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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pragati. Looked up into Gandhari's eyes and asked. You and grandmother were not present there. How do you know who gave which present? And tell me fast whom did my father loved the most." Gandhari smiled at Pragati's impatience.' Little princess, Have patience. And we knew everything through your Priyamvada Nani who was there with your mother." After Rekha Chitra came and offered her husbabnd a beautiful pair of arm guards made up of famous Manipur gold with small diamonds fitted into them. Manipur's unique lustre is shining through them. When she fitted them on Arjun's hands they shone in such brightness that Krishna commented.' When you wear them and hold Gandiv no need of shooting arrows. Your rivals will be mesmarised by these arm guards ." Arjun laughed heartfully and praised Chitra to skies. Nakul expressed his heart break. See the benefits of breaking vows. I regret not doing so." Sahadev reprimanded him.' Now don't keep eyes on his presents. His birthday today." Next came Ulupi and presented Arjun unique golden chappals wearing which he can walk in water just like on land. The finishing is nice and they fitted into Arjun's feet perfectly.Satya asked Arjun to walk in the pool and he did so . Ulupi asked him with hesitation.' Did you like them?" Arjun smiled enchantingly. ' Ofcourse I always welcome your miracles and illusions." His words made Ulupi blush and Panchali frown.Alli Rani what is your present? Satya asked.Alli pouted and gave him super fine Madhurai silk white Dhoti with White Silk Kurta on which pearls were nicely stiched. It has a white silk head gear that Arjun can tie up on his thick curly hair. To sum it up the three piece dress instantly won acclaim from every one and Arjun lost his heart on that beautiful piece. When did you get it ready? He asked with surprise.Alli replied.' When father is coming for Rajasuya I sent him message to get them as I,like and he brought.You liked them? She asked with enthusiasm.Arjun patted her cheek and admitted lovingly.' Your choice is perfect. I loved them." Satya is confused why Panchali did not bring anything with her. By then Kirti slrpt and Panchali is observing the proceedings with sleepy eyes. She had a tedious day with all the guests and serving food. She is occassionally glancing at her handsome husband who became the centre of attraction of ladies. She lovingly muttered to herself looking at him enamour his wives.' My flirty husband But can't help loving you." Suddenly Subhadra was pulled towards Arjun and she opened her present as every one looked with curiosity.She took out a set of ear rings Kundalas which are simple but beautiful. They are made with tiniest diamonds with rubies hanging down giving them a stunning appeal. Every one was spell bound on seeing them and Nakul wondered' Subhadra Bhabhi Where did you get them made? Please I also want one pair.Krishna laughed and looked at Satya. When they went to heaven for Parijat Indra presented them to Krishna . He did not wear them and Satya obliged Subhadra when she asked them for Arjun. Actually she brought them to Indraprasth to make Krishna wear them.Krishna appreciated Satya by smiling at her lovingly.Subhadra immediately made Arjun wear them and praised him.' They suited you so well.You liked them? Look into the mirror." Subhadra tried to ask the maid bring the mirror. Arjun stopped her and said looking at her with immense love.' I can see my image in your cheeks or eyes." Subhadra blushed and every one clapped. Satya is restless. She does not know whether to call Panchali or not.But Panchali's cowives are too curious to see what the queen of Indraprasth will gift Arjun.They demanded Satya.' All of us did our bit. Now it is the turn of the First wife." Nakul commented . Panchali has the whole treasury under her control. She will select the best for Bhrata. Arjun looked at his Krishnaa who is unperturbed. Satya finally hesitatingly asked.Panchali my friend. Where is your gift? " Satya doesn't want to embarrass her but...Panchali got up and stood in all her splendour.The crescent moon is showering rays on her petite yet tall figure. The dark complexion enhanced her beauty. Her long single plait became loose and her luscious hair hung down her hips.She wore a half white saree that suited her the most. The Mang Ka teeka and the waist belt both given by Arjun embellished her stunning looks. The jasmines in her hair fully blossomed and hung on her back. The nose ring is the special attraction that made her cute face look more beautiful . The eye lotuses are half sleepy and vied with the lotuses in the pond. Every one got mesmarised on seeing Krishnaa Yaajnaseni who walked majestically towards her handsome husband looking at her with uninhibited passion. She looked around approached Priyamvada and took Pragati from her hands.The cute little daughter of Arjun still is awake smiling gleefully at her mother. Panchali approached Arjun stopped for a while and handed over Pragati to him. Arjun took his daughter still looking at his Krishnaa mesmarised. Pragati clasped Arjun's neck and giggled. Arjun looked at his daughter fondly hugged her tight and kissed her on her forehead.Every one was spellbound and silent. Ktishna broke the silence clapping rigorously.' Well done Sakhi. What a present you gave? He praised.Satya could not contain her happiness. Panchali won the game and how? She teased Arjun.How did you like your present?Arjun kissed his daughter and confessed.' I love my present. It is the best I ever got." Krishnaa Yaajnaseni looked at her Arjun with her bewitching smile.
Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thank u so m much for such a long update.
loved it to d core...
really it was d best gift given by panchali to arjun on his birthday.. 👏
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Wow! Such a beautiful update! And panchali's gift was definitely the best! Such a lovely update Lakshmi di. Eagerly waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pragati could not contain her excitement. She is the present given to her father? She did not remember anything as she is months old then. She asked Gandhari.'' Grand mother! Tell me what is the reactions afterwards. And also where did my father take grandmother?"Ganthari smiled at her enthusiasm and continued.' Chitra openly praised Panchali.' You are too clever. In one go you dominated all of us. " Subhadra agreed.' Yes That was fantastic.What better present he can get other than his daughter? " Rekha said.' Only you can think that sharp.All ornaments put together can not equal Pragati in his heart." Alli sighed.' I doubted you only will win finally. And that only happened." Ulupi and Arya did not say anything but conveyed their applause to Panchali with their looks.Panchali felt embarrassed and said.' It was not pre planned.I was too busy that I can not decide anything till now. I just did so since I am left with no option.All your presents surely dominated one another. They were unique. So please dont get disheartened ." Krishna applauded her.' You are magnanimous and pure at heart Sakhi.You made me proud today." Panchali requested Satya to leave her as her children will have to sleep.She took Pragati from Arjun and Malini held Kirti.As they left the fun and games continued till the wee hours of the morning .After that they dispersed to their anodes with their. Children.Arjun went to practice straight from there and returned for breakfast.His wily cousins along with Sakuni and Karna are present eating Indraprasth special dishes. As Krishna who is already there came forward to meet him halfway Arjun told Kunti to be ready to come with him after breakfast. Chitra and Subhadra are curious.' Where do you take her? Can we accompany you? " Subhadra placed her hands round Kunti's neck and cajoled her.' You will allow all of us to come with you no?" Kunti smiled at her dearest niece and told Arjun.' They also will come. Arrange for it." Arjun looked irritated while Satya enjoyed.Duryothan called out to Arjun.' Where are you taking your mother and my mother? We also will come.I hope you don't have an objection." Bheem ridiculed him.' Duryothan why are you interested when women have planned some thing? If you want I will arrange entertainment to you in the Boxing ring.I am ready to fight with you." Yudhishtir scolded Bheem.' Don't talk of duels Bheem. Why can't Duryothan follow Arjun? Let them go . Arjun take all of them along with Mata.' Arjun's face became dull. The way he wanted to make his mother surprised and happy now it can't happen exclusively. But he can not disobey his Eldest.Panchali observed his frustration and desparately thought.Come what may he won't change. His loyalty towards his Eldest won't change. He can't say no to him even in small matters..Then how can she even think that he should have opposed her sharing?As she is absorbed in herself Dussasan irritated Arjun in another way. The maids present at last midnight presents session spread the news everywhere about the entertaining session. Bhanumati whose maid informed her about it by mistake let Duryothan listen to everything without her awareness. Soon Sakuni Karna and Dussasan also got to know that Arjun got many valuable presents from his wives. Dussasan called Arjun and retorted.' Arjun heard that you got so many presents. I must say you are too lucky." Karn remarked.' Ofcourse the more the number the most benefit follows for sure." Arjun 's jaw tightened and before he could say anything Duryothan teased him' Arjun I was informed that your FireBorn wife's present turned out to be the most precious. Could you elaborate? Ofcourse she is special in every way...Arjun frowned and turned to Duryothan who relented a bit seeing Arjun's face and completed his line.Dont take me wrong. I am saying She is Special to you. Right?" Arjun anxiosly looked at his Eldest whose face is expressionless. Yudhishtir got up and left reminding Arjun to take Duryothan with him.Arjun looked at Krishna in frustration and Krishna smiled his Devine smile.
Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing one! Waiting for next..
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it was fabulous..i m really loving it..
waiting eagerly for arjun's surprise..
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

it was fabulous..i m really loving it..
waiting eagerly for arjun's surprise..

Thanks for liking the story. Today I will continue for sure.
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Originally posted by: ramya06

Wow! Such a beautiful update! And panchali's gift was definitely the best! Such a lovely update Lakshmi di. Eagerly waiting for the next one.

Thank you Ramya. By the way waiting for Wajah Tum Ho next Part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The Fifth day war started with Kauravas arranging their army in Makara Vyuha the crocodile formationThe Pandavas formed themselves into Eagle formation.Bheem is its face Arjun its neck.Bheem instantly scattered the crocodile by not caring grand father Bheeshm.The Grandfather was miffed and destroyed Pandava army in huge numbers.Arjun observed that and attacked grandfather and saved his army.The Kaurava army could not tolerate his valour and started retreating.Duryothan blamed Drona with harsh words.' You and grandfather are invincible even to gods. Then how could Arjun destroy our forces in your presence." Drona felt bad and indicated that he and Bheeshma can not stop Arjun when he is in his element.Then Drona attacked Pandava army fiercely and Satyaki countered him. Sikhandi tried to stop Bheeshm but he refused and turned his chariot in another direction.The main battle happened between Bheeshm Dron and Bheem Arjun.Dhritarashtra's sons along with Duryothan attacked Bheem with mighty elephants.Arjun reached there and scattered them with his powerful arrows just like whirlwind.For sometime only the sound of Gandiv reverberated in all directions.The mighty Kaurava Army went back foot and took shelter with Bheeshma.Still Dussasan and Jayathratha along with Trigartas attacked Bheem and Arjun.Bheeshma came in middle and wounded Bheema while Satyaki attacked him with full force.In a short while Bheeshma killed the charioteer of Satyaki and moved away.Arjun came towards Grandfather but Aswathama rushed to him and shot arrows . Arjun cut the now thread of Aswathama who took another.When Aswathama shot arrows on Krishna Arjun got angry and the corners of his hazel eyes turned red.He pierced the armour of Aswathama and wounded his limbs.Then he pitied him and turned to another direction.Abhimanyu fearlessly attacked Bheeshm and shot arrows on him.He even destroyed Kaurava army with great skill . Bheeshm looked at the lion cub in the form of Abhi.He sideglanced Arjun who is fighting at a distance and praised his son. ' Phalgun.Your son lived ip to your reputation. I am immensely pleased. The legacy continues with me,Pandu you and now your son.' Arjun suddenly looked in the direction of his Pitamah and understood. His Abhi made him proud in every way.He looked endearingly at his son who is fighting with Duryothan's son Lakshmana kumar.Within a short while Duryothan's son got wounded and Kripa took him away from Abhimanyu.Satyaki and Bhurisravas fought till both became driverless and chariot less.Arjun's extraordinary skills made Kaurava army perish in high numbers. Bheeshma sent twenty five thousand Chariot warriors to tackle Arjun but they were all smashed in the fire of Arjun's artows.Bheeshm immediately took decision to call off the battle as the sun is setting but the sun called Arjun did not look like getting tired at all.
Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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Nyc update...all d updates awesome...
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