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Posted: 7 years ago
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I got this idea all of a sudden. It suits Ambeer and Amla in their own perspectives.

I trust people when it comes to stealing this. Kindly ask me before stealing it or else I will forget to be kind. 😆
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Keeping the feels of young dreams,
in the chamber of heart's streams;
Into a path that moves in watery flows,
that spills along the path it goes;
Through salted teardrops with lump and fears,
dragging the youth away and beating till it tears;

Cast in the myriads of life and fantasy,
dwelling away from greed and jealousy;
Running around with faithful glee,
laughing, adorning to form a memory;
Was there a place as such? A thought to ponder,
delusion-ed in the phantasm rich wonder;

Wings held greater, flying across heights
but captured are the feathers, a weakened sight.
Walls embraced dark, painting terror,
trances break open, unveiled in horror.
Was it a crime to only gleam?
There falls the tears, down the stream.
Truth merged in a lie in the cruel game,
Thoughts quest to find answers of the same,
But blocked ares the ways oh! A shame!
Lost are the the feels of a young dream!


I am Amla and I am Abeer
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ab main kya bolu bata! 😭
Tune to khushi ke aansu nikalwa diye!😭
Loved it re, loved it! 😳
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Kar le beta ...yehan bhi kar le 🤣
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Impeccable!😊 And I'm not saying it for the sake of saying it but I really loved it 👏 Write some more!
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Originally posted by: tellyaddict2

Impeccable!😊 And I'm not saying it for the sake of saying it but I really loved it 👏 Write some more!

Thanks dear
That means a real lot 😳
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thanks 😳

Word Count: 1

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Originally posted by: showstruck

❤️ beautiful as always

thank you 😳
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Please keep writing. You are a blessed soul..Such wonderful lines..
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wallah baccha tum itni shandaar poetry bhi likhta hai ?👏
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Originally posted by: -abz-

Kar le beta ...yehan bhi kar le 🤣


Jaa karlia unres, khush reh! 😎
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