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Posted: 6 years ago
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OK my 2 cents:

Grey are those who are neither fully good nor fully evil...there is a middle ground between white and black, thats where grey comes in.

Black is pure evil. These characters do no good, they only do evil stuff.

As of now, ranvir can be described as grey when he stabbed the thief but gave him money anyway...when he manipulated businessman to insult kabir and instigate him...when he maintains his dharmatma image in front of his family and world...whereas he is not so much of a nice guy inside.

When he can be termed as black: When he slapped anchal. If the cvs would have shown it as his subconsciousness, like it was when he felt like shooting kabir...he would have still remained grey.

When he sneaked into anchal's room and behaved like a psychotic obsessed person, that does not suit his shrewd calculated cold personality.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is a lovely discussion, enjoyed reading all the replies:)

To me, a grey character is defined or delineated by the way the audience perceives him/her. It is as simple as that.

It doesn't depend on how monstrous the person has been, what he/she has done; what the underlying motive was, etc.

It purely depends on how the character has been delineated- so that regardless of how they might toe the lines of ethics and morality and even cross over to the dark side; they have the audience firmly by their side, rooting for them.

We might even be alarmed by some of their antics, we might even get apprehensive about where they are going, but we are on their side. Always.

For me Satrupa from Rishton Ka Chakravyuh is one such character in recent times- and like Ranveer she has also killed someone, but somewhere, the character has been so finely etched that we can't help but root for her. She is a part of a world where intrigue and deception are commonplace, so she can be very cold and calculative, and needs to be so to survive. But the very next moment we see her grieving for her dead son, yearning to be closer to her rebellious teen daughter...and we are hooked. We can't help but root for her.


Maya or Ranveer on the other hand- somehow they appear completely black. Ranveer for example- the way he slapped Anchal,and that monologue to his drugged wife saying how he can take advantage of her...after that, there is no way ANY female viewer will see him in a sympathetic light. At least, I hope not.😆 Somehow, these writers are so lazy, they think that investing a character with a pitiful childhood redeems their evil deeds. But it doesn't work out that way.


Take Dexter Morgan from Dexter for example- a heinous serial killer. He has killed many, many people. We see what went into making the person that he has become (the brutal murder of his mom), but it doesn't stop there...we root for him because he is shown continuously introspecting about himself, keeps struggling with his sense of self, is conscious about his dark side that he calls "the dark passenger", attempts at making solid relationships, and despite himself loves his sister Debra dearly. And how one turn can drastically change him altogether, pushing him to either side of the line. Now THAT is exhilarating. Not this inept, broad-stroked and lazy writing that these people indulge in.



EDITED TO ADD: I just realized that there is one trait that can possibly delineate a grey character- their attitude towards a loved one. That despite how edgy and rough they can potentially get, they have this Achilles' heel in the form of a loved one, who is usually an innocent. It takes away from how self-absorbed they can be and makes them more human.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Amri..

This is a lovely discussion, enjoyed reading all the replies:)

To me, a grey character is defined or delineated by the way the audience perceives him/her. It is as simple as that.

It doesn't depend on how monstrous the person has been, what he/she has done; what the underlying motive was, etc.

It purely depends on how the character has been delineated- so that regardless of how they might toe the lines of ethics and morality and even cross over to the dark side; they have the audience firmly by their side, rooting for them.

We might even be alarmed by some of their antics, we might even get apprehensive about where they are going, but we are on their side. Always.

For me Satrupa from Rishton Ka Chakravyuh is one such character- and like Ranveer she has also killed someone, but somewhere, the character has been so finely etched that we can't help but root for her. She is a part of a world where intrigue and deception are commonplace, she can be very cold and calculative, and needs to be so to survive. But the very next moment we see her grieving for her dead son, yearning to be closer to her rebellious teen daughter...and we are hooked. We can't help but root for her.


Maya or Ranveer on the other hand- somehow they appear completely black. Ranveer for example- the way he slapped Anchal for eg, and that monologue to his drugged wife saying how he can take advantage of her...after that, there is no way ANY female viewer will see him in a sympathetic light. At least, I hope not. Somehow, these writers are so lazy, they think that investing a character with a pitiful childhood redeems their evil deeds. But it doesn't work out that way.


Take Dexter Morgan for example- a heinous serial killer. He has killed many- but we still root for him because he is shown continuously introspecting, struggles with his sense of self, is conscious about his dark side that he calls "the dark passenger", makes relationships, and despite himself loves his sister Debra dearly. We see what went into making the person that he has become. And how one turn can drastically change him altogether, pushing him to either side of the line. Now THAT is exhilarating. Not this inept, broad-stroked and lazy writing that these people indulge in.


Exactly

Grey character is someone for whom the viewers can root for...when viewers feel conflicted , when they are not sure if character is wrong or right, whether he can be called categorically evil, when they know that his actions are wrong but still they can't help but understand him coz the intentions behind those actions are not entirely wrong but somewhat understandable!

Satrupa did kill someone but that someone attempted to kill her son...so her action was wrong but understandable...She is a well written character which can be called grey.

Here when Ranvir killed Gaurav , when he broke that thief's hand but admitted him in the hospital and deposited money in his account , when he use manipulation that all can be termed grey

But him slapping Aanchal , being creepy and obsessive that makes him negative

If Ranvir never physically hurt Aanchal or Kabir..If he was not shown as an obsessive lover then he could have been a grey character.

There is a thin line between grey and black and writers have crossed it comes to Ranvir because they really don't know what a grey character means

A creepy obsessive lover who can cross any limit in the name of love is not grey but a negative character...it is as simple as that.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: anshvi


Exactly

Grey character is someone for whom the viewers can root for...when viewers feel conflicted , when they are not sure if character is wrong or right, whether he can be called categorically evil, when they know that his actions are wrong but still they can't help but understand him coz the intentions behind those actions are not entirely wrong but somewhat understandable!

Satrupa did kill someone but that someone attempted to kill her son...so her action was wrong but understandable...She is a well written character which can be called grey.

Here when Ranvir killed Gaurav , when he broke that thief's hand but admitted him in the hospital and deposited money in his account , when he use manipulation that all can be termed grey

But him slapping Aanchal , being creepy and obsessive that makes him negative

If Ranvir never physically hurt Aanchal or Kabir..If he was not shown as an obsessive lover then he could have been a grey character.

There is a thin line between grey and black and writers have crossed it comes to Ranvir because they really don't know what a grey character means

A creepy obsessive lover who can cross any limit in the name of love is not grey but a negative character...it is as simple as that.


Very true:)

And in a way, a grey shaded character makes us reflect on our own moral compasses, and how we might be tempted to push the boundaries in certain situations- we think of how we would react if we were to be placed in similar situations.

For me, the line with Ranveer was crossed with the slap and the rape threat. 🤢 There is no coming back from that.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Amri..


Very true:)

And in a way, a grey shaded character makes us reflect on our own moral compasses, and how we might be tempted to push the boundaries in certain situations- we think of how we would react if we were to be placed in similar situations.

For me, the line with Ranveer was crossed with the slap and the rape threat. 🤢 There is no coming back from that.


The sad part is writers still think that Maya was grey and so is Ranvir...Sigh! It is sad to know that such reputed and experienced writers don't know what a grey character really means!

I would have been okay with the show if it was promoted for what it truly is...story of a couple who will fight against all odds to defeat an obsessive lover...story of an obsessive lover who will cross all limits to Haasil his love.

But makers promoted it as a unique thriller of 3 complex grey characters...writer kept saying that Ranvir will not be negative, he will not be the villain of the story but they went ahead and showed the exact same thing and now openly like those tweets thst call Ranvir the villain...they have flawd to present what was promoted and promised...Sigh !

I had high expectations from the show...was expecting something as unpredictable , intelligent and thrilling as movie Race but sadly what makers presented is the same old story of a love couple and a villain.

If only writers knew what grey really means things could have been different !
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Posted: 6 years ago
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^ I have read many theories on this forum..and gotta say, some of them were hella entertaining and had loads of potential than the actual plot!
The worst part is that there is so much potential to the characters...but they HAD to go the way of the run of the mill story. Ranveer and Anchal in particular have been butchered beyond belief


What bugs me more is the utter incongruity of certain things. A glamorous, glossy setting like this does not sync with the kundali thing that they showed recently. The Mauritius episodes hinted at a different kind of tone and tenor and the kundali ones at something else. First of all, the writers seem to be totally confused about their audience demographic. They need to make up their minds about whether they want to make a slick urban thriller or a mainstream TRP show watched in huge numbers.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Amri..

^ I have read many theories on this forum..and gotta say, some of them were hella entertaining and had loads of potential than the actual plot!

The worst part is that there is so much potential to the characters...but they HAD to go the way of the run of the mill story. Ranveer and Anchal in particular have been butchered beyond belief


What bugs me more is the utter incongruity of certain things. A glamorous, glossy setting like this does not sync with the kundali crap that they showed recently. The Mauritius episodes hinted at a different kind of setting and the kundali ones at something else. First of all, the writers seem to be totally confused about their audience demographic. They need to make up their minds about whether they want to make a slick urban thriller or a mainstream TRP show watched in huge numbers.


Let me tell u one more thing...writer Sammeer said that he needs to keep in mind that he is writing for TRP audience which also include rural masses

This is another reason for their failure...on one hand they are showing a bikini clad lead then showing her getting married to remove a kundali dosh...I personally think that Haasil is meant for urban masses and certainly not for TRP audience and rural masses so no point catering to them...why not come up with another idea to get AanVir married

As u said makers couldn't make up their mind whether they were making show for urban masses or TRP audience and hence the khichdi plus run off the mill , done to death plot
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Posted: 6 years ago
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^Haha, good luck to them then🤣
You obviously can't please both. In the end they will fail, having not pleased either demographic.

The shift has been so drastic...Anchal in a bikini in the initial episodes and Anchal wearing a balloony sari and blouse the next morning after her pretend wedding.🤣

Ye dichotomy mere samaj ke baahar hai. Actually...kissi ke samaj ke baahar hai.


Edited to add: There is a derogatory term used on IF for the mainstream audience called TRP aunties😆 But i have a grudging admiration for them. They are tough old birds and know what they want. And the shows they watch deliver what they promise...i.e. drama, drama and more drama.🤣 I doubt whether they would want to watch Haasil which tries to be too many things at the same time: both subtle and melodramatic, both rural and urban, both bikini and bahu mode, and a traditional sort of killer/criminal who uses kundali to achieve his evil plans.😆 The dissonance is just beyond belief.
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Originally posted by: ..Amri..

^Haha, good luck to them then🤣

You obviously can't please both. In the end they will fail, having not pleased either demographic.

The shift has been so drastic...Anchal in a bikini in the initial episodes and Anchal wearing a balloony sari and blouse the next morning after her pretend wedding.🤣

Ye dichotomy mere samaj ke baahar hai. Actually...kissi ke samaj ke baahar hai.


Edited to add: There is a derogatory term used on IF for the mainstream audience called TRP aunties😆 But i have a grudging admiration for them. They are tough old birds and know what they want. And the shows they watch deliver what they promise...i.e. drama, drama and more drama.🤣 I doubt whether they would want to watch Haasil which tries to be too many things at the same time: both subtle and melodramatic, both rural and urban, both bikini and bahu mode, and a traditional sort of killer/criminal who uses kundali to achieve his evil plans.😆 The dissonance is just beyond belief.


Bold: as we say, too many cooks spoil the broth, similarly here it is, too many obligations spoil the story. They can't target both rural and urban audience because both have vastly different opinions and thinking!
First they say we don't care about TRPs so here's a bikini clad FL. Then they say we are also catering to TRP audience so here's a crying FL who sacrifices her one true love for friendship and marries a psycho. Now please feel sympathetic towards the heroine and towards the man she loves. And I'm like HOW? HOW? How can I ever sympathise with people who are so dense that they don't even get their own kundali cross checked? Are they so orthodox that they'll believe in all this? Leave all that, how can I sympathise with a couple who themselves did all this to them self! Ranveer could do all this bs because Aanchal and Kabir let him! They could have said no a million times. They could have said, I am sorry but we can't do this. Aanchal could have said, I am sorry, I know I can't marry Kabir but I won't marry you as well.
Seriously, I'm so over it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sry, I often find it amusing in current age when people keep throwing around left right center this word 'TRP aunties' in general and attribute it for prime time late evening shows..quite understandable if aunties or grannies rather house wives are attributed for giving viewership to such TV shows that are aired by channels during afternoon or early evening slots when others in the family may not yet reach home or may be occupied in other daily activities.😳But for late evening TV shows when almost entire family assembles at home around dinner time how many average Indian households (be it urban or rural) continue to leave remote control completely with housewives, just asking? 😕

Not sure how many are aware about this data but weekend 8pm supernatural 'Naagin season 1' on colors got more success and grabbed highest TRP's due to kids and teenagers demanding to watch it, more than the aunties. 😊


An 8pm prime time daily show like 'Shakti' on Colors which started talking about transgender issues with unconventional love & marriage concepts shocking traditional audiences not just opened well but also sustained within first 6-8 months of its telecast in popularity, critical acclaim, characterization, drama and TRP's. This shows initial success wasn't only due to so called aunties.


Recently another daily show with youthful musical love story concept like 'Tu Ashiqui' aired on Colors has been growing steadily again in drama, romance, popularity and TRP's. Even this show isn't grabbing eyeballs due to some aunties.


Similarly another crime thriller daily show 'Ishq Mein Marjawan' on Colors had its ups and downs since launch but recently has been steadily growing on to audiences mind due to some intriguing factors week on week.


Most TV audiences irrespective of gender and age groups need some intriguing and entertaining factors to hook them up or few characters that they can emotionally relate to, otherwise some body they can fantasize in a fiction show, its simple. 😛 Even unconventional stories click well if makers package and promote a show well on a weekly basis and air at a right time slot.


Now importantly in 2017 at an average hindi non-fiction and reality shows across all major channels grabbed more viewership, acclaims and TRP's from Indian audiences, thus clearly showing its a wider audience that's watching TV in current age, not just some aunties.
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