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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -kanishka-

Loved it..amazing story


thank you .😃
and congratulations on becoming goldie !!😃
Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
i am back .😎
here is the third part..
NOTE :(1) this part has a parallel story ie the team telling param about 'him' as well as the happenings and events when 'he' meets Abha. i hope you get it when you read this part.
(2) there will also be more of a case than their story ... you know like to get Abha Anurag story in order..
these to points may go on for a few updates as i would also like to try my hands on solving cases too in this story...

Sitting on their seats and reminiscing about the day when 'he ' first entered . Kavi spoke,
" hum sabhi ek case se free hue the ,tabhi hame commisioner sir ka phone aaya ki unhone ek officer ki posting yaha ki hai.."
Wearing his khakhi uniform he entered the supercops headquaters . He looked hot,dashing and smart. Any girl would fall for him , but that option was reserved only for one.😉
"inspector Anurag Mirza reporting , sir " he stood in attention.
"Aiye officer aaphi ki charcha ho rahi thi" said ACP.
"Arreh wah abhi HQ mein pair rakha nahi aur mere charche hone lage" he said proudly , running his hair through his hair , flaunting his style.
"Mr Anurag , hum aapki achievments ki charcha kar rahe the " ACP said in a stern way.
"popat ho gaya mera" he muttered ..
"suna maine" said ACP . the others looked at him and smiling at his discomfort.
"Tumhara record dekhkar zyada khushi nahi hui mujhe "
he stood silent looking down at the floor.
"sir woh "
"koi explaination , nahi na ?"
"khair mujhe zyada khushi nahi hui lekin zyada se badhkar khushi zaroor hui hai " He said laughing.. this lightened the atmosphere and the team chuckled and Anurag smiled foolishly..
"welcome to our team " said Ranveer.
"thank you sir " he replied.

"sir ek naya case aaya hai " said mayank said coming in .
"details.." asked ACP
"kidnapping ka case hai . ek 6 saal ka Ladka kidnap hua hai , aur hairani ki baat yeh hai ki uske maa baap se firauti ki rakam bhi nahi mangi hai ."
"aur koi details " asked lara
"nahi , aur kuch nahi " said mayank.
"chalo jake bacche ke ma bap se baat karte hai.Kavi, Ranveer ,Abha , Mayank aur Anurag tum log mere sath aao, baki sab yeh reh kar monitor karege aur hamari help karege " said ACP
"Yes sir" all said in unison
they marched towards the exit while the others stayed back.

they reached the house of the kidnapped kid.
The mother was crying and the father was trying to console her .
the team entered the house.Seeing them come in ...
"sir, sir hamare bacche ko bacha lijiye , hamara iklauta beta hai , hamari itni haisiat toh nahi ki lakho rupye de lekin jo kuch bhi hai woh sab de dene ke liye tayar hai kidnapers ko , aap bas hamare bacche ko hamare paas wapas kar lijiye, please sir..." said the father who knelt down and caught ACP's foot along with the mother..
"a... aap pehle uth jaiye aur baithiye .. dekhiye aapko aap ka beta sahi salamat mil jayega , aap fikr mat kijiye "
"aap ka beta kab se gayab hai " Abha and Anurag said together. and then looked at each other and blushed ..
"soch kitni milti julti hai dono ki " said kavi and it was only audible to ranveer...
ranveer shook his head indicating ' iska kuch nahi ho sakta ..'
" aaj subah khel raha tha niche uske dooston ke sath phir wapas aaya hi nahi ..sabhi bacchon ko pucha , unke maa baap se bhi pucha lekin kisi ko nahi pata ki woh kaha hai .." said the father...
"aur koi firauti ki mang bhi nahi aayi ?" asked kavi
"nahi sir " the mother said in between sobs...
"kaha hai woh bacche ? hame unse milna hai .." said ranveer
the parent led them to the children.

Abha and mayank bent down to the heights of the children.
"Bacchon aapne ravi (kidnapped child) ko aakhri baar kaha dekha tha ? asked aabha in a sweet voice ...
"uss taraf" said a kid
"kya aap hame waha le ja sakte hai ?" asked mayank in a kind manner..
the children led them towards the spot and the team followed..
"hamne usse yahi dekha tha last time.." said a kid
"koi tha uske saath?" asked ranveer ...
"haan police uncle , ek bada sa uncle tha uske baju me khada " said a cute kid ...
"accha bacchon kya aapne unka chehra thik se dekha tha ?" asked kavi.
others were silent but a kid spoke up
"haan uncle maine unko acche se dekha tha "
toh kya aap hame bata sakte hai woh kaise dikhte hai?" asked ACP. the child nodded.
"Mayank usse lejao aur sketch banvao" said ACP . mayank left with the kid.
"dekhiye , ghabraiye mat , aapke bacche ko ham sahi salamat ghar drop kar dege."said Anurag to the parents of the child whom mayank had taken with him .
they nodded
"thik hai bacchon , ab aaplog jao . thank you hamari help karne ke liye !" said aabha
"police aunty aap please ravi ko jaldi dhond ke lao , uske bina maza nahi aata " said a sweet kid..
The team was a little emotional but in their profession there was no place for emotions or feelings.
the stream of tears again started flowing from the mothers eyes.
they gave the kids an assuring smile and the children went from there.
the parents also went from there .
They looked at each other with a face asking each other what to do next..
abha looked to the person next to her . it was Anurag . their eyes met and stared into each others eyes for 2 seconds that seemed to be like an eternity ...

done !! 😃







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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
PART 4
NOTE of previous part aplicable here too.

Someone slowly caught Anurag's shoulder and he came out of his eye contact and looked at the person ..
"chalo Anurag Abha kam bhi karlo thoda , ek dusre ki aankon mein toh case khatam hone ke baad bhi doob sakte hoon " said kavi and left them.. And they followed suit..
They investigated around the place to find some vital clue that may lead them to the kidnapper and the kidnapped.
after a long time they found a clue .. a piece of torn cloth with something written on it .. the writing was not clear as there was blood smeared on it .
"sir , yeh dekhiye , iss kapde par khoon laga hai , iss pedh ki branch mein atka tha ." said anurag.
they all came towards him and saw the evidence . He put the evidence in the evidence bag and handed it to ACP . he saw it and ordered ranveer to keep it safely and give it to lara for checking it when the reach their HQ . He nodded. they checked the surrounding area , but to their misfortune they found nothing . they returned to the HQ . Ranveer gave the evidence to lara to check its properties..
she checked it and came with the results.
"sir , iss kapde pe khoon laga hai aur iss khoon ka type AB+ hai. iss kapde pe kuch letters hai ,
PC.C . iske aage bhi kuch likha hai par kapda phat jane ke wajah se pata nahi chal raha hai ki aage kya likha hai.."
"adi, pata lagao ki yeh teen letters kisi ka naam hai ya kisi company ka naam hai , kya hai? jaldi "
"yes sir " said adi and left to find out ..
"sir , agar bacche ke maa-baap ki kisi ki saath dushmani hogi aur badla lene ke liye usse kidnap kiya hoga " said kashish
"haa sir aisa ho sakta hai " added kavi..
"kashish aur Ranveer, jao jake uske maa-baap se iss bare mein pooch-tach karo.."said ACP
"yes sir." they said and went out to complete their duty..
"adi, kuch pata laga?" asked ACP
"sir, yeh kisi PC.Company ka hai " (here PC does not mean personal computer 😆)
he showed him what result he found .
"ho sakta hai woh kidnapper iss company mein kaam karta ho. Warna woh uss pedh ke aas paas kya kar raha tha , jiss spot pe baccha kidnap hua tha .."
"sir , scetch aa gaya "
"baccha safely ghar pahuch gaya ?" asked ACP
"yes sir"
"Abha , Anurag iss company mein jao aur pata lagao iss jaise dikhne wale insaan unki company mein kaam karta hai kya ? . ho na ho woh yahi kaam karta hoga aur wahi shayad kidnapper hoga .."
"yes sir" they said in unison.. and then looked at each other and went out ..
They sat on his bike and rode off..
he drove in a fine way , not to make her feel uncomfortable. Never had a girl been so close to his heart as she was . she was a brave girl , to save a baby from the mill where a bomb was placed, he thought .. Aha ! yes he was the one who helped her .. but she didnt know ..😉
he was lost in his thought and did not see the speadbreaker ahead . he jerked and due to the impact she came crashing on his back , too close , she caught him tight from his shoulders and closed her eyes shut ..
She slowly opened her eyes and saw him look at her from the bike's rear view mirror and mumbled a little sorry and drove on to their destination... She , was in his thoughts...
Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Amazing amazing amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!
Your truly an awesome written
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Amazing amazing amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!

Your truly an awesome written
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm


thank you dear !😃
stay tuned . 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
It's short but amazing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ArshiHameshaPM

It's short but amazing😊

thanks .
stay tuned , there is more to come ..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Part 5
its a short update..


they reach the P.C.Company and got into the boss' cabin . they showed their ids and started the investigation.
"kya yeh aadmi aapki office mein kaam karta hai?" asked abha.
"jee haan , yahi pe kaam karta hai , iska naam paresh hai ."
"usse bulaiye yaha ." said anurag
"sir , aaj toh woh nahi aaya hai."
"kya aapne uske behaviour mein kuch badlav dekha tha kuch dinon mein?" asked abha.
"jee haan , woh khush dikh raha tha usual se zyada"
uska address aur phone number dijiye.." asked anurag.
"agar woh yaha pe aaye toh usse pata nahi chalna chahiye ki hum aaye the. behave normally. aur hame phone kar dijiye." said abha.
"yes ma'am"
after noting down the details they got back to the HQ.
kashish and ranveer were also present . they shared tthe information.
"sir uska naam paresh hai aur wahi pe kaam karta hai par aaj aaya nahi tha " said anurag.
"hamne bhi poocha bacche ke maa-baap se , lekin unki kisi ke saath dushmani nahi thi.." said kashish .
"uska number traack karo" said acp.
Mayank got to work.
lara, adi, ranveer, kavi aur abha mere sath chalo uske ghar aur tum yaha dhyan rakho. agar uska phone trace ho to mayank aur kashish uske piche jana, anurag tum local police stations jao aur pata lagao ki aise koi aur cases aaye hai kya. do you guys get it?" Asked ACP
"yes sir" they said at once..
"arrey yaar, mujhe aabha ke sath bhej dete..." he mumbled but was yet audible to others.. ACP shot him a glare and others gave him a knowing smile.
mayank muttered in his ears "kya hua bhai,love at first sight?" he laughed and went from there..
Anurag stood there smiling .

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mujhe abha ke saath bheeg deta 🤣
Fantastic update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mujhe abha ke saath bheeg deta 🤣
Fantastic update
Thanks for the pm

Haha!😆 Thanks 😃
I hope you are not getting bored with case and All ... after this case I will try to put in more of abha-anurag.. and even the current position of abha (coma )

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