AvNeil SS : LOVE at First 'SITE'..!!(Completed.!!) - Page 3

Originally posted by: docritu99

Well, you never know, people may find peace and enjoyment in ur madness.! 😉

I am actually scared from so much excedding expectations and hope.!
Payal save me, ohkay.!

Originally posted by: paayaal

Don't worry dear...Payal to the rescue!!!!😃

I'm here with the Prologue...do you think that'll be enough for now or do you think I should wait a bit more?😲

Great.!
It will be more that enough.!
NOW, NOW, NOW.!!!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Great.!
It will be more that enough.!
NOW, NOW, NOW.!!!

Don't think I'm flattering you both but I seriously got some sort of Baahubali feels from the prologue. The warriors base, the atmosphere you created, it took me to another world. I'm already amazed to see how Avni and Neil affect each other psychologically. Consider me as a regular reader of this magnum opus presented by you, Riyal.

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Payal ,update RIGHT now. I'm already impatient.

Ok first of all let me tell you dt was totally unexpected.

Originally posted by: Aphrodite_NV

Reserving for now.

Originally posted by: drbeth

Ok first of all let me tell you dt was totally unexpected. Thank you thank you...that was the brief and we succeeded! Yay!!

I couldn't hv guessed dis was coming. If you'd guessed where would have been the fun in that!😃

While reading I felt like I hv re- entered GOT. Really? Wow...that's a huge compliment. I haven't watched even a single epi though m aware how huge a rage it is!

The plot is interesting. Aage aage dekho hota hai kya!😃

You hv described d two povs very nicely.

Very well written. Thank you so much!😃

Sorry for d small review.Still trying to reel in dis new story. Take your time...we are not going anywhere!😃

Originally posted by: paayaal

Hey Tapasi,

So glad to see you here.🤗

I'm glad we have managed to ensnare your interest this early on...our only concern would be to be able to maintain it throughout!!

But since it's a short story we might just get away with it!😛😆

Stay tuned for more twists & turns that'll be following this Prologue pretty soon!

Love,

Payal.😃