Originally posted by: Sweet_violet
You made me cry Maham . . . . What a brilliant blend of emotional potrayal . . . .d Prithvi breakin down part was heart wrecking . . . N Damini trusts Prithvi . . . . I can already see . . D ray of hope . . . The light . . . Ready to engulf d darkness out of Pri-Damz-Payal's lyf 4ever ...
P. S : is Rahul comin back? Will he play d cupid btw PriDa . . .?? If so then . . . .what will happen to our Prithvi-Rahul Dostana 2? . . . 😛 🤣
Anyway thank you so much Radsy... To a better future for PriDa and Payal.. Wait I'm still figuring that one out. :PMaham...
I just do not know what to type out... have literally become sooo numb by all those emotional turmoil in your update.. cannot express in words how bad i felt for Prithvi .. was really glad to see that Damini was around him this time to easy out the pain.. hope Prithvi gets some respite very soon and not let his guilt and pain consumes his and Payal's relationship and future life.. saw so much similarities between the father and daughter when they were being consoled by Damini... drunk Prithvi seemed cute :Dn nooo this update WAS NOT AT ALL incomplete.. infact a very powerful buildup i would say... though both Prithvi and Damini might not openly acknowledge but like you have mentioned they have taken little steps in moving towards a brighter future from darkness of Damini's forgotten and Prithvi's guilt-ridden past...fantastic update as usual 👏waiting eagerly for the next update ... pleaseee do smthing to reduce Prithvi's pain and guilt 😊
Originally posted by: amiya121
Mahammm my Dear !! 🤗
This is Absolutely SMASHING ...so Intense and Powerful...sooo Painful but Brrilliant !! 👏⭐️Oh Prithviii... what a Tortured Soul... His Pain... his Angst... the sense of Wretchedness that is Consuming him... being Conveyed sooo Evocatively through your words. ⭐️⭐️His Misery ... Loneliness... feeling of his Life being Completely Empty,,,,,, pushing him into an Unending Abyss of Guilt , Pain and Misery that his life has become... Superb portrayal of his Pain and Wretchedness... Too Good !! 👏👏But what felt really Goood was that finally he has decided to TALK to Damini ... finally he has decided to Break down the walls around himself and let Damini enter... he has deicided to let Damini have a peep inside his Tortured Mind and Heart... It really gladdens my heart 😊😊and what can i say about the part about Damini Comforting him... Consoling him...being there for him ... Siigghhh... Beautiful and Sooothing beyond words !! ⭐️⭐️ Atlast he can be at Peace ... he can feel some Comfort... some Calm ( for sometime atleast ) !!Then comes the Best part for me... your lines about Damini being there always for Pri ...just as he has always been there for her ( even though Unfortunately she does not know that now ) Damini being there to lift him ... being there to help him in Mending the Broken pieces of his life... Here you have Captured the Essence of PRIDA for us !! Absolutely Loooved Ttese lines ... OUTSTANDING ⭐️⭐️and finally the last part ... she is coming to stay with them at their home ...Wooohooo ... This makes me Verryyy Verryyy Happyyy... 😃😃What can i say about the Brrilliance of your Skills ... the power of your Thoughts and the Amazing Talent you have of putting down those toughts into words ... the words which Touch our hearts... speak of all these Deep and Intense Emotions... and that too soo directly to our Hearts... i can only say that we are really Fortunate to have you as a Friend and fellow Pridaholic... that you give us such Beautiful Writings... such Priceless Gems to savour .Thanks once again for this Fantabulous Update !!LoveAmiya
Originally posted by: shalini_s
perfect.. pure pain in the words that u had written.. awesome update..
Originally posted by: booksfreak07
Wow! You're such a brilliant writer, it's amazing. The feelings, the emotions, the turmoil, the doubts and the love lingering somewhere and the background, incomprehensible and ignored.
Beautiful and really long (always a good thing 😆 )
Looking forward to the next part!
Hi Maham, luved the update.U have expressed prithvi's emotion n feeling very beautifully. really awesum n perfect.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.
Originally posted by: darknite
Expression you expressed in each line was just perfect. Keep up the good work 👏
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Originally posted by: deereyedgal504
Whoopsie! i have 2 huge parts to read..will reply when I'm done...that means minimum in 2 weeks😆
Originally posted by: Khwahish
Hey Maham !!
what do i say ...i am totally out of adjectives to describe your writing yaar !!it was fantastic as always ..my most fav parts r the one where u were describing how the words of adults shape the personality of a child ...so true re !!All the scenes were perfect be it the Pri-Da scenes, Prithvi Payal scenes or the Damini payal scenes ...its gud thjat u r finally giving a hint of brighter tommorow of Prida to your readers...that is something i am really looking forward toand now i see that Rahul is back in the picture ...i am very curious about his role in the story ...i mean ...if he'll help Prithvi come out of his guilt ...or he will hold resentment in his heart and blame Prithvi for Naina's demise ...also ...am VERY eager to see a Jealous Prithvi ...if at all that happens (see so many complications in Prida story already ...and i still want more ...i dnt knoe if i evn have the right to call myself a Pridaholic 😆)ohh and yeah like Rads ...also curious about the Pri-Hul dostana angle ...hehehe...😆w8ng for a quick update ( hey one can always hope ...right !!😛)--Khwahish😊
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