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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nan08

As usual a wonderful update guyss👏👏 thanx nandu


Poor damzie lost her dad's locket.. i hope they r able get it back.. am quite curious to know if its only her dad's memory or der is any more secrets attached to it after all her dad was an archaeologist rite..hmmm..

n wats cooking for sameer... hehe

for all futher updates do read this FF
u hav left us dangling haan.. pls update asap..😛 update on it way

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazypridaholic

Sia and Kanchan'..!!! hiii nitiz

Read all d five parts in one go'. n must say enjoyed it thoroughly👏👏👏 '..!!! Great job by u guyzz ⭐️'..!!! thanx a lot dear...

The concept of ur SS is different'. Pri as archeologist '.sounds interesting'.!!!

I always love to read mysteries'.!!! Really loved d way entire story is progressing👍🏼 '.!!!we r really humbled that u liked it

M all excited to know what happens next'.!!! Update soon'!!! updates on it way

Plz add me to ur PM list 😳''!!! yeah sure

-Nitika

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vinnieangel

firstly srry 4 l8t cmmts,ws busy wid exms..😭 no prob vinnie can understand... studies always come first all the very best for ur exams

thx 4 d pm..🤗 mention not pal
it ws awesum..👍🏼 thanx a lot .. we r glad that u liked it
really missing prida a lot..😭 we too babe
awesum part..🤗
continue soon!!!😊 update on it way
waise kanchan di,where is d suprise which ws cumng few weeks back..???😍

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.three

hey....
lovely updt..........


thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
great story you have going here hope you can update soon!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great story you have going here hope you can update soon!😃


thanx Sonali
we r happy that u liked it...
update on it way
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello all Kanchy n I are atlast free and have come up wid a big update

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1440026&TPN=19



CHAPTER-6



His wish for Done as he saw her step down the car..the next thing he realized that he was facing this naive beauty,dont know how his feat made there way
automatically towards her .what was it that attracted him towards her?



Hi I'm Sameer CEO of Saxena internationals and u?

"ok so what do i do?"
The girl replies

"whats ur name?" he asks

"Im Avni thacker" she replies

" i saw at the international conference u where very busy there" he enquirers
"do we know each other"
a skeptical Avni

"No but we can if u cooperate we can" he blurts

"what? what do u mean" Avni with a stern tone

"Easy easy! " Sameer tries to chill Avni seeing her temper rising
" umm.. Friends? " a enthusiastic Sameer

"No!!" she relentlessly rejects

"Come on dnt act so price look im a good guy, a CEO and new here...i dnt have anyone to guide me" he tries to persuades her

"so how did u run Saxena international for so long"
Avni

"lol woh mei dost ke company hai we both are partners for the company bus,abhe toh u got to know me well na abhe toh dosti ke liye maan jaoo" Sammer tryin very hard.

"OK Friends"
Avni cherrfully

" yes Friends ONLY FRIENDS USSE BADHKE KUCH BHE NAI HAIN
ABHEE BOLDETA HOON ;)
😉" Sameer on his naughty spree

"shakes her head.. uff yeh ladke bhee na" shaking her head

"kuch kaha tumne" Sami

Nahi nahi toh kyun kuch kehna chaiye thaa?" she mocks

They exchange numbers
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After a few days... Avni gets a message from Sameer

Reads: Hi "DOST"



"wasup! aaj mere saath dinner chalogee" Sami

" opps i cant aaj party hain, better luck next time" she replies

" kaunse party??" intriguing Sami

"mere Uncle ki success party at The Good fortune resorts"Avi informs

"oh thee hai u njoy byee"
Sameer Puts the phone down

"Sameer aaj tujhe uss par impression toh jamaana hii hogaa, come what may waise invitation toh ayaa thaa abhe sonchra hoon ke mujhe jana chaihyee.
Acha nai lagegaa i should go besides business relations badhengee.."Sameer tries to justify

"But wahan woh Masterji MT hogaa usse kaise bachunga ...hmm jo hoga dekha jayegaa,Master ji mujhe business ke Basics sikhata hai pata nai mujh main ussne kya dekhaa"a troubled soul😆


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Damini couldn't come out of the shock that her locket is gone..it was there with her for so long and in no time its gone away from her,the thought of losing it was terrible a reality .Prithvi felt guilty for not having acted fast, now gone is gone but he couldn't let her cry like that so he decides to cheer her up someway he didnt know what makes this lady !!

hmm *scratches head* TING dimakhki batti jalagayee...he consults Sameer for advice as he Masters the ladki patana act so prithvi makes a call to sameer

"Aaree yaar agar koi ladki upset ho toh usse cheer kaise karte hai" Prithvi speaks without even saying a hi or a hello.

"not bad sudhar ra hai akhir bhabi ka asar hora hai..lage raho waise soncha nai tha ke itna drastic change aygea tujh may" Taunts Sami.

" Nautanki buskar jo pucha hai woh bol" vexed Prithvi

"dostko phone karke koi HI/ HELLO nai direct topic ..woh bhe Ladki pata ne ke nuske puchra hai toh koi aur kya kahee??tu toh gaya bro!" Sameer again on his favorite pass time...pulling Pri's leg.

"nai aise baat nai hain and han woh definitely tere bhabi toh nai hosakte, hmm woh hua yeh ke ..."narrates him all at cave..

"Aur abhe she is very sad tu bol abhe mai kya karun?" Prithvi consults him

Sameer thinks for a while "hmm usse cheer kar"
"fir maine phone kisliye kiya tujhe"
Prithvi with his hand on forehead

"oh ok ok... hmm usse kya pasand hai?" he asks

" hmm pata nahii" confused Prithvi

"Is she a baby doll or a tom boy??" Sameer inquires
"what W*H are u talking abt??" Pri's temper rising

"aar maine poocha ke does she wear skirts or suspenders??" Sami again

"nai dnt knw" Prithvi ruffling his head.
"oh hmm toh ek kaam kar since u said ke she likes ancient artifacts gift her any of ur excavated stuff or take her to some boring archaeological site what say??" Sami Advices

Prithvi gets a Grin on his face



"ok nautanki chal rakhta hoon " Prithvi puts the phone
" ek min ek min tu yeh nai puchegaa ke tere company kaise hhai?" asks Sami

" achee hogee" a confident Prithvi.
"yaar tu is company ka mallik hai n im just ua partner" says he

"woh company sab se ache chalrai hai" Prthvi heedlessly
" itna confidence???" Sameer

" kyun ki usse mera bhai chalara hai mujhe koi chinta nai hai" Prithvi says

Sameer gets a liitle aback by listening to his kind words..
"han theek he hai chal all the best wid bhabi ...ur first n most boring date bye! "as sson as he says this Sameer puts the phone down instantly in order to avoid Pri's bashing

So now prithvi is geared up to cheer damini

Pri knocks Damini's room there is no reply he again knocks but still there was no reply he then opens the door a little hesitantly ...there was no one at the first site, but as he entered the room he saw her near the window lost in her world looking no less than an angel...those flocks of her curly hair playing on her face...he had an urge to take them off her beautiful face, as son as he relies where he was standing and if he entertains this thought he would definitely get bashed ,thus shrugs the thoughts n moves on

he comes near her

"Daminiii? "he calls her

As soon as she realizes where she was she instantly turns back

"tum tum kab aye?" Damini questions

"kuch der pehle ,tum theek toh ho na??" he replies

"nahi mera matlab hai ...h..han" she replies

" han ya na???" He asks

"Prithvi leave me alone plzz" she requests

"Damini im sorry ke maine koshish nai ki m v sorry n i dnt like to see someone someone so beautiful like u have a frown on there face..therefore gonna take u to ur fav place bolo , will u come??" Prthvi tries to convince her

" kahan ??" she asks

" woh toh wahan jake hee pata chalegaa" prithvi

" but..i dont want to" she resits

" plzz mere liyee" he insists

The 'MERE LIYA' sounded so warm n sweet ke she couldn't say NO

They both reached the place and to her surprise it was indeed a very special place for her.

Pri felt good to see a smiling damini not entirely but at least he tried to bring some happy moments in her life

"Damini do u remember this was the same place where her father found the most precious treasure.His life's first adventure started very this place" He reminds her

She felt so proud of the fact that she was the daughter of sucha nice,humble man.
As they see all the carvings as always they get engrossed into them a cool breeze comes in through the wholes n windows of the cave and plays with the flocks of her hair which brushes his face

"ulfat ke afsaaon main shiddat hojaye shamil"


"Damini did u hear that?"Pri asks
"What? "damini with weird expression

Pri realizes that he was hallucinating n they move on



At once they both starts discussing abt a scripture and they slowly start coming nearer n nearer to eachother so much so that his breath could move her curls of hair from her shoulders..her soft silky hair on his masculine chest..the proximity was such that its Heat could be felt by them that moment was liike a life time for them,as if the time had stopped...then an awkward air comes btw them they go in the opposite directions ignoring each other



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Sameer at the party:

He lazes around in the party pretending to meet ppl but his eyes where only in search of one lady

Bumps into a man oops m sorry sir

Its Mr Mahesh Thackker [aka M.T] Avni's father .
" hello Mr Sameer Saxena Internationals ke CEO ,how ru beta" M.T

" Uf yeh Masterji fir se agaya mujhe ABC sikhaneeyeh baghwaan tuhee bachale mujhe" Sami mumbles in himself

"Acha batoo what is the definition of Stalks?" Questions Mr Thacker.

"Sir yeh sab main already bachpan main padh chukahoon aap fir se mujhe kyun puch rai hain" a troubles Sami.

" nai aaj kal ke business men ko kuch nai pata hota hai tumhan dekha toh laga ke tumhain kuch pata ho"he says

Sameer sincerely tells the definition n excuses himself n literally runs for his life n bumps into Avni

" Hey Sameer what a suprise tum yahan kaise ,why r u sulking?all is well?" a sweet Avi
"I have been invited here n first hide me somewhere warna woh yaha bhe aajayegaa" he hides behind her

" kaun sameer?"she asks
"woh Materji " he says

"kaun masterji?" a confused Avi

"M T - *M*ONS*T*ER" he says

"what? tumhain unse kya pb hain?" she asks

" Problem woh khud ek bada pb hain i pity his kids iss QUESTION BANK ke saath kasie rehte honge Kaie Cartoon ke tarha lagta hain woh dekhotoh unehee Pumpkin jaise pait tomato jaise naak pora ka pura vegetable market lagta hain" he gibs

"Bus bus aur kitna chidhaogee unhee" she gets up

" kyun na dantoo ohh budhene ne tumhain bhe bahut tang kiya hogaa na tum bhe bolo kuch" sami

" lol main kuch nai bolsaktee, He is My DAD " she declares

"Wwhhaat!!! "a freaked out sameer

Sameer then excuses himself from there and Enters the rest room:

"Sameer to himself infront of the mirror ur a cool dude Chill .. i know ke MT QUESTION BANK HAIN N VEGGI BANK bhee but easy
man easy toh kya hua uske itnee beautiful beti hain isnt that enough! Forgive him man!!
U go now tell her that she is beautiful n u like her..."Sami talks in himself

As he talks to himself someone pats on his back n ask him
"WHAT ARE U DOING HERE?" the person asks

Sameer repeats the same the girl says

"U DUMBO THIS IS LADIES RESTROOM"
As he here's that he Runs out of there in embarrassment


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Even after the surprise cave visit damini couldnt forget the loss,prithvi's guilt didn't let him sleep her tears now started pricking him

He decide to get to her back to her original self at any cost
Prithvi at the stable hmm horse riding kisi ke bhee bus ke cheez nai hain indirectly pointing at damzi n he went on n on a chauvinistic spree
Damini couldnt take it n they end up challenging eachother
jo bhe iss horse ko kabu main karega n ride it jeet usske

Precap:




She couldn't see him lye on that bed like a veggie she felt so terrible

Edited by sia88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sia n Kanchy...

liked the upate a lot.. feeling bad for damizie.. hope Pri cheers her up soon..
loved the sameer-avni part veyr much :))) sach mein sameer is a big nautanki..
thnks for the update guys.. pls update soon now.. 😛
Edited by Nan08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely upt.🤗
missing them............😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar kanchu and sia di and i just loved samies nautanki
QUESTION BANKlolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz🤣
MASTERJI hehehe...........🤣🤣🤣
i loved it
Edited by FANAA_4KarNeet - 13 years ago
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