Maaneet Fanfic - Part 8 Page 7 Updated!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay guys i've read many ffs and just wanted to try one of my own...plzzz tell me what u think.

"Help!" she screamed before a hand came and clamped her mouth. Slowly opening her eyes, Geet found herself surrounded by darkness. The ground was damp beneath her and the air was filled with the smell of fuel. Where was she? How did she get here? Why was it dark? What had happened? Who attacked her? Where had he gone? Questions plagued her mind as Geet tried to think straight with the pounding in her head. She soon realized she was covered in blood, had a gash on her forehead and a broken leg. But all her pain was forgotten as the thought of Maan came to her mind. Where was he? Had they got him? The guilt slowly filled her heart, if she hadn't been so stupid they would've never been in this place. Why did she always put him in danger? (dunno have been wondering the same thing for ages) 😆

jootas, chapals, everything welcome! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey thats a Fabulous Start👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it
Pls Continue Soon Dear
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hey continue soon add me and be a bit longer
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Hey, nice start ! Write more soon soon so that we knw more about d situation :-D
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hi
the start looks interesting 🤗
do cont.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Hey thats a Fabulous Start👏

Loved it

Pls Continue Soon Dear



thanks!
will do 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: rinky70

hey continue soon add me and be a bit longer



don't worry the next part is much longer...i'll update it tomorrow 😃
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Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey, nice start ! Write more soon soon so that we knw more about d situation :-D


hehehee...yeah knw its kinda confusing...don't worry it'll all clear up in the next part...hopefully 😳
thanks!
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Originally posted by: NoorFatima

<font color="#990099">hi</font>

<font color="#990099">the start looks interesting 🤗</font>

<font color="#990099">do cont.</font>


hope u like the next one too....coming tomorrow sometime,
thanks for reading 😊
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Great start hun! I like the way you've started with a bit of suspense, leaving a few questions running through the reader's mind. Please continue.. :)

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