Ambeer fiction LOCHA E ULFAT

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Destiny 1 word 7 alphabets immense power
. I never thought i will ever believe in destiny but hence i was wrong. Destiny ne itne siyapaa kiya ki us ik siyapa ne mujhe hi badal diya. But for good i guess. I m so stupid destiny pe lecture de rahi hoon . Come see my story siyappa se pyaar ho jayega meri zindagi ki tarah . Vaise this is AMLA . Chalo i show u my life's LOCHA E ULFAT
CHAPTER -1
LOCHA E FAMILY
House no.220, oak street
A handsome guy with cute smile was admiring his beautiful wife sleeping peacefully. This was the best part of morning for him . Everyday realising that its not a dream but reality. Always wondering how can he be so lucky to have her in his life, filling his colourless life with beautiful colours. It was his routine, always waking up first admiring her and planting a good morning kiss.But today was different,it started all today . As he went to plant good morning kiss, door opened
"Mumma,mumma" came a sleepy voice from a cute little girl 6 years old . She was his pie a blend of his and his wife . Eyes of mother and smile of father

He got up from bed ,took the girl in his lap and exits the room
"Ssshhh sone do mumma ko , kal bahut thak gayi thi. Papa he na vo apko ready karte hai"
"Magar meleko mumma se tayaar hona hai "
"Amber, zid nai karte, har din mumma se tayaar hote ho aaj papa se ho jao." Says abeer to his daughter
"Papa, bal to mumma banati hai hai, apko kaise karogay"
"When abeer is there, then nothing to fear"
" aaj tiffin mein meko noodles leke jaane hai"
"Ok meri princess, agar mumma ko pata laga na tu papa tu apko hospital mein milengay, but hamari princess ki khwasih hai , papa zarror puri karangay"

Sound of utensil came
ROOM
Amla woke up from sleep hearing the sound looking around the room with sleepy eyes trying to find her hubby.
As she realised the time, she knew what had happened .
Amla comes out of room and enters the kitchen
Seeing the condition of the kitchen she laughed
" Abeer, ye kya haalat banayi hai, khana bana hai tumhe nai pakana , apne upar aata kyu gira liya aur tym dekha hai meko uthaya kyu nai , ambef. School k liya late ho gai to"
" vo baby, tum kal late aai thi aur thak gai thi to maine socha ki mein amber ko school bej doon. Magar
" magar kitchen ka kaam to tumse sabhalta nai hai, kar diya siyapaa, koi na tum apna holiya sudharo mein amber ko ready karti hoon, joker lag rahe hoon ," says amla laughing hard
A naughty idea comes in his mind n started to tease amla
Aacha ji mein joker, ye aata to aab tumhare saath hi utharega
He started coming close to her, her heart started thumping how his presence effect him after so many years she failed to realise
As he came closer, she started moving backwards
"Abeer nai"
"Yes, amla " said with a naughty grin
"No abeer
Yes, amla
Amber aa jayegi,
Vo apne room.mein apne teddies k sath mast hai
Tiffin pack karna hai
Abhi bus aane mein adha ghanta hai
Abeer plz kya tum apni is cute si wifey ko aata laga kar haso gay
Madam ye tu apko hasne aur hume joker kehne se pehle sochna chahiya tha
Amla stood against the wall, abeer was inching closer,closer she could hear him breath
He came closer to.her rubbed his left cheek with her cheek , Amla's heart was beating , she just closed her eyes ,clenched her fist ,.
He rubbed his right cheek with her cheek
He looked at her soft lips and he inched closer to his lips
"Mumma" hearing the voice amla pushed abeer and he fell down
"Ouch"
Amla laughed
Dekha aur lo mere se pange
She showed abeer tongue and moved towards the voice
Aacha baacho wifey, abeer se panga, tumhe to mein baad mein bataoga
Princess bhi na lagat tym par bulati hai
Amla enters room
Amber hugged her mother tightly
" good morning mumma ,
" good morning baacha, chalo chalo jaldi karon bus ka tym ho raha hai, late ni hona
" mumma vo
Pata hai tumahari maths ki book 3 drawer k left side mein padhi hain
" apko kaise pata chal jata hai"
I m mother, maa ko sab pata hai
Chal aab jaldi se aao bus ka tym ho gaya hai
"Ok"
As amla turned to leave amber stopped her
Mumma, ye apke face pe aata kyu laga hai
Hearing this , amla's face went red
Amla in mind abeer bhi na
Amla to amber " kuch nai vo ase hi chalo tum
Horns sound came peeer
Amla , amber bus aa gai
Chalo papa bula rahe hai
Living room
Bye amber
Byee
Mumma , papa k face pe bhi aata hai
Hearing this abeer shocked and blushed looked a his wifey
Amber apko late ho raha hai bus kadhi hai bahar chalo, said abeer
Ok byee
Abeer looks at amla
Amla realised what he was thinking said
'No abeer
Ab baach k kaha jaogi
Amla runs, abeer holds her , lifts her in his arm
" thanku amla for coming in my life, amber dene k liya
" thank u abeer, u changed me into better person
Both -"HAPPY ANNIVERSERY"
Abeer with amla entered the room and closed the door with his foot.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey everyone i now i m not good writer but i just had an urge to write something so just gave it a shot.
Never written anything before , plz give ur honest opinion and tell if i should continue or not
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I loved it dr.. πŸ‘
teasing abeer and blushing amla..😳 beautifully written about the caring nature of abeer towards his wifey..
Pls do continue it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful! Do continue it! πŸ€—πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it was really awesome di...loved the cute converrsations and everything about it...pls continue writingπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oyee...Dil khush kar diya aapne... After reading this i thought that kkhak leap ke sath start hua...aur sunday ko telecast hua coz i read it today...
Mera sunday ti ban gaya... thank u dear...
Do continue for more ff...plz...
Good one,loving this ff...
Edited by Im_Priyana - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was really cute 😳
Keep up the good work πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASHERI

I loved it dr.. πŸ‘
teasing abeer and blushing amla..😳 beautifully written about the caring nature of abeer towards his wifey..
Pls do continue it..

Thank u very much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks everyone for appreciating
Means alot😊
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Beautiful update 😳
Cant wait to read the next part
Pls continue
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