Saga of two burned hearts.....An ArDi SS(Chapter 26 up!) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

amazing update

the narration of draupadi's beauty was brilliantly written.



thank u!!! i always get carried away when writing abt draupadi's beauty...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Amazing update dear ! Loved the way you described Draupadi and loved the fun convo between the Pandavs and wow Arjun is feeling something ☺️

Continue soon .
Ps update was long but not long enough to fill our hearts and ArDi plates πŸ˜†
Love
Sam


thank u!!! i always love abt writing draupadi's beauty!!! and i love a fun loving family!!!!!πŸ˜† arjun need to feel something... otherwise who will take the queen!!!!πŸ˜‰ yes, our plates and hearts don't feel becuz we r greedy ArDians...😈
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aanvi , Shall I call you by that name? Great writing. You really have spark of talent. Waiting more stuff from you. Good luck.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ltelidevaralak

Aanvi , Shall I call you by that name? Great writing. You really have spark of talent. Waiting more stuff from you. Good luck.

surely u can call me by that name!!! tnx!!! actually i thought i am blabbering to myself... is it good or not, to check that, for u all's views, i thought of posted it... didn't thought would get soo much response!!😳 i think it will continue a looongg time... i think i will be highly inactive after this month...πŸ˜’ thank u for all ur lovely comment!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful chapter πŸ˜ƒ

thank u, nonie di!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
The first parts were very beautiful! Loved how you described Draupadi's birth and the Pandavs' excitement on listening to her story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

The first parts were very beautiful! Loved how you described Draupadi's birth and the Pandavs' excitement on listening to her story.

TNX!!!! The part which fascinates me the most is draupadi... though i am not that big fan of arjun, but i am hardcore fan of draupadi!!πŸ˜› and pandavs need to be excited... but did u observe that only arjun was not excited, but "SOMETHING ELSE" !!!!!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER THREE:
PLAYS OF FATE...
As she came out of fire, she had every knowledge. Who wouldn't want everything in one pack? But had she every knowledge? She had no flaws in herself; she was perfect... But was she? No, she was not. No man can be perfect, because soul has it's own weakness... She saw her excited father,sister and her twin. she was draped in an orange saree; as same as the flame. she saw back in curiosity, to look at her creator. Then suddenly she saw her own footprints glittering. But her each footprint had three impression. She was surprised. "How can that be possible!" But hearing Rishi Upayaaj's voice, she proceeded. She saw her excited father, sister, and her twin. Seeing this whole new world, new perspective, she was little frightened. Her heart was pounding seeing all these new things. Her family was good, but she can't share her inner emotions with them. Because they are overprotective and will overreact and make a mountain out of molehill... She was that much intelligent... Then with whom she could share? Who will guide her in this unknown world? Who was her guide? She didn't knew it!She was surprised, confused and a little bit frightened seeing all these new people, all these new rules." I know nothing about this world. Who will guide me? My father, or my sister? Who?" she questioned. But fate knew its own tunes. As the wind brushed against Draupadi, a Morpankh had fallen on Draupadi's hand! See the fate! Her guide embraced her first! But did she knew it? Who knows the future!

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As they walked, Arjun thought that walk can be more blissful. But did he knew which walk is it? He wanted to know it... But his thread of thought broke down due to the cracking laughter of his two notorious brothers.

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Bheem saw that Arjun had no food in his hand. Then he took his hand in front of Arjun and said," Hey! Arjun, keep this food,my brother." " No, no, Bhrata Bheem. you keep it. I know you need more food. No problem. i do not need to eat." " What no need and no problem? Have you also conquered your hunger like sleeping? can i see my little brother hungry?" " Yes,brother. Keep some. if you do not want to take from Bhrata Bheem, then take from me." said Sahadev. Arjun had tears in his eyes seeing such caring from his brothers. " Yes, yes, Bhrata. keep it. Besides Bhrata Bheem need to control his diet. Otherwise how will the Princess look good beside him?" said Nakul. " It is better to keep a mounvrat before me, Nakul. Otherwise you know what can i do..." " Okay Bhrata... okay Bhrata... Kshma kijiye, mere pita!!!!" " Okay, jokes apart now... Now Arjun, are you taking it or not?" " But why, Bhrata?" I told one reason earlier. And another reason is, if Mata sees her laadla without food, then she will starve , but will give all her foods to you. Now surely we can't see our mother starving, right?" Arjun remembered his caring mother. After his father's demise, only his mother took great care of Phalgun. And remembering his mother, he agreed to take. " Okay. i will take it. But only half of your food." said Arjun mischievously with a sparkle in his eyes. "What? Half of my food!" said Bheem sadly "Okay, okay, Bhrata, don't be sad. I will take only a little of it. Is that okay? " Yes, yes, sure, sure" Said Bheem happily. And arjun shook his head laughing seeing Bheem's ignorant and innocent reaction. But little did he knew, when his turn will come in sharing, what precious thing he had to share with his brothers...

TBC...

P.s : Before the marriage of ArDi, i want to emphasize on their lives individually that how they thought, how their life was before marriage, their bonding with their families etc. But their will be some instincts surely!πŸ˜‰ hope that you will not have any problem with that...πŸ˜ƒ i am a little bit confused with shrikhandi... so i wrote sister. Btw, can u all guess the next chappy from the first part! Guess!πŸ˜‰

Edited by naturelover33 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
nice chapter πŸ˜ƒ
The way you described draupadi's nature to new world is amazing . the landing of morpankh in her hand was perfect. of govind will be always there for his sakhi πŸ˜ƒ
loved the bonding between brothers and bheem's caring for his little brother made me cry 😭
Edited by Nonie12345 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Aww! Love the bonding between the brothers. You also portrayed Draupadi's inner turmoil very beautiful! Can't wait for Kanha and Draupadi's first meeting!
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