PriDa FF: Fatal Covetion UPD Pt. 16 pg 63 05.05.12 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago

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You made me cry Maham . . . . What a brilliant blend of emotional potrayal . . . .d Prithvi breakin down part was heart wrecking . . . N Damini trusts Prithvi . . . . I can already see . . D ray of hope . . . The light . . . Ready to engulf d darkness out of Pri-Damz-Payal's lyf 4ever ...
P. S : is Rahul comin back? Will he play d cupid btw PriDa . . .?? If so then . . . .what will happen to our Prithvi-Rahul Dostana 2? . . . 😛 🤣

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Nandini

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Maham...

I just do not know what to type out... have literally become sooo numb by all those emotional turmoil in your update.. cannot express in words how bad i felt for Prithvi .. was really glad to see that Damini was around him this time to easy out the pain.. hope Prithvi gets some respite very soon and not let his guilt and pain consumes his and Payal's relationship and future life.. saw so much similarities between the father and daughter when they were being consoled by Damini... drunk Prithvi seemed cute :D

n nooo this update WAS NOT AT ALL incomplete.. infact a very powerful buildup i would say... though both Prithvi and Damini might not openly acknowledge but like you have mentioned they have taken little steps in moving towards a brighter future from darkness of Damini's forgotten and Prithvi's guilt-ridden past...

fantastic update as usual 👏

waiting eagerly for the next update ... pleaseee do smthing to reduce Prithvi's pain and guilt 😊

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amiya121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Mahammm my Dear !! 🤗

This is Absolutely SMASHING ...so Intense and Powerful...sooo Painful but Brrilliant !! 👏⭐️

Oh Prithviii... what a Tortured Soul... His Pain... his Angst... the sense of Wretchedness that is Consuming him... being Conveyed sooo Evocatively through your words. ⭐️⭐️

His Misery ... Loneliness... feeling of his Life being Completely Empty,,,,,, pushing him into an Unending Abyss of Guilt , Pain and Misery that his life has become... Superb portrayal of his Pain and Wretchedness... Too Good !! 👏👏

But what felt really Goood was that finally he has decided to TALK to Damini ... finally he has decided to Break down the walls around himself and let Damini enter... he has deicided to let Damini have a peep inside his Tortured Mind and Heart... It really gladdens my heart 😊😊

and what can i say about the part about Damini Comforting him... Consoling him...being there for him ... Siigghhh... Beautiful and Sooothing beyond words !! ⭐️⭐️ Atlast he can be at Peace ... he can feel some Comfort... some Calm ( for sometime atleast ) !!

Then comes the Best part for me... your lines about Damini being there always for Pri ...just as he has always been there for her ( even though Unfortunately she does not know that now ) Damini being there to lift him ... being there to help him in Mending the Broken pieces of his life... Here you have Captured the Essence of PRIDA for us !! Absolutely Loooved Ttese lines ... OUTSTANDING ⭐️⭐️

and finally the last part ... she is coming to stay with them at their home ...Wooohooo ... This makes me Verryyy Verryyy Happyyy... 😃😃

What can i say about the Brrilliance of your Skills ... the power of your Thoughts and the Amazing Talent you have of putting down those toughts into words ... the words which Touch our hearts... speak of all these Deep and Intense Emotions... and that too soo directly to our Hearts... i can only say that we are really Fortunate to have you as a Friend and fellow Pridaholic... that you give us such Beautiful Writings... such Priceless Gems to savour .

Thanks once again for this Fantabulous Update !!

Love

Amiya

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

perfect.. pure pain in the words that u had written.. awesome update..

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booksfreak07

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow! You're such a brilliant writer, it's amazing. The feelings, the emotions, the turmoil, the doubts and the love lingering somewhere and the background, incomprehensible and ignored.
Beautiful and really long (always a good thing 😆 )

Looking forward to the next part!

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pia09

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi Maham, luved the update.U have expressed prithvi's emotion n feeling very beautifully. really awesum n perfect.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

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darknite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Expression you expressed in each line was just perfect. Keep up the good work 👏

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Mrunal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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You updated??? Haila, I have yet to read the previous 3 chapters, me thinks.

I am going to get my lazybones self to read all ... though I am sure you must have done a fantastic job as usual. Let me read if you have taken any out-of-the-world twists, errr... hehe

-- Mru

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maham

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mru_bee
You updated??? Haila, I have yet to read the previous 3 chapters, me thinks.

I am going to get my lazybones self to read all ... though I am sure you must have done a fantastic job as usual. Let me read if you have taken any out-of-the-world twists, errr... hehe

-- Mru

Err you're still reading this FF?? 😲 I thought you stopped liking it and gave up on it so didn't send you a PM for the latest update @Reading the last 3 updates: And now you're making me nervous again... 😆 The latest one does contain a bit of a twist.. I think. 🤔

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Mrunal

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Maham...

Err you're still reading this FF?? 😲 I thought you stopped liking it and gave up on it so didn't send you a PM for the latest update @Reading the last 3 updates: And now you're making me nervous again... 😆 The latest one does contain a bit of a twist.. I think. 🤔

Whatcha doing up so late???????????????????????????????

-- Mru

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