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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks... very much appreciated.. at least now i have got some fans. i will try to give thr forum something to work with..meaning a story.. i will try to post the other episode as soon as possible
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Lovely opens the door and all are shocked to see the police officers out there. All goes to the door. Lovely says how may I help you? Police says I'm Mr. Kalesh. Shibu comes and says yes, Mr. Kalesh, how may we help you? Kalesh says you know that there has been a crime in your house and as due to our first evidence around the crime scene we found out that one of the female members of this family was involved in the crime. All are shocked! Lovely says what are you saying? This family can never do something like that! Massa adds that before you accuse any of us in here, get the facts right. Kalesh says that's exactly what I'm doing. As per eye witness, they said one of the DIL has been involved in this crime! All are shocked.

Karantiya comes and says hey! Mind your tongue! What do you think this is? Who do you think we are? We may be out of our house but remember, we have a reputation and none of us will do something like this! Shibu says enough! As per law, we can't say he is wrong but we can prove that we are innocent as such you will have to go into custody to make your statements. Massa is angry and says why we should? We know to ourselves we are innocent, this can be done never! Karantiya says yes! Nimmi says I can't believe they can accuse us like this! Gehna says forget accusing, I wonder who has told them that one of us is involved! Ria says whoever it is, it's part of their scam! Karantiya recalls Aarti words with what she said "you will regret slapping me"! Karantiya says I know who it is! All are surprised and worried!

Lovely says come on tell us who said this! Kalesh says the matter is confidential and he can't disclose anything! Lovely says wow! I'm glad you said that! In these times, people are very cruel and lie just to get others in trouble! Kalesh says Aunt; please come to us to the custody to make your statements or else anything can be used against you in the court of Law! Karantiya says I won't go anyways and she sits on the gorund! All are surprised! Nimmi and Gehna also agree! Shibu says Karantiya get up! She doesn't hear him and he shouts at her! Everyone is shocked! Shibu says no matter what you have to give a statement to prove that you are innocent. I am a police officer too, nothing will go wrong! All comes outside looking sad! Karantiya sees Aarti and gets angry! Karantiya says even I have something to say Mr. Kalesh! The officer says what? Karantiya says I don't want it to be confidential but I saw Aarti last night in front of our home leaving when I went for water! All are shocked! Aarti eyes could pop out! 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OOO!!!! 😲 very interesting, hope u post next epi soon, I'm intrigued to know the restVery good job 👍🏼.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Karantiya and Aarti suits to quarrel with each other... i just love them too when they quarrel! will post next part soon. may be just now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeah I enjoy the little fights between Karantiya n Aarti n they way Karantiya always silences aarti 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yep, i didnt plan next part.im going and think now and post it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5

Shibhu says what are you saying Karantiya? Karantiya says yes it's true. She narrates to them what happened. ****Flashback*** Karantiya wakes up and is thirsty. She checks her mug at her bed table but it's empty. She yarns and goes downstairs and takes a glass of water but hears some noise at the door. Karantiya puts glass down and goes by the door saying "who is there?" Karantiya sees the door open and goes but doesn't see anyone, and turns to go back but then realizes something and looks back and see Aarti at the corner of their house. Karantiya thinks who is there? And thinks it's some thief. She quickly closes the door and goes upstairs" **back to present** Shibu says that does not prove Aarti was there. Karantiya says yes, but this does. She shows an earring. Karantiya says she found this out here this morning. I wonder who it belongs to! Aarti is shocked and says yes, it's mine but I didn't kill Devishka! Kalesh says even you will come to police station with us!

Before they are to leave! Someone says I didn't expect this of you! I always respect this family but look what has happened! They killed my daughter! All see is Maya (Devishka's mom). Massa says what you are saying; we have not done anything like that. Lovely says you are mistaken Aunt Maya! Maya says really/ then why has police come to your house to take you to station! Lovely says how did you know that police is taking us to station? All are shocked! Maya says then why are you leaving with the police then? To go to a club, a party? Everyone is there and is talking about the Kaushik's family. All leave for the station! At station, all give their statements! Karantiya says I'm sure Aarti is engaged in this crime. They have a quarrel and Shibhu calms them down. They leave and return home!

Aarti says Massa, you will see, mark my words. Karantiya is not a good girl, wait and watch! Karantiya looks shocked and says what are you saying? Come say it to me? Or are you afraid that I might kill you too? All are shocked! Lovely says what? Karantiya says I was just provoking her. Massa says come let's go inside. Inside Massa slaps Karantiya! Massa says since this crime has happened you are talking non-stop and cares less for our reputation. Massa says remember one thing, I won't spare you once you make a mistake. If Aarti is getting you angry then let me deal with it. Why do you need to behave so foolishly outside? And yes, why didn't you tell us you saw Aarti? Karantiya says does anyone believe anything I said? Two days ago when I told everyone I saw a shadow did anyone believe? Tell me Massa! Did anyone believe? No, right? All of you make joke and said I was dreaming! Then why should I tell you again? Karantiya cries while Massa says don't give me attitude. Karantiya says forgive me Massa but I'm just answering you back because I know I'm right and all of you have said I am wrong and look what has happened! All are worried and Massa is surprised.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your Fan fiction (FF) is really wonderful, I'm really enjoying it 👏.Now I am wondering Who is the killer???? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks..even i am wondering lol..i have not plan anything special,im going with the flow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well u have got a wonderful imagination 😆, I bet the story end will be great.
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