Originally posted by: Jairamji
Would love to read your views! Excited about something different
Originally posted by: Yajnaseni
You are writing Yudhistir's POV. It is a nice job that you have taken up Urmila. Yudhi is a character beyond my comprehension and I have a deep mistake in my heart for all his qualities. Somewhere I an relate to him for not speaking untruth. Speaking only truth is seen as a hazard to life which I also hv. But unfortunately the evils of life hv caught up with me very fast.
Urmila I have some requests-1. Please show his wife Devika in the POV.2. Highlight his happiness, pain and guilt equally.3. Please highlight his reflections on Mahabharat Yudh and the aftermath.4. Please highlight on his relationship with Draupadi.5. Give some space to Nakul and Sahdev. They were among knowledgeable persons of that era.6. Do highlight on Pandu.7. Do highlight on Yudi's relationship with Karna, Dhritarashtra, Bhisma and Vidur pre-war and post-war.8. Don't show Bheem as a laddu maniac.Continue soon...
Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Wow ! Its A Great Idea !! Please Continue Soon !! And, Brilliant Intro, Its Surely Going To Be A Genius Piece Of Work !!!
Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99
π Thanks for sending PM Urmila di,Hmm...its not easy to write on Yudhishthir,lets see how this goes,nice idea..
Originally posted by: Urmila11
Thanks for your response Muskan π
I know it's not easy to write on him, but you know what, love can turn any impossible into possible π let me see if my love for him is true or not π³
Urmila, you truly are a Yudhishthir patni...π
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