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Part 2

It's early in the morning...
Maso was awake all night..she can't bear the abeer's distance..he was with her all the way..now both have to live without each other..
She get off from bed and walk towards the kitchen..She suddenly noticed that front door is opened and step towards it.What she saw brought a tear to her eyes..Amla was still sleeping there under the porch leaning onto wall.Maso didn't know what exactly she was doing there..but her heart said that she was waiting for someone..for Abeer maybe??
She was the only one who knew better what both amla and abeer going through.She was aware abt Abeer's feeling for amla.she also noticed the recent changes in amla's behavior also.She knew that out of all the odds they could have had a future together..they just needed to give sometime for each other..
She put her hand on amla's shoulder and wake her up..
"Amla, wake up dear..what are you doing here..had you slept here allnight?
Amla woked up by her voice only to notice that it's morning already..
"umm..i don't know when I fell asleep..i was just waiting here to see him goi...
She hold her words realizing what she was about to say..she didn't understand how could such thing slip out of her mouth.she quickly get up to go inside..
"Abeer is gone Amla..he was gone even before the dinner..
She felt something hit her heart hardly..He has left them already.that too without telling anyone.She feel like her knees giving up on her ..she just sat there again...everything seem to be halt for a moment..she was feeling nothing..her mind was blank out..
Maso sat beside her..
"Amla,listen dr..people tend to make wrong opinion about others when they are hurt,sad,or angry..it's not necessary that the people who we think bad to be bad..they can be good also..when you are feeling that they are not that bad as you think,it's not wise to be admant on your opinion abt them..they should be given a chance to prove them..hope you understand what I'm trying to say..you still have time amla..Abeer must be still at airport..if you permit I can call him back..i'm not forcing you to forget everything and accept him..i just want you to give him a chane..one last chance...
"what?? Prono ji is at airport..Is he leaving us..
Both of them got startled by mando's voice...
"umm..mandakini ji..i was abt to tell you..
Maso couldn't complete it as mando has started her usual drama..
"what has happened that he, is leaving without telling us..I'm sure this Amla might put up a drama again..this girl is gonna kill us one day
"no mandakini ji..it's not like that..
Amla doesn't want to be there..She just get up and step outside..she didn't know where to go...she just walked along the road.
"Bua...stop for me..bua..
Mannu's voice made her stop
" has Abeer phupa ji really left us? Is he never gonn come back
She didn't have any answer..she just started walking ahead..
" bua..where are you going?
"I don't know..
Mannu couldn't understand what has happenes to his bua..bt he knew that she is upset..he hold her hand and walked with her silently..

While at airport...
Abeer was sitting there waiting for his flight...He looks like lifeless..his eyes were swollen up and still pooled with tears..he knew that it gonna be ddifficult..bt he never thought it would be this much difficult..he felt like he is gonna die by each passing second..he took out his camera and check amla's photos he had taken that day..tears began to roll down his cheeks..he just let them flow..
"is she your girlfriend? A voice came from his side..he look at where voice came and a woman was sitting next to him..."is she your girlfriend? her voice had a caring tone and her kindness was evident in her face...she reminded him of her mother..she is just like her..kind and caring..he just felt that his mother is talking to him..
"no,she is my wife..i mean she was my wife
"oh..that's mean she ia the reason that you are here at airport today?
"hmm..
"but you seem to be missing her so much?
"what does it matter??..she doesn't want me to be in her life
"seems like she's already having new one in her life
"stop it..you don't have any right to talk abt her like this..she ia not that type of girl..she is a really a nice girlhe said angrily...
The woman waa surprised to see his anger..he just realied that he went overboard..
"sry..It's not that kind of thing..it bit complicated..bt she is not the one at faoult..neither me..
He didn't know why bt he seems to like her company..talking to her seems lessening his burden...
" sacrifice and all...right?
"sry..what do you mean?
"I mean you are ssacrificing your love and going away..right?
The word love' strikes his mind..is this really love that I'm feeling?or it's just that I'm rectifying the mistake done unknownly making alma's life miserable..he was confused..
" listen son,sacrifice and all are good to see on screen..bt in reality you have to fight for your love..running away is not a solution..i don't know what exactly happened with you..bt your eyes tell that your love is true..don't let it go son..it doesn't mean you should force your love on someone..bt give your love a chance..let her feel your love..true love can make magics..your will see son..the day your love reach her..she won't be able resist it.. Have hope..love unconditionally..one day your patience surely gonna paid off..
Abeer was listening to her silently..
"it's time for my flight..i should be get going.god bless you son
He didn't react..he was lost in his thoughts..her words were echoing in his ears..he remain staring at amlas photo for another 5-10 minutes...
His dull face brighten up with joy..he looked at her photo..with a huge smile in his face...
" I LOVE YOU AMLA...YES I LOVE YOU...
" I love you sooo much that I can't leave you..i wanna give my love a chance..
He just picked his bag a and ran out of airport to catch a taxi thanking that stranger woman..
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Amla really didn't have any idea where she is going...she juat wanted to be alone..away fron home...she just followed where her feet lead her..
She was struggling with her inner soul to figure out what is happening with her..
" Ever since this marriage,I just wanted him to go away from me..i juat hate even his presence..today finally he has gone..i'm free now..i should be extremely happy..but..why?? Why I'm not happy...this is what I wanted...but why I'm feeling that something is missing..and what is that I'm feeling missing??
The bright morning sunlight is touching the earth..whole environment is brighten with it...but for Amla everything seem to be dark and gloomy...
" Bua..my legs are hurting...i can't walk anymore
Amla came back to senses hearing mannu..
She didn't say anthing..she look around and saw some steps and sat there with mannu..and again returned to her battle with herself...
" bua...look there...phupa ji..manu shouted pointing towards back of her...
She get astonished...that means he didn't go..a unknown joy seems to be overwhelming her..a slight smile is drawn on her lips..but amla being amla..doesn't want to acknowledge her being happy..
" see mannu..he didn't go anywhere..he just know to give false promises..if he was planning to come back..what the point leaving quietly without telling anyone and put up such drama..she told even without looking back.
" bua...it's not abeer phupa ji..it's Dev phupaji...
Her joy vanished in second..She looked back and saw dev on the other side of the road waiting to cross road...she quickly grab mannu' s hand and ran from there before dev could notice them...he was the last thing she wanna see now..
They ran and ran..suddenly she noticed that she don't know where they are..she stopped there..what do I do now..how can I find my way to home?..she remembered the day when she lost her way and how Abeer has guided her...she surprised see the change within herself..there was a time,that every little thing has reminded her abt dev only..where as today...she was running away from dev only to lost her way..and there she is thinking abt Abeer only...
"where are we bua..how can we go back now?
" I don't know Mannu
" I wish Abeer phupaji was here..then he would find us for sure...whenever we were at trouble he always was there for us..after all he is my superman..i really miss him Mannu told with a feeble voice..
Amla's mind began wandering in her memories..how Abeer save Raghu..how he came with umbrella that day..how he repare the fuse board..what he has done at the cafe..so on and on..
A tear escaped from her eye..finally she has lost to herself.. She found out what is missing... It's Abeer..his affection..his care towards them...his protectiveness..
Since they came to new city..she never felt afraid to be in unknown city..Abeer was always there to care abt them..he fulfil their every need..there was sense of protection when he was around..an assurance that nothing could gonna wrong in his presence..For the first time in her life she was missing him..She has finally agreed that she is missing him..
" I too wish he was here... tears began rolling down her cheeks..
Just then she heard a voice...
"Amla..have you lost your way again..
She turn back and astonished to see Abeer standing there..for a moment she thought she is dreaming..mannu was super happy and jump onto him and hug him tightly...
Amla was soo happy to see him ..she was abt to hug him.but hold herself back..
Abeer was worried all the way back how amla will react to see him..but here she seems to be happy to see him back..
" I didn't have strength to take that flight..pls forgive me for breaking your promise amla..
She didn't say anything..
"phupaji,how did you know that we are here? amla looked at Abeer..sshe too wants to know it..
Abeer just looked into her eyes and said, I was returning from airport..i just saw you running with Mannu..i called you several times..but you didn't heard me..so..i just followed you
" yeh..now there's nothing to be afraid of..phupaji is here.let's go home
Mnnu hold abeer's hand with one hand and forwarded his other hand to amla...amla just looking at Abeer..
" trust me amla..i'll take you to your destination safely..pls,give me a chance to walk with you
"but I don't have any destination,how will we walk together..
" just try walk with me..who knows? Sometimes you'll find your destination there...just for once..pls trust me amla
She was staring at him.. She somehow felt secured.. Her heart wants to trust him once and see..
She held Mannu s hand while still looking into his eyes..his eyes were glistened with happiness..he felt content.he was happy that he came back.. Finally his love has got a second chance...
Three of them slowly stepped down the street..
It's a new day..new Abeer..new amla...new hopes..all together a new life ahead...

Yun Hi Pehloo Mein Baithe Raho...
Aaj Jaane Ki Zid Na Karo...

The End...

Edited by ASHERI - 7 years ago
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@ASHERI, U know what, Im speechless after reading this post... Your post actually forced to believe that, this really gonna happen in future episode.Each and every scene found me realistic while reading post...
Perfect blend of emotions and unspoken feelings of ambeer...
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Edited by Im_Priyana - 7 years ago
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the second part is even more amazing di๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘loved everything about it...it was awesome...
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Aww .โ˜บ๏ธ
This is so emotional..
Beautifully written
New beginning for both.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved reading it.
Edited by .Spring. - 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Im_Priyana

@ASHERI, U know what, Im speechless after reading this post... Your post actually forced to believe that, this really gonna happen in future episode.Each and every scene found me realistic while reading post...
Perfect blend of emotions and unspoken feelings of ambeer...
๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for the compliment dear... ๐Ÿค—
we'll see what happens in the serial..i just want Abeer to stay back on his own..It's too early for Amla to fall in love..
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Originally posted by: riverofdreams

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the second part is even more amazing di๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘loved everything about it...it was awesome...

thanks dear...๐Ÿค—'m glad you loved it..
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Originally posted by: .Spring.

Aww .โ˜บ๏ธ

This is so emotional..
Beautifully written
New beginning for both.๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved reading it.

Thank you...๐Ÿค—
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This is amazing โค๏ธ
I was totally lost while reading this
Beautifully written... I just loved it โค๏ธ
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Amazing part dear
Loved it
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