Hey everyone.....Sorry for being so late.... so here u go with another os.. if u have any suggetions for a shot then do tell me except ahana track and separation of riansh....
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This is from the track when vansh comes back from his business trip and finds kabir in his house.
But in my story, there is a twist,
first of all siya does not fall and secondly the pooja tht was to be performed by Riansh was also succesfully done.
No sejal kidnapping. Family is not snake family, Anupriya is not evil but yes she is kabir's mom but she doesnt know tht kabir is her son, tht kidnapping waala story of kabir is true here but kabir thinks vansh is responsible for all this. Hence he hates him and wants everything he owns.
its just tht they all r afraid of vansh and also love him and bcoz of Ragini everyone assume Riddhima also to be a golddigger, thts the reason to their behaviour with Riddhu.
But after shootout their opinion towards Riddhu changed. After this all the rest is same.
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So lets start
All the family members get the message to assemble in the hall.
And then all of them hear an emergency alarm. So everyone rush to the hall. There they find vansh standing in VR style. If looks could kill then till now the betrayers would have been dead.
V: A lot of chaos was going on in this mansion when i wasn't present. And the reason for this is....
And he opens the round table and removes someone out of it. All the Raisinghanias were shocked..
After tht vansh removes his mask
V : This is the secret I was talking about, I called agency and got Badrinath's pic.
He shows the pic to Kabir.
V: I understood he has many masks on his face, its like making joke of the law,I-N-S-P-E-C-T-O-R Kabir 😡.... He is the reason for all the problems going in VR mansion. Inspector kabir agar app jaise HONEST cop aese kisi ke ghar ghus jayenge toh hum jaise log kya karenge 😏
K: I know I broke the law BUT you are the sun of the crime world, and I m just a flickering diya
Vansh smirks listening this
K: I know Ragini's murder truth, I will bring it out. I ll soon find evidence of her murder.
V: How do you know ? Did you leave any spy after me (eyeing everyone). I don't care, FYKI inspector Kabir only I know the truth, even my wife doesn't know it, so whatever you know is a misunderstanding.
He points gun at Kabir. Anupriya worries.
V: You can never know about Ragini and my truth.
Riddhima thinks Kabir was saying right about Ragini.
K: There are a lot of people who r scared of u but there is a lot of difference between them and me. I m playing this cat and mouse game with you since years, come on lets end this, I m not scared of you and your threatening, lets get over with it.
V : Good, the count of people who aren't scared of me will reduce today.
He loads the gun. Riddhima is afraid.
V: My pleasure, inspector Kabir.
R (thinks): I don't know Ragini's truth, I can't let Vansh kill Kabir and become a criminal, I have to stop him.
Anupriya thinks how to stop Vansh as she doesn't want vansh to end up in jail or something else.Riddhima runs and stops Vansh.
V(anger): What are you doing ? you are saving enemy's life.
By seeing this kabir feels tht even now ridhhu loves him but......
R(tensed): No, I m saving your life. He broke law, but he is a police inspector, you will become a criminal after killing him and will go to jail, the family and I will bear the punishment, I.. I..I..can't see you behind the bars.
Kabir learns this and gets very angry, he feels tht now riddhima has become very caring towards vansh. He gets jealous listening tht she cant bear vansh behind bars and he vows to make this happen.
V(Smiles): Its good that someone cares for me when there r so many traitors around me.
She turns to Kabir and scolds him.
R: R u not ashamed of breaking rules being an inspector. Aapko sharam aathi he khud ek inspector hone ke bawajood yu chori-chupe kisi aur ke ghar mein ghoosna aur us pe ilzaam lagana.
V: You should be punished for coming inside VR mansion.
Riddhima thinks what will Vansh do now
K: You, Vansh, you can't do anything. I will find proofs against u and then u will learn wht hell is.
with this kabir was leaving smirking, he was smirking as he had a plan which will get activate in few mins and then everything will be just as he wished.
Vansh calls commissioner
V: My doubt was right, Inspector Kabir was here in my house in disguise.
Kabir stops and hears him.
K(tensed):Sir, I m here, I will tell you everything.
C: Shut up, you broke the law and defamed the department, I didn't expect this from you, you are suspended now.
Kabir gets shocked. Vansh thanks commissioner and ends call.
K: Fine Vansh, I lost my uniform, I didn't leave my intentions, if you think you will cover up your crimes by getting me suspended, then you are wrong, now there are no restrictions upon me, I can do whatever I want, I will do it, you pointed gun at a police inspector, you have become a big criminal Vansh.
V : You don't need to tell me, be thankful that my wife saved your life, better you leave silently.
Aryan signs Kabir to leave.
K(thinks): I promise a big destruction.Just wait in few secs, everything will get destroyed. even u riddhima, even u have betrayed me and today i will take revenge from u too.
Riddhima thanks God tht now everything is fine and none has learned her past with Kabir.
As soon as kabir reaches at the threshold of the mansion, there is a ping sound heard, hearing this kabir smirks and then turns
Kabir(thinks): Open it Vansh ,open it, i m dying to see ur reaction, this one msg will destroy everything, the only hope of ur success wil also be lost and how far i know u i m sure u wont be quiet and this will be beneficial for me.
Vansh opens the msg and is shocked, his eyes welled up seeing the pic, he feels betrayed and more than tht heartbroken.
and the pics turned out to be.....
all those Ridbhir pics.. the ones in which riddhu is proposing kabir and the ones they hug....(sorry for not posting the pics but an error is coming... indiaforums doesnt allow newbies to post pics.. so....)
V: Stop Kabir. Come back.
Listening this all the Raisinghanias and Riddhu r astonished. Kabir smirks as finally his plan will be successful. Kabir stands in front of Vansh
K(thinks): Sorry Riddhima but agar mera pyaar kamiyaab nhi hua toh main tumhaara kaise hone du. Ab tum samjhogi kabir ko mana karne ka kya anjaam hota hai.
K(nervous): Kya hua Mr. Raisinghania. ( laughing) Oops kahi tumhe apne life ka sabse bada sach toh nhi patah chal gya, apni DHARAMPATNI ka sach (and winks) Ki voh abhi kuch der pehle apne pyaar ki jaan bacha rahi thi [Double meaning]
R(scared): Vansh yeh kya keh rha hai, kuch kahona kya hua.
V(hurt): (pointing towards kabir) Riddhima yeh kaun hai ?
D: Yeh tu kaise baat kar rha hai Vansh, yeh Inspector Kabir hai, hum sab jaanthe hai isse. jab dekho tujhe fassane pe tulla rehta hai par beta iss bacchi ko kaise patah hoga ki yeh kaun hai. Tu isse sawaal jawab kyu kar raha hai. Tu batayega kya hua.
V(shouts): Main apni Biwi se baat kar raha hu, uske alawa aur koi jawab nahi dega.(to Riddhima) Yeh kaun hai Riddhima ?
R: Yeh inspector kabir hai.
V: Tum isse kaise jaanthi ho. I mean pehle baar kab mile the
All were shocked with this question but none had the guts to ask, they badly wanted to know wht was in the msg.Angre was abt to say but Vansh glared him and he backed off.
R:I met him in the school i went for as physiotherapist for a girl. (Vansh raises his eyebrows, understanding him she replies) He was a PE teacher there.
If it would have been any other situation then all the Raisinghanias would have laughed on this....... but this was some very serious conversation. Vansh comes close and with his intimidating eyes, he asks
V: So u only know him as a PE teacher.
R:No..voh ..he was.....
kabir stands in between them
K: Dont u dare harm her Vansh. I want leave u for this.
Hearing this vansh wanted to kill him but he was VR not a roadside romeo, so he needed to mask it.
K: Riddhima tum kyu ghabra rahi hu, maine kaha tha na, leave it, u dont need to and waise bhi ab acting karke matlab bhi kya hai, I know maine tumhe Vansh ke peeche jaasusi karne bhej atha, but tumne jitne kiya utna bohot hai ab tumhe in sab mein padne ki zarurat nhi.( to Vansh) She is my girlfriend, my finace.
Everyone gasps learnng this and Vansh was ready to burn the whole world.
R(shocked): Nahi Vansh trust me, yeh jhoot bol raha hai.
K: Tum jhoot kyu bol rahi ho jaan, tumhe Vansh se darne ki zarurat nahi hai.
R: Nahi.. main jhoot nhi bol rhi vansh.... Aesa..aesa kuch nhi hai. Main... Main tumhe sach bata sakthi hu...
Vansh show her a palm
V(showing the pics,choking on his voice): Then wht is this Riddhima.
All were shocked seeing this and tears were coming out of both Vansh and Riddhima's eyes, one was feeling tht all their moments were an act and once again he was betrayed and the other was feeling tht her nightmare came true, her Vansh learnt her past tht too from someone else. And Kabir, he was getting impatient, he needed to remove Riddhima from here in few secs or else his plan will backfire.
K: Riddhu tumhe kuch kehne ki zarurat nhi,main batata hu, yaad hain vansh tumne kaha tha ki main kabhi tumse jeet nhi saktha kyunki main dil se sochta hu aur tum dimaag se aur dil dhoka de saktha hai par dimaag nhi... toh maine baazi palat di, maine VR ko dil se sochne mein majboor kar diya, waise iske liye toh mujhe apni fiance ko thank u bolna chahiye, agar riddima nhi hoti toh yeh sab kaisa ho pata.
All this while Vansh was staring his sweetheart and she, she was shocked to react.But as soon as she saw him crying ,
R: Shut up Kabir, stop lying, hum dono jaanthe hai yeh sach nhi hai, Maine Vansh ko koi dhoka nhi diya, na hi uske khilaaf tumhe koi proof diya.
and the one who was not able to handle it anymore reacted, he was again betrayed.
V(Shouts): STOP, Jo VR apni parchai pe bhi bharosa nhi kartha tha usne tumpe bharosa kiya aur tumne ( sad chuckle) Aur ... coughs.....itna sab hone ke... coughs..... baad bhi ... coughs.....main tumhe ... coughs.....chot pehchaane ke baare mein ... coughs.....soch bhi nhi saktha.(Turns and shows his back towards her)... coughs..... U can go ... coughs.....wherever u want.
RIdhhu closes her eyes and remembers all their moments, and then suddenly she hears a sound of something fallen down, she opens her eyes and gets shocked to find Vansh unconscious, she rushes towards him, takes his head in her lap and pats his face and calls his name.
K(Laughs loudly): Chi...... Chi... Taras aatha hai tumpe riddhima, dekho kya halat bana li hai tumne apni, agar chup chaap meri baat maanthi toh abhi sab kuch thik hota, maine sirf tumhe vansh ke upar jaasusi karne ko kaha tha par tumne turant mana kar diya
All the raisinghanias were feeling ashamed of themselves as they again were thinking ill abt this innocent soul.
K: (mad) Yaha tak ki break up bhi kar liya, iss insaan ke liye jise tum jaanthi bhi nhi thi... tumne uske liye mujhe mana kiya, mujhe, jiske saath 2 saal se tum rishte main thi, tumne usse chod diya. Uss din jab tumne mujhse saare rishte thode the na uss hi din maine yeh sab plan kiya tha. Ha tum sahi thi maine yeh sab desh ke liye nhi balki apne matlab ke liye kiya.
and he also revealed all the truth, abt who he was, his revenge and all, and also tht he was responsible for siya's condition.
and then there was a sound tht shocked everyone and it was revealed to be a gunshot and it was shot in the air by........
ANUPRIYA
[A/N- All those who thought it to be Vansh , pls comment 😆]
Anupriya told the actual truth to Kabir but then also kabir was least bothered.
K(to riddhima): Ab tumne apne pati ko kho diya ... mar gya voh...waise bhi pyaar hone laga tha na tumhe usse, lo cheen liya maine
Voice: Nahhh...
It was revealed to be....
VANSH
[ A/N- Ab har baar thodi koi aur hoga😉]
and then he stands and hugs his love.
V: VR ko maarna aur bewakoof banana itna aasan nhi hai I-N-S-P-E-C-T-O-R Kabir ( and winks)
Kabir shocked , Vansh rocked
V: Chalo ab main tumhe sachai bata hi detha hu, maine tumhe mere ladoo mein kuch milaathe hue dekh liya tha, iss liye maine kuch nhi khaya, aur rahi baat riddhima ki toh mujhe aesa feel hua ki voh sach keh rahi hai iss liye maine yeh natak kiya aur tumne khud ba khud sab sach bata diya.
With this vansh called police and then kabir was arrested.
All the Raisinghanias retired to their room and dadi was with Anupriya
In Riansh room,
V: sweetheart , now i cant wait anymore, i want to confess, I LOVE U MRS RIDDHIMA VANSH RAISINGHANIA ,I love this name as it makes me feel tht u belong to me, it makes me feel blessed as I have u as my wife and the best thing is tht I know whatever may happen u will always be there for me, I know u will always be there in my thicks and thins. and u dont need to say anything, its not necessary tht u reciprocate my feelings and i m fine with it till u.....
He was not able to speak as she slammed her lips onto his.. Both were kissing each other passionately.. One was showing her love , insecurity, fear and the other was showing his loneliness,love.. They were kissing each other hungrily trying to reduce the pain, grief and loneliness they felt in this one day.... Nibbling each others lips.. Sucking it.. Biting it... Their tongues were fighting for dominance..
R: I love u too Vansh, I dont know how or when, maybe when u were caring for me maybe when u intimidated me, but i only know one thing i m so in love with u
and with this they again kissed each other and continued their work of loving each other, the moon and the stars were the witness of their love.
The end
Uff....2600 words.....
Proofreading is not done, so pls bear it.
Pls do comment and tell me ur reviews
Signing off
ASH😘
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