SwaRon OS-Joining the broken pieces of heart?part3

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Sneha

@-Snehaa-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Amazing :)

Update d next one soon. :)

And i really really hope that Swayam listens to her.

Edited by damonelena - 13 years ago

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Hey i thot d 1st update ws d end bt i m glad u continued!!! Very nyc update indeed!!! Hope all turns out 2 b wel in the third update!!! Lukng fwd to it!!! Update sun nd plz pm me!!!

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Awessome Update! 👏

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Awessome Update! 👏

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

First thanks for continuing this OS. This is amazingly written and I loved open ended story but its good to see how you would have continued it.

Now coming to this update. It was just adorable. Swayam and Rey's mom part was just too good. But it was SwaRon part that was beyond this worls. It was beautifully written. And all those emotions that they both were feeling was just superbly penned down. Last part was but saddening but kind of expected. Waiting to read the next part.

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

awesm update, both r in pain,so sad

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Rutu thanks thanks a million but a request yaha se stop maat karna plzzz, swayam walking away from sharon 😭 aise maat karooo.

wo sab chodo, it is a splendidly awesome update. There is nothing new in that becoz you are do that always it is you habit to give us always the best. Aww Rey mom is super sweet and rey the best bud one can ever have. The best part of this update was in the reharsal hall when swayam fell down sharon kept her hand under his head 😍 Yaar When swayam went away, i wanted to scream at sharon to go behind him make him understand in her full on diva mode.But i think love makes you mushy, it makes the strong weak and weak strong. Rutu You are a fab writer. Hats off to you.

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

glad u continued
outstanding...

Tnx for the pm

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TANHA_H

@TANHA_H

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Awessome Update!

pls continue! :)

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

OMG!

ok everything was beautiful !!
from the begining til the last !!
the Eye contact wid sharon and swayam !! :OO
CLOUD 9!!
Oh god!!
how cud dis be??
why is swayam talking "Der can be no US"!!
whyyy???
:(
Update ASAP!!
i really wana knw wats next!! :D