Originally posted by: --Elara--
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Unres kal pakka. ππ
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Review of all the parts one by one. π³ π
The prologue-The 2 phrases that caught my attention were "the poojniya devil shakuni" π π and "the queen of his heart". The entire thing is so nicely done and i like this concept of a warrior drau. The scene between ardi was just β€οΈ
Chap-1-Aye haaye that teasing and taunting and that shighra hi aa jayegi. βΊοΈ Aww satya and panchali taught a good lesson to ashwatthama's men. π Govind's, swayam bhudevi ki tarif hum kaise karein? π³ π And arya's eyes looking for his yagyaseni. π³ Vivah tay ho gaya phir bhi pata nahi chala! π
Chap-2-Aww our ever naughty parth ke madhav. π And that meeting!
How magnificently have you described the killing of ashwatthama, just wow!π I am really speechless! And I am in love with this draupadi! So so amazing! The last part did all the magic for me! As always a fantastic effort that was a pleasure to read. βοΈ
Love
Your Ramya di π€
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