SKR FF 4:"Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story.Updated @ page 145 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Wow you started and ended the update on very beutiful notes. First one was the relationship shared between bhabhi and her 3 devars or to be more specific maa and her three children. That's what they are to me. The respect, care and concern which they have for their Siya bhabhi is same as the care and concern they have for both their Ma.

They could clearly see that Siya is sad and is broken from inside with Rams behaviour. Though she understands him but for now she longs for him, his support, his touch, his hug. And her anger for Lakshman was the caree which she had for him. She was scared not for her but for him as it was he who hurt Raghavan's sister.

But she doesn't know Raghavan is not revenging his sister's insult, instead he is going to satisfy his ego. Behen agar married man ke peeche toh bhai married hoke married woman ke peeche. Ek jaise.

Vaibhav ke samjhaane pe baat savar jaaye toh theek hai warna Suvarna bhi agar Raghavan ko peeche hatne ke liye bolegi toh woh nahi hatega. Waise unka downfall toh aata hua dikh hi raha hai.

Atlast Ram aur Siya paas aa gaye. Ab kuch time ache se beetaye yeh 8. Isske baad toh problems hai hi. Bas musibat jaldi hat jaaye inke sar se. Aur kuch nhi maang rahi main.

Manvi aur Shruti ko miss kar rahi hun main. Sab ka ho gaya na toh issiliye shayad 😅😅

Loved the update a lot ❤️

Continue soon💗

Thanks for PM ❤️

Literally, the beauty of their bond. We are lucky to live in a culture where bhabhi is treated as a mother. Lakshman has stayed with Siya more that's why their bond is slightly more special, sorry if I am turning biased.! For me every character is equally important.

And yes you correctly said about Lankeshwars, behen married man ke piche, married bhai married woman ke piche, married beta dusri married woman ke piche. Gosh.!

Yes something has to be shown before the most heartbreaking part. I know you are missing Manvi and Shruti, infact me bhi miss kar rahi hu unke bare me do update se likha nahi hai. So let's see what happens next..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

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Will comment when in the state of commenting, as at the moment too busy in trying to stop my 😭😭😭...

Love you 💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Saumya96

Literally, the beauty of their bond. We are lucky to live in a culture where bhabhi is treated as a mother. Lakshman has stayed with Siya more that's why their bond is slightly more special, sorry if I am turning biased.! For me every character is equally important.

And yes you correctly said about Lankeshwars, behen married man ke piche, married bhai married woman ke piche, married beta dusri married woman ke piche. Gosh.!

Yes something has to be shown before the most heartbreaking part. I know you are missing Manvi and Shruti, infact me bhi miss kar rahi hu unke bare me do update se likha nahi hai. So let's see what happens next..

Yes I do get it. Sometimes a few people are very much attached than the rest. That doesn't mean they don't have the love for the rest. Something happens to anyone else also they will create a havoc. Such is their love.❤️

You don't need to explain. I have no problem with Lakshman getting the centre. He has stayed with them and even Bharat Shatrughan would if Ram had let them. So no worries.

Just Manvi and Shruti were missing thats it. Rest you are going really amazing. I am loving each and every update of yours. Just too good ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Saumya, can you please tell me what kind of feeling you have experienced while writing this update?

I loved Bharat being confident and strong. His character development is truely great. Shatrughan is exactly acted how we expect him to, bold and couragious. Urmila was right, Lakshman Siya are not only devar bhabi, they are friends, they are siblings, they are son-mother duo, they are loyal and protective towards each other. Their relationship has many layers to it.

Vaibhav knows the truth means Manda and Sulochona will also get to know it, which is important. Vaibhav uselessly tried to make Suvarna understand, she is not his sister, she is Raghvan's sister...

Finally Ram and Siya reconcile. It does not feel good to see them in pain.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: karuna_kini

Yes I do get it. Sometimes a few people are very much attached than the rest. That doesn't mean they don't have the love for the rest. Something happens to anyone else also they will create a havoc. Such is their love.❤️

You don't need to explain. I have no problem with Lakshman getting the centre. He has stayed with them and even Bharat Shatrughan would if Ram had let them. So no worries.

Just Manvi and Shruti were missing thats it. Rest you are going really amazing. I am loving each and every update of yours. Just too good ❤️❤️

I loved these lines.! So beautiful you think.

And yes you're right, though Siya have same kind of love and care for each of her devars, but showcasing something between Lakshman and her is somewhat emotional.. and glad that you are liking this story that you are a regular reader. Thankful and blessed..

And Khyati madam, aapka bhi comment yahi kar deti hu. Take your time darling, feel experience and then you can say something 😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Apukar

Saumya, can you please tell me what kind of feeling you have experienced while writing this update?

I loved Bharat being confident and strong. His character development is truely great. Shatrughan is exactly acted how we expect him to, bold and couragious. Urmila was right, Lakshman Siya are not only devar bhabi, they are friends, they are siblings, they are son-mother duo, they are loyal and protective towards each other. Their relationship has many layers to it.

Vaibhav knows the truth means Manda and Sulochona will also get to know it, which is important. Vaibhav uselessly tried to make Suvarna understand, she is not his sister, she is Raghvan's sister...

Finally Ram and Siya reconcile. It does not feel good to see them in pain.

I had tears when I wrote the first and last scene. Literally I had. When there is an emotional scene between Siya and her devars, it always make me to feel the same. Ahh, I love them so much. Also, when searching for a song to fit the last part, I took so much of time. When I heard this song, it gave me goosebumps. I have not written abduction part yet, but I don't know how I am going to write it down if it is going to bring tears again and again 🥺💔

Coming to the update then yes, Urmila is always right about Siya and Lakshman's bond. Bharat has come a long, and Shatru, he is his bhabhi's "sabse pyara devar" so he has to act that way.

Moving towards the yedi ladki, then she will not listen, to anyone. Manda and Sulochana will be knowing, true. One more thing I will add here, it is going to be difficult for Sulochana. The girl is already going through a toxic relationship and now witnessing her husband eying another girl, it will be heartbreaking for her..

Let's have strengthen to move forward.!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Loved it Saumya

Awesome and emotional part

I really loved how all the boys are concerned about Siya which is obvious ... Siya pain could be felt easily & all of them were tense for Siya

Finally Lakshman ne Siya ko mana liya thou it was understood that Siya was angry & didn't wanted all this but boys words were true Swarna deserve that & it was all an accident & it wasn't Lakshman mistake

Swarna ko kya kahu 😔😔 I am loss of words for her at least Vaibhav cared for her sister & asked for her well being ... & also tried to put some sense in her mind

Chalo Ram & Siya emotionally ek doosre ko mana liya hai but things are getting more grave

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting☺

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

It was such a serene update sweetie!!!

The boys fearlessly stating that all they care about is their Bhabhi!

And the moment Laksh melted Siya with his innocence... n she uttered Lakshuu.. Awww🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧❤❤❤❤❤


The last part was beautifully pictured 💕💕💕💕💕


The happy tears .. and this song 🎵👌😍❤

Listening even after update


Love

Mohini

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

it was such an intense and emotional update....

I felt so great while reading it...the emotions were beautifully written and portrayed..🥰❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it Saumya

Awesome and emotional part

I really loved how all the boys are concerned about Siya which is obvious ... Siya pain could be felt easily & all of them were tense for Siya

Finally Lakshman ne Siya ko mana liya thou it was understood that Siya was angry & didn't wanted all this but boys words were true Swarna deserve that & it was all an accident & it wasn't Lakshman mistake

Swarna ko kya kahu 😔😔 I am loss of words for her at least Vaibhav cared for her sister & asked for her well being ... & also tried to put some sense in her mind

Chalo Ram & Siya emotionally ek doosre ko mana liya hai but things are getting more grave

More fun coming up

Stay tuned & keep commenting☺

Siya has everyone's heart, and when she is tensed everyone automatically gets effected with that. Siya was angry with Lakshman but in that anger there was a concern hidden. She knows Raghvan.!

Vaibhav's words were waste, Suvarna is not going to listen any anything. She has already gone mad.

Ram and Siya had emotional encounter, but still they need to have a talk with each other and sort the things out... ❣️

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