Of course I remember🤗
Fellow vampire fan 😆
Hi Yaar how are you ❤️
Sorry was not able to identify you with new username
Its OK dear...
Vampire fan family...
I am fine...how are you???
Miss you...
Of course I remember🤗
Fellow vampire fan 😆
Hi Yaar how are you ❤️
Sorry was not able to identify you with new username
Its OK dear...
Vampire fan family...
I am fine...how are you???
Miss you...
This one is so beautiful 😍
So Riddhima faked her pregnancy and Vansh knows this.
Sab apna apna game khel rhe hai😆
Mastermind to ek hi hai
Great work.
Mind-blowing 👏
Just love it yaara keep writing 😉
This is really nice...Yeh Riddhima ka dimaag ...🤣
I am glad u addressed Riddhu n Ishani’s issue..they shud be friends..
Now 2 pregnant women huh..Riddhima’s fake pregnancy wud get her in trouble..joot or joot...hubby dearest is really poor..
When Riddhu gets really pregnant, she shud be taken out of India..apart from KaAp chacha chachi aryan also see her pregnancy as her threat..I wish these two live a normal life ❤️❤️
Originally posted by: KrishnaSourav
beautiful os
just loved it Heytal 🤗
wish something like this...I really loved it....
Do write more
Thank u so much Rakhi
I'm so glad u liked it 🤗
Yup would hope we get to see a good track 😳
Originally posted by: lifesucks28
Omg....absolutely loved it .....so beautifully written... And plzzz this deserves a continuation ....u cant end here....am soooo excited to see Vansh's plan work and the doom of AP and Kabir.....
And the milan of our Riansh.....😉❤ plzzz write more to this.....dont end here .......
Khel shuru huya hai.....so how cab it just end....khel pura dikha bhi toh do Ms author .....😉.
Loved it ❤❤❤
Thank u so much for ur appreciation
it really means a lot to me
😃
I will try to update soon😳
Wowwww Heytal this is soooo AMMAAAZING👏👏👏
IshAngre are together and knows riddhu is innocent😳
RiShani together too
Vansh ko riddhu k raaz malum hoagye as vansh🤣 correct discription of riddhu by vansh😆
Thank u so much Muskie
glad u liked it yaara🤗
ya I wanted to add parts which we all are craving to see but something else id only presented😒
I feel this track has so much scope if the makers really explore it well
hope so
fingers crossed!!😳
You had me at *patako ki beech baith ke aag jalati hain*
Loved it !!!
Bas maan Kar raha tha that I keep reading
Thank u so much Jisa
so glad u liked it yaara
it means a lot!!
😃
Originally posted by Heytz Maneet
Haha Heytal, loved it; was laughingly as I read your OS; there is a lot of detail in each character esp RiAnsh and I like the wsy you have a good dialogue and pov of each group, its quite comical at times, cant believe this vision your first OS! Keep writing more!!
Amazing Heytal ⭐️
Had a wonderful time reading it !!!
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