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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sia n Kanchan,
Gr8 FF wid a unique story line...... Pri as archeologist..... must say its a very very interesting take n have enjoyed all the parts of dis FF n am looking forward 2 ur update๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nan08

Hey Sia n Kanchan, hi dear

Gr8 FF wid a unique story line thanx dear..... Pri as archeologist ya aage aage pado kya hota hia..... must say its a very very interesting take n have enjoyed all the parts of dis FF n am looking forward 2 ur update update is on its way dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Thanq all for ur lovely feedback

here we go with the another update of LT

Previous chapters link :

Chap 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/love-ne-mila-di-jodi/1440026/new-ss-the-lost-treasure-ch-8-pg-30?pn=4



PART 3

When Sameer finished reciting his poem now it was turn of uncle to recite poem, which he was forced to do so by aunty. He opened his wallet from his pocket and took a piece of paper from it as he wore his glasses on. Ramu (the servant) was coming to the hall with some dish watching uncle open that piece paper he ran away from there as he had heard that great piece of art already

uncle resiting what he called it as a poem...
Ma binn puche hee mujhe janam diya..

u gave me...

cloths to wear...

toys to play...

money to use...

mirror to see
oh Ma....

patak ne ke liye bat diya ...

lapet ne ke liye shawl
ma ne bachpan main kahan tha ki beta tum zarror

doctor banna lekin maine unki ek nai sunni..

sami interrupts : kyun jab apki mom ko aap par itna confidence tha toh.....

aunty cuts him...sameer bete kavita ke bech main savaal mat akro...

sami:han...kya? is kavitha shuru bhe hogayee aur kisine mujhe bataya nai?
pri:on his taunt....and shoos him...

uncle conts....

jab ma gujazar gayee..

tab humain unke saare chezze donate kardii..

unke...

tooth paste.artificate dantoh ka set...

unki chatrii...

bus donate kar apyee unkii yaadein kasie karta!



sami:aapke kavitha main bahut information han uncle

everyone had this knowing expression pasted on there faces
sami:hmm phir...
uncle: hogaya
sami:hogayaa???

eveyone whr starting each other...and had a hard time suppressing there laugh throughout the dinner.

After the dinner, aunty asked for the help of Sameer to clean up the table.

Priya "Uncle do u know ne guide who can take us for site seeing of this place?"

Uncle : Lo kar lo baat yaha aap ko ise jagha ka jeta jagta encyclopedia mel raha hai aur aap ko guide ki padi hai?

Priya : Uncle ye aap kya kahe rahe hai? Hame kuch samj nahi aa raha hai..

Uncle : oh tho aap logo ko pata nahi yeh jho aap ke samne kada hai who noted archeologist Prithvi Saxena hai

Girls : OMG OMG he is THE PRITHVI SAXENA

Uncle to PRithvi : beta u wont mind na to take these girls for site seeing?? By doing this u can also complete the research that u want to carry out n even show these girls some rare artifact

Prithvi : Ok uncle as u sa'.

Damini interrupts even before Prithvi completes "Nahi koi jarurat nahi hai hum apne aap mange kar lenge' inhe disturb karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai"

Girls to Damini : "DAMINI r u gone made kya he is the PRITHVI SAXENA socho haame apne thesis mein kitne help hogi agar yeh hume site seeing karwaye ge.."

Damini : hmm , ok then will go with him

Prithvi : Ok then be ready we will go leave for the Lothal by 10 in morning.

Girls : ok

Everyone wished goodnight to uncle n aunty and retired to there respective rooms.....as pri woke up in the middle of the night and pored himself a glass of water heard some voices in hushed tones...the sound was coming form the gals room ..the gals whr giggling recollecting the dinner scene pri peaks in and finds himself glazing at damzi observing her...a smile graced the corner oh his lips as he saw her laughing...only to by the pendulum he returned to his room brushing those thoughts off

Next Day all the girls were ready n waiting for Prithvi to show them places in Harappa civilization. They were standing in corridor when they see a handsome dude with a glares on a tracking cycle coming towards them. Seeing him all the girls where drooling and got lost in their own sweet world.


To be continued


- Sia n Kanchan

Edited by Kanchan.S - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Hiiii Girls.....
Thoroughly njoyed dis update.... such a good update yaaa.. uncle n his poetry๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† i was totally imgining sameer's expressions๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
n hamesha ki tarah damzie manage karlegi haan.....๐Ÿ˜‰
handsome dude with glares.... hmmmmmm๐Ÿ˜ณ
Lovely update Sia n Kanchan, though small it was quite entertaining..... ab pls jaldi update karo pleeezzeee.....๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
amazing part guys!!!
๐Ÿ˜† sameer.........
loved it to d core.........
cont. soon!!!
๐Ÿ˜ณ
sorry 4 short comment....lack of time....๐Ÿ˜ญ
Edited by juhi_karneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

.. Hogaya??? Bus? that was it๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Whatever iit was, was really hilariouss and awesomeโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ...
Even when I came to know kavita has started, uncle was finished with it.. (???me)
Sameer is so so funny and cute, love his nautangi.. And Damini, why she should manage herself, Pri hai na. She muxt better understand it๐Ÿ˜›.. Loved the concept and must be treasurely lovestory bw them.. Thanks Sia N Kanchan for combine Blasts.๐Ÿ‘
Edited by sonyo - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Nice part 3 ....

Waiting for ur next update... Sia and Kanchan..

-- Mru

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Sia and Kanchann !!
This was Totally Hilarious !! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† and what was that so called " Poetry " by Uncle ?๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
Loved Samir with his usual Witty Oneliners !!
And our Dude with Glares in the Morning !! ahem ahem........ ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love
Amiya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
hey girls !!

just wen i thought that no prayer cud be funnier then sam's ..u had uncle going

patak ne ke liye bat diya ...

lapet ne ke liye shawl
ma ne bachpan main kahan tha ki beta tum zarror

doctor banna lekin maine unki ek nai sunni..๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ



I have one request yaar ..plz include one such prayer in each update ...or better start all ur os/ff/ss wid one such prayer in the begining๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

now cuming to the main story ...PS taking them siteseeing...but damz doesnt like that ..i have a feeling that sum good prida fighting -shighting is cuming up ..or maybe sum durghatna wid damz and humara hero saving her ๐Ÿ˜.......w8ng for that or watever u girls have in store fr us ...

update soon

--khwahish๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by khwahish.e.arsh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
hey very nyc part
jusss amazingg๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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