the hall, just listening his song and he is dedicating his song for her, to somehow convey his feelings for her.
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera?
Tujhse juda gar ho jayenge
To khudse hi ho jayenge juda
Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqi, ab tum hi ho
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khudko jo yun de diya hai
Tere wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Sare gham ko dil se nikala
Tere Saath mera hai naseeb jurah
Tujhe paake aadura na raha
Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqi, ab tum hi ho
And Neil’s feelings did reach to Mini. She was lost in the song. She has listened to it so many times but she felt like she was listening it for the first time. The feelings, the voice was attracting her like a magnet. She could not see who the singer was and neither knew his name but she somehow could feel that feelings behind the song were real. She was lost in trance when the song ended. much to her dismay, she almost felt bereft. The auditorium erupted with applauds for the talented singer but he didn’t stand there long. As soon as the song ended he almost ran to back stage. As it was the last performance and results were to be announced only after two days with all results of all the other competitions so nobody waited there. Everyone started leaving the auditorium as they had to get ready for evening’s grand college dance. Mini tried to reach back stage to see the singer but couldn’t due to the crowd. She felt restless for not knowing about singer. Somehow her friends convinced her to come out and get ready for dance.
“Yoohoo! Neil, tune toh kamala kar diya….sab log pagal ho gaye the teri liye taaliya bajakar…kya gaaya hai yaar.” Bobby almost jumped at Neil when he came out of the auditorium.
“Its all because of you Ashok sir. Thanks for giving me confidence. I felt today for the first time I gave words to my feelings for Mini and I know somewhere she must have felt it too.” Neil confessed.
“Today is your day boy. I know bahut jaldi tum sabke samne sabko face karke bhi gaoge. Singing se to tumne Mini ko impress kar hi diya hai ab sham ko uske sath dance karke face to face bol dena usko.” Ashok encouraged him.
Everyone returned home from college. Neil was excited and he was getting his clothes ready for the evening. Mickey and Manmeet was already dressed in their best clothes. They came in Neil’s room only to find Neil ironing his clothes for the evening.
“Hey! Stuttering tubelight, from where you got these clothes. They look expensive. I don’t think you have that much money.” Mickey asked as he snatched the black jacket Neil was supposed to wear.
“Hey look! Its branded. I think he has started stealing money from us.” Manmeet concluded and before Neil could have stopped them, they called their mom.
“Mrs. Sandhu looked at Neil’s clothes and asked him strictly, “Chal bataa, kaha se aaye ye kharidne ke liye paise?”
“W..wo….mm..maine….no…notes ke bad…badle kamaye hain…meri mehnat ki kamayi hai. Usi se ye kapde liye the aaj college dance mein pehenne ke liye.” Neil tried to explain.
All three of them laughed together, Mickey and Manmeet on the thought of Neil attending college dance and Mrs. Sandhu on the prospect of Neil earning this much money on his own.
“Jhoot! Itne saare paise kama liye aur hume pata bhi nahi chalne diya…bewakoof samjha hai kya. Zarur tune ghar ke hisaab mein se churaliye honge.” Mrs. Sandhu accused him.
“And just look at yourself. What made you think that you can attend college dance? Which girl will dance with you idiot? You will make a fool out of yourself.” Mickey made fun of him.
“And how dare you to even think about wearing better clothes than ours?” Manmeet threatened him.
“Boys! Teach him a lesson. He must know he cant hide things from us.” Mrs. Sandhu ordered and on her command her both sons burnt Neil’sclothes with the iron, together burning his dream of attending college dance.
“You dare go out to that college dance and I’ll swear I will kick you out of the house that very instance. Jab sar se chat chali jayegi natab pata chalega raaste par aana kise kehte hain. Phir rehna apne usi college campus mein kisi sadk chhaap ki tarah.” Mrs. Sandhu threatened him and went out. Mickey and Manmeet burdened him with all their class work, projects and assignments so that he wont have time even to breathe let alone attend college dance.
Neil was heartbroken again. He felt his destiny has played a cruel game with him, given him hopes and then snatched it mercilessly. What not he did just to attend this dance and now look at him now, stuck in his home, busy doing work for his evil brothers.
Neil heard that Mrs. Sandhu had received a call and it sounded like there was party in her friend circle. She went out but not before threatening Neil again. “Main party mein ja rahi hoon. 12 baje aa jaungi. Khabardaar jo ghar se nikalne ki himmat ki. Agar maine aane par tum ghar mein nahi mile to samajh lena phir kabhi is ghar mein kadam nahi rakh paoge.” Neil just nodded feeling disappointed.
It was around 10pm when Neil heard a knock at the door. He thought Mrs. Sandhu returned soon but he was surprised to see Ashok and Bobby there.
“What are you guys doing here?” Neil asked rubbing his eyes as if he was hallucinating.
“We should ask you this question. You were supposed to attend college dance. But when you didn’t turn up and only your evil brothers came, I followed them and heard them laughing at your expense. They were boasting about what they did to you to their friends and their equally pathetic friends were enjoying a good laugh too.” Bobby explained.
“So we came here to bring you with us.” Ashok smiled.
“But what will I wear now? They burnt my clothes and have left tons of work assignments for me and top of that Mrs. Sandhu has warned to throw me out if I dared to step out. She will return till 12. I must not go anywhere in this situation. I am still trying to save money for hostel. I don’t want to be homeless when exams are coming close.” Neil was helpless.
“Oh come on now my male Cindrella. Your fairy God father is here then why worry?” Ahsok joked and Bobby laughed.
“What do you mean?” Neil was confused.
“Leave the assignments for later, you can finish them after returning. Still you have two hours left. You can still enjoy the dance. And about dress….tada…we came prepared.” Bobby said as he showed him the rented tux.
“But what if my brothers see me there, they will tell Mrs.Sandhu about it.” Neil shared his doubt.
“Your destiny is finally favoring you because this year’s theme for dance is masquerade ball. You will be wearing a face mask and no one will recognize you.” Ashok answered excitedly.
Finally Neil was convinced for coming. He got ready in hurry and went with Bobby and Ashok. Before entering to college he turned back and gave Ashok a tight hug. “Thank you for everything, for being there for me, for really being my fairy God father.” Ashok just ruffled his hair in affection. He was proud on himself that he could help out this innocent boy.
Neil saw everyone was dancing with there respective partners. He saw Mini was standing in one corner, lost in her thoughts. Her date Rahul was busy ogling other girls in short dresses. Seems like Mini was disappointed with her date. Just then last dance was announced and Neil found the opportunity to ask Mini.
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to be continued...
I know the update is very late but if by any chance anyone is still interested then...
Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul
I know the update is very late but if by any chance anyone is still interested then...
😔 what is this ? 🤢😈is this what you think about us here ?💔💔💔🥺🥺🥺😈
Could imagine only Mini sitting there n Neil singing for her this waa beautiful.
Next is their dance this one i can imagine.
Before 12 Neil should reach home n masquerade party n all 😉i liked how you fitted this concept here nicely 👏
just wondering...its very late update.
i know waiting for long time makes one lose interest.
but think I underestimated you guys....you people are the ones who celebrate anniversary of my stories....such immense love you all have.
sorry for thinking like that.
Originally posted by: N_sharmaa
Could imagine only Mini sitting there n Neil singing for her this waa beautiful.
Next is their dance this one i can imagine.
Before 12 Neil should reach home n masquerade party n all 😉i liked how you fitted this concept here nicely 👏
I wanted a imaginary song or something like that on mineil. I was hoping we will get one during upcoming court room drama in the show but...our badluck.
so I tried to write something like that here.
after all its cindrella toh masquerade ball dance, 12am restriction etc ye sab to hona hi tha.🤣
Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul
I know the update is very late but if by any chance anyone is still interested then...
😈😈 Interested ? You know not just us even silent and so called accidental readers also keep waiting for your updates and you are saying such things!!
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