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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#981

Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148
@hammie
Bhau you fikar not.. Just ignore the stupid talks of your tazana (joya didi... 😡😡😡)
She is jealous of bhau baji friendship.. Isiliye bhadkaofying you🤣
But you please ignore her. I am always there to sing laagi praises with you.. Infact when i will have kids, i will make them watch LTL everyday ... Thats my firm determination😳
😆 bravooo!love taz's new name tazana 😆... taz ko dutta ke bemaari ho gaye hai... let her be.. 😛... high five ...barbji!

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#982

Oh really.. ?? Neither did i watch geet nor any show of harshad chopra..

Had watched gurmeet a long time back in the indian epic Ramayan.. He had portrayed Ram and his wife debina was sita there..

Almost every young actor who had acted in the show were quite good looking😆

That was gurmeet's debut show and he was quite impressive there..

Will have to catch up a harshad chopra show.. In which serial did you see this actor hammie??

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: simpleAnna
😕Baarbs, sudhar jaaa.

Hammie hammie hammie, chaoter 52.lovely ud.loved how nakku handled the interview.and dutta leaving for UK...wish nakku will go with her.
why would she go?inwhat capacity?
just finished chapter 53.
Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie...
dreamy dreamy dreamy dreamy.on 7th cloud with d major in denim shrt.haye hayeee.😳😳 kitna hawwttt lagraha hain woh to..it is tooo romantic to handle, my type of romance.lakin apne mera favourite film rock star ka kya banaya?haaan???boring dutta, the extrememly boring dutta asking nakku what was d relation between the leads and what is the guy doing with dusro k biwi.well hammie d culture i belong, these r not acceptable but sometimes i too get carried away cz i feel , k rishta kitna bhi galat kyun na ho, pyar kabhi galat nehi hote, for love is a divine thing, we humans take the name of relations to justify the love but only love can justify love...i remember my friends criticizing the film but somehow i loved the film specially the songs, kun faya kun...this song rings in my ear everyday when i face myself, nadan parindey... hammie i never knew u mentioned this song in ur ff, neither u told me this was ur favourite song.i just felt this song can b a good choice to give tribute to ur weakness for guns.😆on my style.starting from dutta on the make and ends in where he finds peace. i felt it was my best till date as i did homework with the lyrics as well.
I went to Prague .. because of the film.. some of the songs were shot there
lovely scene, tasha on top of the world. i find it sooo romantic and kissing in the car...awww. dutta leaving for UK a bit scary. long distance... dooriii sahi jaye naaa.
lets not forget being married to asoldier means being on the move all the time..

Nusupaaa I was reading rapture 54, meko darr lag gye.
Ham ne mera anatomy class leli, usko sab muscle pata hain.nuspa ye ham anatomy k teacher bhi ho sakti hain, who knows.kaise kar lati itne details, ap abhi jao woh jake padho, chapter 54 master of fate.I have exam tomorrow.abhi ek hi para darshan hue major k.aur dar laging ham se.
you should focus on your given task
Haan haan padhli main chapter 54, 55 sath mein. whattt!!!!!!!! this Khan got the sword of honor ? ye kya hain?all she did was drooling over dutta and annoying him with her stupidsa sawal, what special she did?u biaseddd hammie and bhatnagar bhi? like bharti di said, ye major k upar drool karneka koi faida to hote hain major gives extra marks.
😕😕😕
i know bart had a problem with kkkhan...😆
chapter 55:hehehehe chasing the wild goose yeah baaji rocks.no matter how much dutta tries to act smart baaji k nautanki k aage uska kuch nehi chalta. long live duji great jodi

tu mera hero o o o hero o o o her o o o to mera herooo.🤣
keep writing hammie.it was hilarious when AS told dutta to guess what she wants to say n dutta answers may b she wants to tell him that he has gained extra weight.😆 major sab ko jitne acchese army ka kam samajh ate, utne acchese nehi samajh ate aur kuch bhi. gadhaaa.
yeah... the simplicity of akrooo dutta love your emoticons tammy yaadah gaye

Chapter 56,
hammie hammie hammie, hahahahahaha kitnaaa funny chapter likhe apne, maza aa gye dutta not wanting to marry nakku so soon then nakku present in front of him baaji full nautanki behind all these nakku giving that look to dutta hayeee mera sher har gye sherni k samne n agreed finally. baaji ne purane adda me leke samjhaye hoga cupid baaji, nautanki baaji.
and the whole situation was sooo funny baaji stuck between their cute nok jhoks, mera maal kahi nehi jayega, se mera laptop kahi nehi jayega, ufff hammie u r too good, my favourite bikkis my bikkis se baaji hears my favourite bikinis. 🤣 haye hayeee ham ap jokes bhi kar leti ho yekin na ate.ahemmm...
hainnn? did i write this... must be going bananas
keep writing
keep writing
keep writing
don't beat people with chappals n sticks.
it has become a trend now Ham k stick😆
won't every strike you taz.. tere liye mere look hi kafi hai..
till we meet again... ooh and thanks for your interesting remarks... 😃 hammie

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#984

Hey hammie.. Feels great to read your comments.

Yaa yaa i too remember that hand to hand fight sequence as well as the BG music.. And nakus item number too.. Dutta and baji would surely had a cardiac arrest if they had seen her dance to that song🤣

And that tight slap across suresh's round soft cheeks.. 😆 The sound of slap had resounded in the room.. Oh.. What an attitude dutta had!! "Ya toh tu bohot himmat wala hai ya bohot bada bewakoof ke tune DSP ki patni ki jhoothi tasveer banake uspar ungli uthayi", remember almost every dialogue from that show..mish's voice modulation when dutta used to speak were superb.. Yaa two characters which are completely different from each other should not be compared.. But still i would say that for me.. Dutta stands out every test to be the strongest male lead ever on tv... The character of viplav is nothing for me.. No wonder why thousands of laagi fans had quit Ikrs and never bothered to look at ishq.. 6 years og Aradhana.. For 6 years i have been worshiping Playtime's LTL.. 😳

You know hammie recently i met a girl in chandranandini forum.. @shilpisona .. Noticing my earlier dp which had dutta in it, she had asked me whether i am a fan of laagi or not.. Even she admitted that she is still a great laagi fan but did not find ikrs to be interesting.. 😛

Again i met another person in IF some weeks back.. @beautiful. Even she said that too much kiss wiss between a 17 and 34 did not evoke much interest in her😆 and inspite of being a laagi/MR fan, she could not stick to ishq for long..

Baas hum dono dutta ka naam lete lete have completed watching full IKRS 🤣

We both have much patience in us. I must admit😆😆

Honestly hammie.. For me those extra cozy scenes were total bakwas🤢

There have been so many good romantic shows..recently i completed watching IPKKND.. i had watched many Ekta kapoor dramas too .. Kaunsa serial mein main story ko chodke romance, kiss and hugs pe zada concentrate karte hai, i dont know..

Anyway enough of bashing..

Your post is my post.. So just vented out my frustration.. Still unable to forgive IKRS..

Thanks hammie for such sweet replies .. You are too kind. 😳

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#985

Hammieee ahemmm,
chapter 57,58,59,60,61

u gave such a visual treat to all tasha fans, who could not see a proper wedding ceremony. u must have satisfy their thirst...👏👏👏 i felt like i was in the wedding, such beautifully u portrayed each and everything. i didnt know anything about maharastrian wedding and u never fail to surprise me with ur homework and brilliance.
the batchelor party, aheeemmm baaji nautanki and dutta drinking till they loss senses, girls, music and what not u mentioned.baji never let an stone unturned to make sure his bhao never misses anything.the two lads in the swimming pool drooling with daru k bottle was a hilarious thing. though i dont enjoy the alcohol consumption scenes, still i had to laugh at their condition.

Subh mangal saaabhdhaan ...ho gye.their first night was more hilarious.😆 nakku never fail to surprise me and i liked how dutta never forced himself on her. and the superb idea of jmm hammie ufff where u get all these ideas the public must have enjoyed it sooo much.even i loved the romance part and the final consummation. and here i fet like telling u hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie take a bow.this scene is something which u need to get cautious about.there is such a thin line between what looks natural going with the story and a po*n.and take a bow dear in no where i felt it was going that way. rather it went like all other romantic scenes. lakin readers pagal ho gye honge. i remember their consummation scene on laagi, mahi vij looked like a moron and...somehow it never could met the expectations of audience. here ou favourite writer satisfied her readers once again.👏

hmm duttaa nakku sometimes confuse me. Dutta is nowhere like the serialwala dutta who was a shy one. this dutta is very much human who knows what he wants and he knows how to get it.and obviously not in front of gharwales. bechari nakku, dutta demanding her to change clothes in front of him. She is not too willing then why is he even forcing , as he doesnt force... on the other hand kabhi kabhi ye samajh na ate nakku chahti kya hain.jab mile to bappa help...jab na mile to kyun na mile...she is sometimes the needy one sometimes the shy one.this is what i felt about their intimate scenes.their first kiss when nakku was so willing that dutta suspected her, in subsequent kisses nakku was shy and telling ap janoar and pushing him away oh bappa n all...as a reader i was just curious to know why u made them this way.i have seen how the readers were crazy for an ud from u. kabhi u r bz then they would make shor on ur thread.such a great bunch of readers and hammie to wrote for them, exactly what they needed.

ye baaji the nautanki invited khan, bhatnagar and other pupils.lol the song, to me was another hilarious scene.i dont know what they sang. but ... what about kkkhaan now? is she hurt wetting her pillows?

keep writing hammie. i read 5 chapters back to back cz u forced me to, i could not stop myself and come to comment here.i just had to satisfy my thirst as well.

Yaaahooo i finished another thread.

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#986

Edited by Titli_KK3148 - 8 years ago

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Wanderlust

@titli_314

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#987

Mishal's two ex heroines, our very favourite Mahhi with Sanjeeda.. in a recent function..

Mahhi has shared this pic just a day back.. on sanjeeda's birthday party I guess, 25th december 2016

And see this one.. Mishal Mahhi together on 25th dec 2016 party

hayeee.. i have nothing to say.. may god bless the butterfies in my stomach and the goosebumps too..😆 never expected to see Masha in a pic ever..and all thanks to sanjeeda for inviting both of them to her party

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#988

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YwfCMvo19s8[/YOUTUBE]

Hammie hammie hammie hamie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie hammieee

so u know now how much i loved ur chapter 62.
awesomeee
ye meri type k ud nikle to.
action dhinchak plus romanceee.ekdamse i remembered this song.
😳😳😳

nakku ko shadi k bad kya ho gye short circuit brain pe?yeto shadi se pehle besharm thi, shadi k baad sharmili ho gye, begair dutta se na sharmati, apne pati dutta se sharmane lagi...ahem i m still confused but yes then honeymoon suit part, gosh so R O M A N T I C. I L O V E D I T...👏 awww army camp mein chota bed nakku saying kaha soyenge hum and awww dutta taking her in his arms n telling her ... to rest on his chest,ahem ahem nuspa i know ur eyes r watching my moves but u know i m hopeless romantic apke chotiko ye saaab pasan.😆 ahem n bomb blast action dhishkiaaannn nakku bhag bhaag for cover bhaag...and when dutta feels safe, romance dubara suru bhi ho gye.though blv karneme brain na bolte k aisa situation mein achanak se dutta will give her ganpati pendant for muhdikhayi but... it was still cute n nakku , i though fail to blv if her mind is in right track, is giggling!!!yeah honeymoon suit aisa ho to pati ko to patni ka bohat kari khoti sunna chahiye, nakku yehri hain n she isnt acting normal ye to saab se do kadam age hi hain.she is enjoying !!!! and finally loved the way u ended, HAAN, KAHA THE HUM DONO...??hayeee.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#989

Hammie hammie hammie hammie hammie,.
end of one journey and beginning of another one. fettered affection next.the prologue is very captivating👏

I cant blv it is over.still i m in a shock.the last few chapters took me to a journey showing an ideal married life between the two, and pregnancy...the different phases, ur portrayal, extremely beautiful.i m sorry hammie i never wanted to make a single comment, u r at a fault, i loved the aftter marriage chapters so much that i forgot to comment i kept reading n kept reading.

i loved the way dutta took nakku along with him, giving her a virtual taste of being with him in the roads, in the museums, london's eye or something...the buildings...he is so romantic i must say. reminded me of the song jag ghumeya.

it was lovely to find another London baji Bradely. dutta missed his baaji so much.lovely bonding him n baji.

hainnn dutta ko hamesha koi na koi mil jata hain. Dutta kamar paralyzed karke ghar baithe to nakku mile, dutta teacher bane to khan mile, dutta uk gye to jane mile...hayeee.

dutta is such a caring husband i really loved him thoughout nakkus journey of being a mother.
Allah bless ur pen Hammie, u r sooo brilliant.i loved loved loved loved the epilogue. like father like daughter, full circle of life.

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simpleAnna

@simpleAnna

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#990

hello hammie, thanks for making me travel to a wonderful land of story telling, u returned the book worm self to me once again.i had difficulties with the language once, but gradually i got used to ur style n language n tabse basss maine khatam karke dam li hain.

Painful Rapture is not only a story, it is a lesson we learn and earn after finishing the whole of it, how an ideal life will b in our setting, with family, with love, with honesty, with respect, with understanding, with mercy, with desires...

The life of a fauji, a battle both inside and outside, separation from the loved one, bliss of reunion, sacrifices for country...very beautifully portrayed.

Dutta as a character was very different from the Dutta of LTL1.this dutta isnt shy, this dutta clearly knows what he wants and how to get it.this dutta is not an emotional fool, it is not possible to escape his sharp narrow eyes, nobody could give him dhoka.the PT-patient session between Tasha was a real treat in the beginning.dutta with his patriotism wins our heart.in some places i felt k romance portion thoda zyada ho gye , when i started reading comments from ur readers i came to know why is so, all of them were drooling of this young hot major saab. this was for great public demand, as in original story there was not scenes of much romance, not even a proper consummation scene, i was too irritated with that confused expression of the actress on the only scene.so here PR successfully fulfilled the public demands.

Dutta as a teacher, he made a great teacher...i have learnt how to teach.how to engage them in practical examples and motivate them...

nakku as a PT was terrific, i was too much surprised at the whole homework u did in developing characters...hammie u r such a dedicated writer.i lovethe way u take things. wish i could b like u, perfect. MashaAllah.

Baaji as a friend, kya kehna...most selfless character of PV, in the beginning he ws overshadowed by naku but gradually developed his character too.

in the end i want to share two songs with u, the flavour of PR...
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUtAfV2_3Kw[/YOUTUBE]
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G2YCYEwjmNk[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by simpleAnna - 8 years ago