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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

great

so that is arjun itself

hope he remembers evrything tsoon

loved it piya

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

nice update
so he is our arjun
mrs chauhan transplanted his son's heart to him
ariya scene superb
again on the same hill? omg
i hope history won't repeat again
will arjun get his memory back?
update soon!

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

cliff hanger!!!!!😭😭😭

intrsting point pe rook diya nahiii😭

haha coming to update...it was awesome!!!!

so arjun is alive...!!!yipeee riya ka rjun zinda hai...!!!!

precap looks intrsting...!!!

aise aache point pe rok diya not fair...jaaldi next update padna hai mujhe plzzz

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

fantastic update :) loved it

so sikander is the one who is still attacking arjun

feeling bad for mrs. chauhan she lost her son :(

and she gave his son's heart to arjun

and arjun lost his memory

so that guy is arjun :) so happy

flashback was awesome

ariya scenes were lovely

hate sikander so much 😡

so arjun's sixth sense works :) interesting

finally they escaped from that place and arjun picked her up in his arms

how sweet he gave her his jacket

precap seems scary both of them are going to be at the same place

can't wait to read more

continue soon

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Thank u di..
It was an awesome updt.

Maine pehele k parts nahi padha bt dis part is really awesome..
Toh arjun ki memory loss hui thi n his mother dr.chauhan,
just loved her guts..
She ws awesome, she saved one life as well as she kept her son's heart always alive..

N now ariya movemevt is really awesome..
The flashback..
That bloody sik..
Aagggrrr
dono ko phasadiya..

Arjun n riya are in jungle..
Arjun gave his jacket to her.
N they are now in each others arms..

I hope arjun ko sab yaad aa jaye n then ariya forever..

Thank u.

N sorry fr late cmmnt.

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umamah70

@umamah70

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

wow...

loved it..

so he iz the real arjun...

nice precap...

update soon...

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sanalala1990

@sanalala1990

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

piyaaa... ur just amazing yaarrr u just made me feel so happy yaar itni achi story everything is so perfect loved it yaaar keep it up yaar u r just an extraordinary writer love u continue soon plzzz

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

memory loss with prediction of dabger intresting pm bhejna plzz

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

hey firstly so sorry for the late comment...!!

the updates were superb...!!!

yayyy he is arjun suryakant raute only

lovely choice of song...!!! ariya moments were very sweet

and fb was awsum...!!! ohh no that happened on their marriage day😭

arghh that sik😡 hate him to core hope arjun kills him...!!! and ariya are safe...!!

continue soon...!!! eagerly waiting for the next part...!!!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Thanks u so much guys for liking n leaving ur lvly comment...n sorry for making u wait ..so back with next part..hop u like..

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PART=13
"Tu kyun etani jaani pehchani se hai...mar ker bhi ye dil bus tujhe chahega.."

preacape-
ariya succesfuly run away from the hands of kidnapers n hide themself in one old wooden small house(that was in the midle of forest)
.
SCENCE-One couple is standing on the edge of cliff...
they looked litle scared..
one man is laughing evily on them,he holding one gun in his hand..
man shouted pointing gun toward the couple,
.
kitana achha lag raha hai,tumhen phir se mout
(dead end) ke monh main khada dekh ker,
.
Aaj phir se tere pass do option hain,khud ko bachayega ya phir se apni mehboba ko..
(he again laughed) ha ..ha.. ha ...
.
one gun shout..
boy shouted..nooo...
boy comes in mid n both fall down the cliff..
.
Riyaaa one screamed..
--
Arjun woke up with sleep
(It was mid night)
he saw one horrible dreams ..nooo no not dreams it was future coming future..
.
Finaly that time he succesful to recognised the face of couple..
that vision arjun saw every night..but he fail to recognised the face of couple..
but today he clearly saw him n riya both falling down the cliff..that was their future vision..
according to his vision very soon both gona be died..
.
(that was the main reasion ofarjun arival in mombai..
he wanna to save those couple,
but he dont know every think is connected with him,
Thats why he feel some atraction toward the couple)
.
arjun feel litle safocation in the air,
he wiped his face,n wanna to get up but he feel litle wait on him..
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On the other-
CHOUHAAN HOUSE-
Now rathore knows every think..arjun is non other then his best frs ..riya's lv ,
but he didnt told anything about arjun to mr n mrs chouhaan.
Mrs ch-Mr ch i dont

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago