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Posted: 9 years ago
Aree baap re..
Sigh and shy😳
Such wonderful creations.. 👏


Hammie, mein tereko goli mar dega..😆 U did not reply to my comment that is on the previous page..
Ghazni, go and check.. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simple2joy


hi taz.. iam lost in this world
Hammie my comment is on d previous comment I made ,please read it.I m reserving this comment of mine.will comment on next two chapters together.I dont want this thread to b locked.u stopped writing and if ikrs forum gets locked where will I comment ?
U better come up with something hammie please start a new story.
i did what i was meant to do... report write.. cannot deliever more.. besides writers like you and barbie are doing a superb job... as writers on ishq
Hammie hammie hammie I unres my comment on green eyed monster.Shakespeare again.fair is foul,foul is fair.lol.u know it by heart, dont u?same is with me when it is all about tagore n sharatchandra,d writer of devdas.I cant even remember how many times I have read sharatchandra.I guess I got my specs cz of these two.
thank o much for these cross references taz... most ueful
Romance romance and romance.hammie u truly r too much obsessed with d hairy chest of dutta.hahahahah.zyada ho gye to I remember anil kapoor. 😆.here comes d twist in tale ,tadaaa the antagonist comes and what an entry, harshad got an hair cut just like dutta.what is he upto?n nakku seems to b too close to him.aise coffe shops mein jayegi aur rumal puchegi to ladka rumal k jaga apna dil de baithegi waise she is extremely pretty.
i think i too was swept away by the wave of drooling over dutta like the rest of the then readers
Thank God dutta thik ho raha hain.baaji still d kabab mein haddi.iske timing itnaaa galath kyun hain?
glad you are enjoying the tale.. thanks for making the time.
Looking forward to read more.
Thanks for writing for us.
this was 6yrs ago taz.. the bubble has long since popped... times and readers preferences have changed..

Here is a dutta I made had bed ridden dutta in mind.thought of sharing it here.

this is so brilliant... his room ,his bed ,the scene is still etched in my soul... most befitting siggy for the chapter... hammie wishes to thank you joya for this moving siggy.. much love hammie



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

Hello hammie lion... hi barbsi got your reminder... humm this thread is utter disarry..

I must say tera baji is highly impressed.. LTL has always been the most special for me.. So anything related to naku and dutta, I will definitely love it more than anything else..
Just completed your OS, the string of pearls.. I had though to comment after I am done with wedding bliss too but could not resist myself from praising my dearest hammie..
thanks barbs,..thrilled to bits you read my past work...have to say you kept your word.. my mate..
Hmmm.. I am gradually discovering my bhau.. And I am loving this naughty side of your work.. Nakusha had turned a beast into a human, then into a loving and caring husband.. If mishal had stayed back in LTL1, dutta would have learnt doing romance too😳 lovely comment.. but not with mahi and Sanju...😛 he did that as VT..in Ishq..
LTL1 ended, but who can stop the imaginations of Tasha lovers??

on Ishq meeting you.. a lover of Laagi like me... gave me tremendous joy... barbs

I have completely enjoyed this OS, the string of pearls.. The start is wonderful.. How dutta wanted to have Naku in his arms..and take a shower together..wild thoughts were revolving around his mind😳😆 Naku blushing hard seeing her half clad husband after shower😳, then their shopping, kitchen scene.. All were very nice.. Loved this new dutta in your story..such a gentleman he is, the top gun of Patil wadi, who loves his wife beyond imagination.. The respect both has for each other and the right with which dutta, everytime, was trying to get close to Naku as if she belongs just to him and he has every right to do what ever he wants to do with her.. Their stealing glances during the party, having food and dancing on the dance floor..And yes their drive...how dutta urges to spend the whole night with his beloved in the back seat of the car ☺️ I have loved every bit of your story dear...
you... reminded me of all those times ,when the then readers were moaning about Mishal leaving like I did.. it was like a catharsis for me and the readers ..
And the dialogues which you have used, keeping in mind the accent of the people of laagi world, was perfect..
Like "ab bachcha nahin hai mein, mein tujhe khilayega and baji's dialogues like aap dono yaha solid date mar rahe ho".. I was completely lost in laagi dreamland for a while..
I felt had to capture the dialect and tone of Maharasthra to bring out the true essence of the characters..
Fantastic piece of writing hammie...
I must thank LTL1 for bringing out the writer in hammie...
thanks my dear barbji...proud of you for bringing out your excellent writing skills in the currently running FFon Ishq..👏... alsoo thanks for loving daya's siggies... knew you would be full of praise for them... much love titu...😉 my ishq barbji yours hamesha hammie..

Our tasha is magical and so was their story..the journey of a gangster and a maid..both met their salvation upon meeting each other.. Only laagi fans like you can understand what these stories on tasha do to my heart, when I read them..

Had read all the OS from LTL forum.. Short ones but all were dreamy.. Now I see many of those writers are not even active in IF.. People like us will never be able to keep the memories of LTL1 aside and move on..

Anyways.. I have typed a lamba chauda comment...and now I need to stop.. But bhau, mein tere ko nahin batayegi toh kise batayegi.. how much I love tasha and ur writing?? Who will understand??
Ok dear.. Byee for now.. Will come back to comment after I finish reading the wedding bliss..😳
Take care and always stay happy and blessed🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .iridescence.

Booo!
pappy..sharmillee tim,tim,baji... ooohhh those were the days ... 'course I remember daya... such is our bond you tailor made these for me... erhhh us...

Remember these...all made cuz of you😆





I just wanted to mark up your page😛 thanks for sharing so much joy with the rest of us.. these siggies still hold value for Laagi lovers tilll date... cheers mate... yours always hammie...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hammie hammie hammie,
On part 11.
The story is getting interesting more n more.champak to smart nikla.a smart move to bring drift in between two people is to add poison of suspicion .I loved d way u brought background music.so u made dutta drench in rain of love with d track guzarish... ur favourite song na u suggested me to make a vm on it so yeah I made one.ghanzni ko yaad nehi hoga shayed.
Is this heading towards a othello track ?hmmm.I love this dutta, he makes more sense than d serial wale dutta.n I loved d way he supported nakushas education and job.not every man can do it , especially where there r lustful eyes of people like harshad r around.
Keep writing for us.
N congratulations again for being a stunner.
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Posted: 9 years ago
"ch11: "cudgel thy brains" ⭐️ wow frm title till the last line of Datta's proposing Nakku ths chap is a masterpiece hammie.. superb.. that last scene in rain entangled beautifully like pearls within the passionate lines of song Guzarish.. hmm that's what MishSan rain scene must hav remind u n u want joy to made a one shot vm on ths song.. the way u crafted that scene of confession of nakku followed by Datta's proposal the whole feel was magical.. I got goosebumps while reading that scene ham it was extremely hot too...☺️

Champak loser is onli doing favours to TaSha till now.. his desperate measures hav onli bring them even more closer.. 😆 so now wat ... he proposed n their interactions going to be even more passionate I guess... can't wait to read the 12th..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hammie hammie hammie,
Another sizzling chapter.on chap 12.amazing to think U wrote it.this fauzi is getting hotter in every single chapter. Now d baarish guzarish scene k baad I didnt expect d same bheege bheege romance again but it seems there were too many girls to give u chaabi to write about that bheege bheege saari n duttas sudden arousal. 😆 .waise fauzi log bohat controlled hote hain he is not controlling shukar hain nakku k bappa,well how can naku even resist him I have no idea. Bwakuf aurat hamesha bappa ko bij me laati hain..
Enough of romance abhi action time.I loved d way it ended.naku taking care of dutta, it is very beautiful how after a day full of emotionak roller coster one takes shelter to d loved one and find peace.I feel this is d best thing about love. Love is not all about romance n flirting n dating n more than that...love is what stahs within u,when a tired bird returns to the nest,as there is a companion, to share n complain...thanks hammie for portraying this very beautifully,finally dutta sleeps like a baby.man kf golden heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hammie ...
Okkk nuspaaa so finally that kiss thing happened.ye padhlooo hammie kiaise kaise romantic diwlpgues marti hain: they both shook in rapture, today no music was needed, there warm erratic breathing was melody and their beating hearts was the cadence of the drums. 😳 😳 .
Laagi forum pe dhum mach gye hoga.
Dutta ,Iove this dutta, talks straight forward, never stretches things and moreover not much shy and dramabaz.I loved the WILL U MARRY ME?YES I WILL...no hesitation... 👏

Keep writing for us.all ur nakkus seems to b gori n pretty.havent read fettered affection and following the heart yet. Sometimes try writing for d koel naku, that naku may b a dhoka but there r koel nakkus among ur readers...there must b some.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chap 12:
Hammmie..☺️ that post guzarish extension reminds me of ths.. absolutely hot scintillating n raw.. it was penned brilliantly. .can't believe hammie u wrote that.. ye sab likhty thy tu.. a bit of commercialism bt man love the flow..

Then I jst love Datta standing on his own feet though with the help of crutches bt he standing tall on his own feet..a pride moment.. thoroughly enjoyed it..

Bt then comes the bitter part.. he was reminded of the bitter truth of his life in a most cruel way.. so many families without the guardian suddenly though datta took responsibility bt still ..n I hav felt the pain thru ur words..the msg sent brilliantly. .some strong writing,,, sketching the bitter picture in front of me.. yaken nahi aata ths was ur frst.. if I wud hav reading it then I wud hav adviced u to focus more on dark part rather then clich romance scenes.. ur writing jst amazes me while writing dark stuffs.. the fluency n naunces u bring in.. seedha dil tak gya..hats off..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NusiSg

"ch11: "cudgel thy brains" ⭐️ wow frm title till the last line of Datta's proposing Nakku ths chap is a masterpiece hammie.. superb.. that last scene in rain entangled beautifully like pearls within the passionate lines of song Guzarish.. hmm that's what MishSan rain scene must hav remind u n u want joy to made a one shot vm on ths song.. yes taz did a brill.. vm on mishan.. lovely song..
the way u crafted that scene of confession of nakku followed by Datta's proposal the whole feel was magical.. I got goosebumps while reading that scene ham it was extremely hot too...☺️ it was all the magic of the jodi.. and my spirit was passionate to hang on to tasha... boy we were hurt.. as mishal left...Nus.. pain usually brings out the soul into forefront... it was pain that made me deliver PR...

Champak loser is onli doing favours to TaSha till now.. his desperate measures hav onli bring them even more closer.. 😆 so now wat ... he proposed n their interactions going to be even more passionate I guess... can't wait to read the 12th..😉...so was the Laagi crowd.. kya din tha wo... my imagination was fertile.. readers interest wasa big push... thanks for a lovely feedback NUS..loved reading... much love always..hammie

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