liked nhi loved..
bas iska part 2 bana dena.. swarg mein dono bichde premiyo ka milanπ
Originally posted by: LovelyUmang5
liked nhi loved..
bas iska part 2 bana dena.. swarg mein dono bichde premiyo ka milanπ
Originally posted by: -Anilaa-
Such an emotional OS.
Beautifully written πEach and every emotion was felt.. I could actually picture everything in front of my eyes.. Loved it! β€οΈDo write more :)
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Awesome awesome Anshvi.
It is so beautiful, emotional, angst ridden. I can vividly see the whole situation. In the entire scene I was feeling bad for Ranveer. He couldn't be happy in his life.
When Anchal shoot him π it feels so bad but then Anchal too took her life for her love. And death united them. But then again they are AanVir they are meant to be together, na
Wonderful π
Neen
Heyyy m so glad that u liked itπ³.and yes as Ranvir told Aanchal 'ye dosti hamari hai, hum dono ke beech koi teesra nahi aa sakta''Iss duniya mein logon ke alava sab hamara haiSo, I wanted that to come true here in the OS...inn dono ke beech koi nahi aa saka...unki nafrat, unka badla , unka pyar aur unki maut bhi sirf unn dono ki thi aur kisi ki nahi'I thought it would be apt if Ranvir dies at the hands of his love and Aanchal dies for her Ranvir...their deaths belonged to them , the right to take each other's life was only their's and no one else'sThey couldn't be together in life but united in deathπ
Originally posted by: elysianights
Okay now let me clap please! This was amazing!! I just loved this ending, I know it's sad and tragic but in the end they were still united that was enough for me. I would have been glad if you would have wrote it as a FF but anyways this was just LOVE β€οΈ
Do write more.-Anya.
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