Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III

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kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Flawless work...what an update...👏

Loving the subtlety in which Arnav and Khushi are re-connecting...and it's beautiful!

Looking forward to the next...

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AsA333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Your story always makes me so emotional... I genuinely smile and am really sad in various situations... Just love the story and how it is progressing... Cant wait to see what happens next...

You have such a special gift of writing so beautifully; only reflects of you as a person how wonderful you are in real life... I have so much respect for you and envy the real people around you who get to experience you as family, friend, colleague... Kudos to you; keep up the great work...

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Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Well worth the wait ! 😆

Your writing is flawless and the story spinning perfect !

Loved NKs nickname for Khushi ... Cutie !

Clever NK ... has realised that cupids arrow has found its mark in both A and K ...

without either being aware of it ...

Wonder what other emergency is making him call Arnav again and again besides

wondering where to take Khushi since Preeto seems to be out of town ...

Hope he hasn't taken her to Anjali's ! what with the mother heading there 😲

Thank you YB ...

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Hey folks, I know I said that I might post an addendum to Chapter 15, but I decided against it. I felt I was over-explaining my characters via the addendum and I know that it is annoying for a reader.

I am halfway done with the next chapter so hopefully I will post it this weekend. Really.

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: YellowBoots
Hey folks, I know I said that I might post an addendum to Chapter 15, but I decided against it. I felt I was over-explaining my characters via the addendum and I know that it is annoying for a reader.

I am halfway done with the next chapter so hopefully I will post it this weekend. Really.

Nothing you write is annoying to me and am sure to all fans of you and Tewari.. don't waste the addendum you have written..post it pleaseee ;-)

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Radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: sman

Nothing you write is annoying to me and am sure to all fans of you and Tewari.. don't waste the addendum you have written..post it pleaseee ;-)

Haha. Nooo.. I will then have to restart Chapter 16. I am too lazy to do that 😆

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Ong18

@Ong18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

fabulous update!

loving each and every corner and core of the updates!

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: YellowBoots
Hey folks, I know I said that I might post an addendum to Chapter 15, but I decided against it. I felt I was over-explaining my characters via the addendum and I know that it is annoying for a reader.

I am halfway done with the next chapter so hopefully I will post it this weekend. Really.

Regardless of which way you go with the next chapter and your approach to the story, I have a wish...to really know what Cutie Kumari Gupta is thinking...about a certain Arnav Singh Raizada in the deepest recesses of her heart. I want to be privvy to the secrets she has been hiding probably from even herself.

You are doing such a beautiful job at nuances. Neither Arnav nor Khushi are examining this relationship deeply for different reasons. They have almost a superficial acquaintance like interaction against the backdrop of their history and yet it is conveyed that there is something more.

I spend quite a bit of time looking for the clues here...so please please over explain their discovery of what they really feel when the time is right.

Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Anamika100

Regardless of which way you go with the next chapter and your approach to the story, I have a wish...to really know what Cutie Kumari Gupta is thinking...about a certain Arnav Singh Raizada in the deepest recesses of her heart. I want to be privvy to the secrets she has been hiding probably from even herself.

You are doing such a beautiful job at nuances. Neither Arnav nor Khushi are examining this relationship deeply for different reasons. They have almost a superficial acquaintance like interaction against the backdrop of their history and yet it is conveyed that there is something more.

I spend quite a bit of time looking for the clues here...so please please over explain their discovery of what they really feel when the time is right.

mera bhi same wish :-)